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Reviews for Closer

By : pixiezombie
  • From ANON - Bambu on February 17, 2004
    This is in a word: brilliant. Superbly n chn characters, building on what one knows from canon, and extrapolated to a logical conclusion. The heartache is poignant and the underlying tenderness to their coupling is remarkably moving. Your erotica is simply that, erotic. You are single-handedly (well I imagine you type with two hands, but it's the phrase) the reason I've been drawn to the Draco/Hermione pairing. The Romeo&Juliet reenactments are not nearly as satisfying as this entire piece of work.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on October 20, 2003
    I really like this story... If only it would continue...
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  • From ANON - Jada on October 13, 2003
    I know I've read this before, and if I've already said so, then bear with me because it is worth repeating. This story is so hot, so two-wrongs-make-a-right, if that makes sense, so really intensely wonderful. I love it. I'm definitely going to seek our more fic by you just to have the privilege of reading the good stuff. Thanks very much for sharing your talent!
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  • From ANON - credu on September 06, 2003
    erotic but sad. there's a desperate hint of melancholy but it suited your theme. :)
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  • From ANON - credu on September 06, 2003
    erotic but sad. there's a desperate hint of melancholy but it suited your theme. :)
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  • From ANON - Gwen on July 20, 2003
    Much too lazy to sign in-- actually have forgotten pen name... anyway, GREAT story. Very tragic. Nicely written! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Persephone on July 16, 2003
    That was indeed excellent!
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on July 02, 2003
    This is the second time I'm reading Closer, and I remembered that this is something that struck me the first time I read it. The fipartpart of Closer focussed so greatly on Draco that Hermione's character was so silent. It impacted me because as a reader, I don't know why she's there, or her motivation. I only understand the motivations of Draco and his very great desperation.

    As the story unfolds, we see a meeting point and then an exchange of character pov. Now we understand how the story came to be; how Hermione found and rescued him. The mirror of their story is good use of plot structure, as it also mirrors their need for each other.
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  • From ANON - emma on June 14, 2003
    good story. pls update soon. cant wait to read what heppens next!! grrrrrrrreat job.
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  • From ANON - Campy Capybara on May 26, 2003
    Extremely well-written. Very skilful use of the erotic genre to tell a story. Not quite a Porn-Without-Plot, but there is a redemptive quality in the fic that sets your story apart from the usual excuse to write smut.
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  • From ANON - Stephanee on April 16, 2003
    Props on the story, but what kind of freakin insane song was that? The one about animal fucking?
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  • From ANON - Ifalna on March 18, 2003
    Wonderful! Romantic, sensual and sexy... just the way an erotic story shobe. be. :) And of course you scored extra points just for using my favorite NIN song.
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  • From ANON - jenn on March 10, 2003
    first of all, i absolutely love that song by nin. i think its definitely one of the better trent reznor ever wrote, outside of his entire first cd.

    moving on from that, your story was absolutely amazing. im usually not big into emotional trauma, but you almost forced tears to my eyes. i could feel dracos deadness and that was really f***ing intense. i adored the fluffy ending of love, but it fit so damn well. absolutely amazing.
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