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Reviews for The Fortress Within

By : idarakowsky
  • From ANON - slytheringriffendor21 on August 01, 2003
    Awsome story! I loved it. It had everything. Romance, action, angist, sadness. Everything! You are so very talented. You are also very passionate in your writing. keep up all of your talented writing.
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  • From ANON - Florence Weasley Snape on July 30, 2003
    I really k yok your story is very good;... it's very long, but very good indeed.

    A side never explored by fanfiction authors...
    great job.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on May 31, 2003
    That was so beautiful..

    I was brought to tears more than once during this one..

    It was so elaborate and well thought out..intricate details and such make writing good writing. The balance between dispair and happiness made their relationship so real..it wasn't all sex and romance and glee like some stories are.

    I enjoyed your story very much..Snape and Hermione being my favorite couple, I search for stories featuring them all the time. I'm happy that I found yours!

    Thanks for writing it. You've brought me happiness, lol.


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  • From ANON - Thirza Flamethorn on May 13, 2003
    I thought this was one of the best fanfics I'd ever read, up until Hermione got pregnant. The very idea of pregnancy repulses me and to see it inflicted on Hermione is absoly dly disgusting, not to mention it seems like a cheap escape into cliche, as if you couldn't think of what to do next.
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  • From ANON - Kat on March 17, 2003
    BRAVO!!!!!! This was absolutly awesome!


    Kat
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on February 02, 2003
    Thank you for such a wonderful story, I really loved it. I hope that you will consider writing another story sometime soon, you have a real talent. Congratulations and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Mystic Rains on February 01, 2003
    I remember reading this when it was just on it's 3rd chapter. It's come so far in such a short time. It's truly amazing. The only thing I'm curious is why the first sentence repeats itself twice in the chapters. I know it sounds completely silly, but I can't help but ask. Anyways, boy does birth really does sound horrible. Now I know I really don't want a child. Okay okay, I'm straying off the topic. All I really wanted to say is that I really enjoyed it. You are a wonderful writer and a real crowd pleaser. I wish you the best.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on January 31, 2003
    *Cries* That was sooo beautiful. In all seriousness, have you ever tried to get anything published? I think that you really could. If you could think up a plot for an original piece you could get it published! You write really well and convincingly. This story is really moving and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'll definately be looking out for any more of your work *Hint hint hint* :D
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  • From ANON - alanfan on January 29, 2003
    wonderful i am really enjoying the story. nice to see snape as a family man makes a change to see him in that light.
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  • From ANON - Jessica Chang on January 27, 2003
    AHHH,, there has to be more to this!!!I love this story and was wandering if you could possibly e-mail me at changjessica2x5@yahoo.com when you put out more.I understand completely if this is an inconveniennd hnd hope to here from you soon.If not I will just check back and look for the updates periodically.
    Again this is a great story and I hope that you continue AND SOON!!!!
    ja ne ,
    Jessica Chang


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  • From ANON - Auroress 13 on January 26, 2003
    I don't know f this is the end, but I would like to congradualate you on a story well done! Wow, this story deserves a spot on "The best Harry Potter Fanfiction of all time", near Riley, and all the other fanfiction greats like cassandra claire. This story was a beautiful masterpeice.

    Auroress 13
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on January 25, 2003
    I am currently on the edge of my seat wondering how things aring ing to turn out!!!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment of this brilliant story.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on January 21, 2003
    This is so sad! Poor Severus, I really feel for him. The way you've writtien this expresses eons ons so well. I was nearly crying as I read these last few chapters. Please let this have a happy ending. I'll keep my fingers crossed.
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on January 20, 2003
    Excellent story, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. By the way, who is the author of the beautiful poem you used in chapter 10?
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  • From ANON - Aefi on January 16, 2003
    Please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE write some more of this wonderful story soon! I love it, it is one of the best HG/SS fics I have ever read. The writing style is superb, the plot is well though out and there is a nice dose of smut too! What more could a fanfic reader ask for??? *big thumbs up for The Fortress Within*
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