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Reviews for A Chance at Happiness

By : Vampirezdarkgurl
  • From lacuselda on January 12, 2008
    It's quite good so far. Although I think there's not enough of emotion going between Lucius, Severus and Harry. To be told the truth I think Harry would rather prefer a little bit more of his freedom and doesn't want to tie himself to his two fathers quite yet. And that Harry's both fathers should be more desperate with Harry's aloofness. After all he is the son of their beloved mate. So wouldn't they want him desperately? It just doesn't feel real enough. Although I'm not saying it's bad. Because you write wonderfully. Thanks for the chapter. I hope I didn't gloom you with my review.
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  • From dracoharry4life on January 11, 2008
    This is different. I normally like Harry/Draco, but I guess they are going to be half brothers?
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 11, 2008
    Very nice two updates. It was nice that Harry didnt get mad at them and he is accepting it quite well. I kinda get the feeling that the potion is some kind of love potion that Lily used on James. This is really getting interesting

    Update again soon
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  • From alma on January 10, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on January 10, 2008
    Yay, Harry met his daddies.
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  • From alma on January 10, 2008
    Good chapter. Harry does need clothes.
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  • From on January 10, 2008
    i love it
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  • From on January 10, 2008
    I like this story and would like updates on it at poohnation74@yahoo.com.
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  • From dino1 on January 08, 2008
    Really like your story. Please update soon.
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  • From on January 08, 2008
    please let him find james. i love it
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  • From ANON - hellfire1202 on January 08, 2008
    hey

    i think this story is great
    i
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  • From LadyNiteRaven on January 07, 2008
    Very nice. More Please =0)
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  • From ANON - Andrea on January 07, 2008
    Good story! The twist has something to do with his eyes, doesn't it?
    I'm not sure if you have a beta, and don't get me wrong, you've done a beautiful job with it already,but I was wondering if you needed one. I've been without a betaing job for some time, and I've decided I need something to beta. I scored 81% on Perfect Imagination's Beta Accreditation Test.
    I was also wondering if you could send me a notification e-mail.
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  • From ANON - Jenova180 on January 07, 2008
    this sounds really good. i cant wait until the next chapter!!!!!
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  • From LoraKat on January 07, 2008
    Love it. Please update soon. Can't wait to find out about James.

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