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Reviews for Devotion

By : CJMay
  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    Oh, and I absolutely love threesomes...well, when they are well done as this one is. Please, may I have some more?

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    Very nice. Sweet and sentimental, but interesting, a bit funny and wicked as well. And very sexy.

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  • From ANON - Rhelle on September 20, 2005
    I had to look all over for a way to review this fic @_@ However, I'm absolutely in love with it, and you've made me really adore this pairing.

    Awesome fic. Just awesome.
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  • From ANON - Els on July 17, 2005
    Awwwwwwww! *wants more Harry/Draco/Severus*

    Not too sappy at all - just a perfect little cloud of fluff. Awwwwness incarnate.

    The Harry/Draco relationship was perfection. The competition-thing rocked! *huge thumbs-up*

    You'll write more HP-threesomes, right? *tries bambieyes, but proceeds to bribery by means of chocolate and naked men when simple pleading does not work*
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  • From FatalSuccubus on February 20, 2005
    Love the story, absolutely droolworthy. You're great at writing, and the smut was delicious. I couldn't take my eyes off the screen. A great story, thanks for writing it for me ^.^ DO THE MOO, love ya!
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  • From ANON - cmere on July 22, 2004
    ooooo i LOVED this! snape/harry/draco is simply my favorite thing ever and you wrote them very well. i loved the competitiveness between harry and draco. everything was just fabulous (except maybe all of harrys best friends dead) and i loved it loved it loved it.
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  • From ANON - mikochef22 on May 15, 2003
    Okay, um well that was just so ..... beautiful, lovely, heart-warming, and SEXY AS HELL!!(hehehe) I was mad for a second that almost everyone died, but I understood at the end that it was a necessary evil to get the final point across. Please keep up the good work and a very very heart-felt Thank You Very Much ;)
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  • From ANON - A fan of yours and Hp and the other fanfics on March 31, 2003
    THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! YOU SHOULD WRITE MOREOF THEM LIKE THIS FOR HP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Gill on February 18, 2003
    I've read quite a few of your fics - and like them! God only knows why I like the slash fics - I guess they make a refreshing change from the SS/HG ones I often enjoy! Keep it going - don't be too concerned about them being OOC. Let's face it - they're already OOC compared to JKR's versions of them!! The power's in the pen (or keyboard). You can make them whatever you want them to be and suckers like me will read!! Of course, the more in character they are, the more familiar they are, but who knows what goes on after the watershed?!!
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  • From ANON - mtang on January 30, 2003
    What a lovely 'little' story. Very well written and with all the backstory, you made this threesome very believable (beliefable?).
    You mixed a bit of everything in this story: angst, romance, h&c. Very well balanced and in character.
    Thank you and keep writing.

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  • From ANON - Netjaymz on January 29, 2003
    Excellent job on the threesome.. I like the way you grew the relationship over the years w/o over taxing the piece it was a strong heart felt PWP.. I liked it !!!!!! and the Sex was just HOT HOT HOT... of course how can you not love the three of them togthere Excellent job.

    I would have someone look it over or possible let it sit and you do it but there are several typos and missed tenses. But over all well done

    Peace
    Net
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