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Reviews for Even Better Raw

By : LauraDoll
  • From ANON - Crazy4Pirates on March 12, 2004
    one of the best i've ever read. . . . . . PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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  • From ANON - acid_bath on August 24, 2003
    hey very cool story!
    i like the scenarios u put them in and the food has a lot of kintenttential!
    keep up the great work!!!


    ^__^

    and pls update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kiristeen on July 20, 2003
    LOL, this was delightful! : )

    Kiri

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  • From ANON - Valentine on May 18, 2003
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!! GREAT Story.
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  • From ANON - Morgana on May 17, 2003
    Please tell me that there is going to be more of this story.I'm hooked.It is very good.A++++++++++++++ Awesome :O)
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  • From ANON - Dusty on April 20, 2003
    What? That's it?!

    Well it was delicious as it was...even if it was faaaar too short for my liking.

    Please continue? ::sad puppy face::
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  • From ANON - Ashley on January 02, 2003
    Ooooh! This is so good! Hurry and add more!
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  • From ANON - red_fanngirl on December 30, 2002
    wow, I'm amazed at how nicely you worked the sensuality across the story. The pauses, the interleaving of dialogue.... everything was very well done.
    I really hope you continue this story. Well Done!
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  • From ANON - Lunadeath on December 22, 2002
    oooo... i really don't know what to say usually with ones that i really like. you have a really nice way of writing and i love the way you have Harry and Draco interact together. it's so believeable! More soon i hope!
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  • From ANON - ........................... on December 21, 2002
    Wow! I like ur stry so far, please continue!!!!
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  • From on December 21, 2002
    Oh, delicious!
    I like your intelligent Draco very much; the whole reasoning behind him leaving the dark side makes beautifully neat sense.
    But... you can't end it there. You just can't! I mean, great foreplay, but where's the main event? ;-)
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  • From ANON - TigerBlak on December 18, 2002
    That was just cruel...put up an awesome story about harry and draco...full of slashy goodness and then, leave the reader hanging...it's just not right. How could you do this to me...(takes out wand and points it at writer) now be a good little writer and post the next chapter...k?

    Laterz
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