Reviews for Laid

BY : Sal


  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2003

    Beautiful ending.


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  • From ANON - GSYH on March 28, 2003

    Wow! Very in depth, not the pure smut that I expect on this site, but dark and haunting. I like how detailed you made this piece, and how Snape finds beauty wherever it is found, movements of Quidditch and curves of that bar lady. Strangely I found myself sharing his POV, I tried to find beauty in everything.

    Whenever I see someone or something that looks bad, I'll automatically readjust them in my mind. Stretch by 4 inches, waist close in, hair longer...it's automatic now. My current model of perfect girl is Nicole Kidman, she had really kept up well.

    As for the line that this is one relationship from which neither would emerge unhurt, does this imply a sequel? Don't write one unless you feel like it though, I like how it ended, with much room for speculation.

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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2003

    Really great!!

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