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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From caseyjarryn on March 26, 2009
    yay they made it!!
    update soon please!
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  • From chickaboo on March 25, 2009
    Really this story just keeps getting better and better. I'm on the edge of my seat!
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  • From margaritama on March 25, 2009
    rawr - Draco went native on these bastards...yeah. love how he protected Hermione and called her his woman.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2009
    My goodness, you went and sneaked in 3 more chapters, totally delish chapters at that. All that action, my goodness, I don't know whether I am still fighting off the Trackers, getting flung out of a skiff and flailing down the rapids or floating in and out of consciousness in a feverish haze giving out all these wonderful clues without really answering any questions. Love, love, love that through all his self doubt and loathing Draco kept fighting through his troubles, kept thinking 'what would Hermione do' and just kept on going. And I felt sad too that he had all these skills and not one of them (until the very end) was of any real use to him. That was brilliant, anyone who can make you feel you're right there in the story going through everything the characters are feeling and experiencing is a Master of the highest Order indeed. ;) Well done!! (again). :)
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  • From dragongirl on March 25, 2009
    This is defenetly a great adventure and romance for this two and as always Hermione kicking some ass.. Well Draco is not far behind..LOL... Please keep them coming
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  • From caseyjarryn on March 25, 2009
    wow, exciting chapters!.. uh oh, how much blood has she lost??
    update soon
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  • From chickaboo on March 24, 2009
    I want you to know that I had a moment of panic when I read that you won't update anymore. I have this habit of just skimming author's notes on my way down to the review button and that was all that my mind processed before I read the rest of that sentence. lol Anyway, fantastic update, I'm still waiting for one of them to finally give in and just admit that they're in love. But knowing Draco and Hermione we're quite possibly in for the long haul eh? I can't wait!
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  • From margaritama on March 24, 2009
    I love the danger and actions scenes....oh no, is she still bleeding though? she should tell Draco about the wound and that she loves him.
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  • From kazfeist on March 24, 2009
    Definitely lots of action....but I thought they were supposed to meet the other witch in that town. Maybe I was confused? Keep updating! :D
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  • From margaritama on March 23, 2009
    Phew - close call...thanks goodness they didn't "finish." I think Draco would have beaten HIMSELF bloody.
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  • From margaritama on March 23, 2009
    Well, I think Draco is starting to feel something isn't he as is Hermione....I'm wondering at what point in time they'll actually land back (in the future) as surely time has passed.

    PS: wow that bath must have felt GREAT
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  • From jubilant on March 23, 2009
    Amazing! It was hot and steamy (like their bath) can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From caseyjarryn on March 23, 2009
    wow, very hot! :D
    update soon

    xoxo
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2009
    You made me cry. You're not allowed to make me cry! That chapter was simply breath taking. And my goodness that brought back memories. What an intense relationship they have and I love Hermione's inner thoughts of knowing how she felt and even if it was only for one night, she was going to love a lifetime's worth within it. And there she goes trying to fix things again. Trying to coax Draco back 'into the light', show him there's a chance for redemption for him that she would be there for him if he wanted her to be. The bathtub scene was just so intimate and sensual and giving even if they didn't realise what they were doing and when she begged him to make love to her - sheesh! Your love making scene was fantastic, caring, considerate, the worshipping and slow exploring all wrapped up in her innocence - perfect. Well done you!!!!!!! Keep writing like that and I am going to insist you put a 'needs tissues' warning on your chapters. LOL
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  • From kazfeist on March 22, 2009
    Lovely chapter, but I am worried all that conjuring will bring the Trackers too close. And what about the Stone? :D
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