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Reviews for Secretly Slytherin

By : Veresna
  • From ANON - Sanjana on August 29, 2005
    first of all, your fanfic is wonderful. i love the way you keep snape as close to the books as possible ;) but i have a question. is it just me or do chapter 17 and 18 have the same content?! i miss the 18th chapter, when helena and snape return to his rooms. or maybe its just my computer which doesnt show it?!
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  • From ANON - Ennariam2010 on August 28, 2005
    I love your stories. You create the perfect Snape. Absolutely irresistable. Now if I could please accio a man like that to me I would be perfectly content for the rest of my life. Of couse, that is if he stays kinky like me. lol. In the end I loved the story and do hope that reading this story so late since it was written that the sequel has already been created. Thank you for your time in writing this.
    Enna
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  • From ANON - jkk on August 27, 2005
    Hey Veresna,
    I
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  • From ANON - Belinda on August 26, 2005
    Hey that was really really good! I hope you will make a sequel. It was most enjoyable to read :)
    Any ideas if and when you will make a sequel?
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  • From ANON - hodas on August 16, 2005
    hey!! get on with the story!! it's really good!!
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  • From ANON - Octavia on August 14, 2005
    I loved this story. LOVED it. First off, it was a pleasure to read something that didnt involve Granger (not that i dislike her, but you would think she the only intelligent female at Howarts). I also enjoyed the fact that you made use of the other houses. I have often thought that Ravenclaw was little used in the wake of the Gyriffindor/Slytherin competition. Hello, other people go to the school besides the golden trio. I really liked the fact you took advantage of this to create a character who was living just as exciting a life, but who wasnt even on their radar. And it was nice to see Dumbledore have a relationship with a student outside of Harry.

    Your portrayal of Snape was marvelous. I started reading this story with some trepidation--given all your warnings at the beginning--but I found that your made him true to form--as he is. His motivations may not always be pure, and he is jealous, insecure, and occasionally a real rat bastard--but thats exactly why we love him. Because he does protect those weaker than himself, he does have heart under all his defenses, and ultimately, he does do the right thing, even if he has to take a roundabout route to get there. Too often in other stories, the author starts him off as he his, but then caves in under the sudden emotional release they give him, and he becomes a simpering lovestuck goober who is mushy and gushy. Not your Severus. You clearly and cohesively maintained his character throughout the 43! chapters, as well as the story line. And I really like Helena as well. I identified with her and was charmed. I liked her spunk and ability to give back to Snape as good as she got. Really excellent character. Excellent work.

    This was a great pleasure to read, and I am really lookign forward to reading a sequel, if there is one, or anything else you write for that matter. If you have any more Severus Snape stores, please direct me to them, as I am most eager to devour him! No puns intended...or maybe just one! All best, Octavia
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  • From ANON - Jose on August 13, 2005
    Again a very good story to read. Keeps you interested for all 40 chapters and still wanting more.
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  • From ANON - KMM on August 12, 2005
    Bravo! I enjoyed this so much that I got absolutely nothing accomplished after I started reading this morning...I had to keep on reading to see what happened next! And you managed to make even this old married gal blush throughout ~ and that takes some doing!! I look forward to any future installments.
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  • From ANON - Hippiekitten on August 01, 2005
    Absolutly the best Snape fiction that I have ever read! I read it basically all in one sitting, it was so addictive. And your character of Helena was EXCELENT! I am eagerly awaiting your sequel! Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Aneris on July 22, 2005
    Hi just finished reading Secretly Slytherin and Don't lie to me and i thought that they were both fantastic stories, i loved the way you wrote Snape, i thought he was very true to character but you managed to show a softer side to him too which i'm sure he has under all that resentment and sneering :) Are you still planning to write a sequel? I hope so as i can't wait to hear more about Snape and Helena.

    Thanks two great stories

    Aneris
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  • From ANON - Pommery on July 14, 2005
    Just finished reading the final chapter; I got to chapter 29 last night before being too tired to carry on reading, and had to satisfy myself by shouting "Snape you utter bastard!" at the screen!
    Excellently written, and great plot. I do look forward to you writing some more :)
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  • From ANON - angelnemesis on July 07, 2005
    This whole story was truly amazing. I can't wait to read more. You've done a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. :)
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on June 28, 2005
    Thank you! It was such a pleasure reading both "Don't Lie to Me" and "Secretly Slytherin". I can't tell you how nice it is to read about Severus with someone other than Granger. I've never found that pairing particularly believable no matter the scenario. Your stories are well written with excellent plot and character development (and just enough smut to keep it interesting). Snape, in particular, is very well done. You have captured the Snape we all know and love and revealed the depth we all knew was hiding behind that sarcastic, caustic exterior. Please continue writing. You are talented and your writing a true joy to peruse. Kimberly
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  • From ANON - Loz on June 05, 2005
    OMG, this is the most inspirational peice of work i have ever read! I have been glued to my computer screen till one oclock in the morning! Your story line plots are brilliant, and fresh, and the sex, well...thats just an added bonus lol. Truly keep writing, i ll die if you dont i was motofied when it eneded simply at new yrs eve. You should amplfy the new side to the Grandmothr i feel she'll come through for helena when the time is right. Seriously keep more stories coming i dont know what ill do with my time if you dont,lol. Get in touch @myway.com
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  • From ANON - Snowowl on May 12, 2005
    Personally, I find this fanfiction extremly well written. The words and sentences expresses the moods, feelings, characters and simply everything extremly well, and so far I haven't even lost my intrest for a second :)
    I can safely say I'm pretty much addicted to this one ^_^
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