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By : lightgoddess
  • From ANON - amberanime on January 13, 2007
    I LOVE IT
    ITS SO AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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  • From iamhughpym on September 29, 2006
    Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on August 21, 2006
    well yum!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 30, 2006
    See...this story is a perfect example of why the story Biding his time could end in a beautiful sharing relationship. Awesome job! No jealousy, no bs, just loving sex. Love it!
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  • From Bargle5 on January 29, 2006
    Oops, forgot to mention I see you incorporated the title of my avatar in your title. Nice touch. Thank you!
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  • From Bargle5 on January 29, 2006
    My only complaint is that I would have liked to know more of what was going through the character's minds. Otherwise nicely done. Meets all the requirements. Good job.
    Technical thing: Towards the end there's a typo. You've got 'though' where you seem to mean 'thought'.
    I get those myself. No how many times I proofread a fic and get it betaed, there always seems to be typos. Sigh. :-)
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