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Reviews for The Apprentice\'s Second

By : Trewyn
  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on July 13, 2008
    I like this. Please continue?? ^_^
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  • From Snarrylover on April 07, 2007
    or, you could let is stay a one-shot. it does really well on its own too.
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  • From Snarrylover on April 07, 2007
    OMG. please do continue. this is really, really interesting. there's so much you can do with this story. lucius is such a bastard *smacks him with his own cane*. sev seem perfect. he's definately IC. please dont leave this one *begs*

    are they really master and apprentice, or were you making a comparison? if he is an apprentice, i dont think he would be underage.

    excellent job, cheers
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on August 05, 2006
    Brilliant while it lasted :)
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  • From Siarra on July 11, 2006
    I have to say right now that I'm stunned speechless. This story is a masterpiece!
    It's definitely an insight piece and a great one at that. It's thoughtful, sensul and extremely seductive. I don't think I've ever seen such an awe inspiring first person point of view. The characterization is brilliant, from Snape's strong presence to the almost philosophical content of Draco's thoughts. The general mood of the story was utterly captivating, and the way you left off was great. I can't decide whether I want to see this left as it is, or would a sequel manage to carry on its legacy. We all know that continuation is risky business.
    Unfortunately I can't praise this story enought to do it justice, but this a most memorable piece and will always be one of my favourites.

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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2006
    The story definately has potintial. Would love to see where this could go.
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  • From ANON - Lhune on July 03, 2006
    Hah, you don't need my e-mail I hope?

    About this fic, that I finally read after all this time (shame on me, I know)
    I loved it very much!
    The talk about Severus' name (heh, great name o-0)
    The description of Draco's thoughts, what's the difference between Fear and Anticipation?
    Is there a difference at all?
    (The scariest thing is that he -you- were right! It's worth to start thinking about that)

    This really deserves another chapter,
    ...
    though it id a great one-shot too...
    So I don't know.
    Anyway, please let me know if you decide to conrinue it.

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  • From ANON - Ras on April 29, 2006
    Your story is very interesting. I would be interested in reading more. I'm particularly interested in seeing how you portray Severus. How does he feel towards Draco? and Lucius? It's worth continuing.
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  • From RyuaAlba on April 26, 2006
    Oooh, pretty please with a belgian chocolate? I guess that would deserve a review maybe...
    I enjoyed it. Not as explicit as most of the things on the site, but well written anyway. I think it does have potential, but you could also just leave it like this, a tantalizing glimpse into the world of the purebloods...
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  • From SilverWingsofDemon on April 25, 2006
    Uhu...
    I think I already gave my humble opinion about this wonderfull story. And if I didn't, well, I guess you already know what I am about to say. I so love it!! It's really good!
    But, if I were you, I would leave this a one-shot... It has something... Something special, that makes it overbodig (can't find the word...:s) to write other chapters. I think it's fantastic on its own... But, of course, that's only my opinion... If you, and other reviewers think you should continue this, I will whole heartly read the next chapters... :) (I'm not saying that you can't continue this... Mind you...:p)
    Hugies
    K
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  • From ANON - mnfm on April 19, 2006
    Very good. Please continue the story!
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