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Reviews for Time Changes All Things: Now Complete

By : ssdawn
  • From Sherlocked1971 on July 20, 2015
    Sirius to the rescue. I think it was a bit which him losing faith in Dumbledore. Maybe you could have spend more time panning that one out.


    Hermione and Tom are so hot together. I don't want Voldemort dead.... Sick huh?!
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on July 12, 2015
    Hiya, I'm glad you like my reviews. There are a few stories on this site I really enjoy, this one of them. Somehow my reviews are not that detailed or in depth, I imagine English being a second language does that.
    Sad to hear the story is winding towards an end.

    I feel your first chapters with Hermione transformation had been formidable I like your narrative skills I can picture your characters and decor in my mind.

    I do wonder why Dumbledore (whome I loath maybe as much as You do)is up to letting them have their attack plans.
    The Lily/James situation is difficult I van imagine. And who will Hermione's baby grow up to be....
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on July 06, 2015
    Well Voldemorts possessiveness with Hermione is so hot!

    Lily is right to be angry with James, Dumbledore is the culprit as well.

    Ook and James showing some lust for his wife also hot!
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  • From ANON - Glo on June 06, 2015
    I have been quietly reading your book for the past couple weeks, I must admit I am quite enthralled by it and I am at the point where I must speak. I am literally obsessed with this story. I have Siri read it to me when I drive to and from work every day. It is riveting! You are enchanting! The quality here is so obvious. In the beginning you mastered the hook and kept my attention when I have never enjoyed het or this pairing, captured their poisoned unhealthy love and that way it is inescapable, and the fact that even in darkness and opposition, she loved still! Yes! It is so complex! You are an artist.

    I mean FUCK I just want to write poetry about this story, but you already did when you wrote the story!
    It is just SO good! Just, THANK YOU.

    And listen, when Harry was born you made it genuine, perfect; and I cried.
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  • From ANON - Mc111 on June 01, 2015
    Another great chapter!
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on May 31, 2015
    Ouch!! Scorching! Very much so. I could just imagine an incredibly angry frustrated Hermione, trying to rile up Tom. They are going to have so much fun making up. Please provide us with details.

    Wondering about Lucius, he must've smirked .

    Still wondering what made James lash out...
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  • From ANON - shatakshi singla on May 31, 2015
    One of the bestest tomione that I am following.. Please complete it asap...dying to read it's end!!!

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  • From ANON - mc111 on May 29, 2015
    Love ,love this story!! I cam so very anxious for more !! Loved the sex between Sirius and lily. I think James on the team to kill Thomas whether he knows it or not! When you have time, please update. Fan fiction is a great indulgent for my stressful life. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Mc111 on May 29, 2015
    Getting nervous..was it Severus watching them?
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  • From ANON - Mc111 on May 29, 2015
    Love this! Love her with Tom! The chemistry is so amazing between these two. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on April 27, 2015
    Ah no need for apologies, when Sirius and Lily tell you to write this down then you are obliged to do so. ;0)

    Sometimes you as a writer need to coerce them into the right direction and sometimes the characters tell you what to write. Lily and Sirius were bursting with this. Combustion is the answer to all.

    I was writing chapter 21 of my fic show me how to and words came flowing out of my iPad. Not trying to plug my story here just saying I can relate.

    Oh and Tom and Hermione!!!!! *squeals* *tingling with anticipation*
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2015
    I'm transfixed on this story, you have a tremendous talent! Please never abandon it I'll be checking in incessantly for updates! James is awful, and yes, he's at par in my books with dumbledore. Please have tom turn around in the end, to some degree and show some of the mercy we know that's in him! Also, obviously, spare Harry Hermoine Thomas and lily. (Duh, I know) but really I'm invested so it had to be said!!
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on April 19, 2015
    Maybe James is on edge, but something must be seriously wrong fundamentally with him to be nearly raping his wife. It's not from being on edge. Violating your wife like this is something else. Even when drunk.
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on April 12, 2015
    Aw Tom is so sweet, protecting his woman against herself.... Well almost...if he had not been the Dark Lord....trying to kill Lily and Harry....

    Well kill Dumbledore in stead... The old git.
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on March 18, 2015
    Dun, dun, dunnnn.

    Clifhanger tune.

    Where's Tom? He is so heavily into keeping Herminie clear from his plans...
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