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Reviews for Never Mine

By : RynStar15
  • From SickPuppy on May 22, 2017

    I'll start off by admitting I'm not a Draco/Hermione fan, but I kept seeing this on the page and decided to give it a go. And I'm glad I did! I haven't got a clue what's wrong with Draco, but I'm sure I'll enjoy finding out. Keep up the excellent work. SP


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  • From Kit_Stella on May 19, 2017

    Really loving this fic! Well written and loving this Dark Draco. Impatient to find out what exactly is wrong with him. Thanks for not giving up on this fic it is getting super interesting :)

    KS


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  • From mumoftrips on May 19, 2017

    Noooo, I was really into the story and it ended.  Loving it, can't wait for another chapter xxx


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  • From Leila on May 19, 2017

    Thé story is interesting so far I like it 

    And want to know Whats wrong with Draco ( hes been cursed I think but what kind and what is  it about) 

    Cant wait to Read more


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  • From JadedFate on March 01, 2017

    There are very few stories that make me actually cry, and this was one of them. I just sobbed and was devastated!!!!!! My coworker laughed at me. Very good writing. I will be making my way through all your other stories! Ty for this!


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  • From MotekElm on January 05, 2017

    So good, but maddening that it ended like this. Oh the angst! 

    Also, it would have been nice to have this Draco be a little nicer or funnier or something during his time in the order to give ano excuse as to why Hermione falls in love with him

     

    I can't wait to read the sequel 


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  • From MahoganyMarauder on November 01, 2012
    That was just... Wow.

    I still stand by my previous review. THIS IS THE BEST DRAMIONE FIC I HAVE EVER READ. I'll be reading She Was Always Mine after I post this review, and I cannot wait! Thank you for this wonderful work RynStar15!!!
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  • From MahoganyMarauder on November 01, 2012
    All I can say is... I KNEW IT! I knew it from the moment his eyes turned into slits! :D I have to say that this is THE BEST DRAMIONE FIC I HAVE EVER READ. You are AMAZING. I love you for this!!! I will keep this review short because I am simply DYING to get to the next chapter. I love this so much it hurts!
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  • From LydiaLydia on January 31, 2012
    OK
    Same thing happened to my review, so I guess it's a problem with AFF and not your story.
    Please ignore my previous message!
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  • From LydiaLydia on January 31, 2012
    I'm not done reading the story, just letting you know formatting is gone, that is, there are no more paragraphs. It's just one continuous text, which makes it difficult to read.
    Not that it will stop me :)
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  • From acciopetal on August 03, 2011
    LOVE it! The BEST Dramoine fanfiction ever!
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  • From thiskittenhasclawz on December 07, 2010
    This is amazing. Fantastically written!!! There has to be more soon! I'm loving Hermiones POV, guttered its finished but looking forward to Dracos!!! Write soon!!!
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  • From phoenix217 on December 03, 2010
    Brilliant! I've read a lot of fanfiction, and your story is honestly in my top five favorite all time fics. I usually don't write reviews but I created a username for the sole purpose of commenting on your story.

    First of all, you have created the best draco (in my opinion) that I've read. I mostly read D/H and D/Hr, and Draco is almost either PURELY evil or so regretful/enamored with his gryffindor lover that he changes almost immediately. And then the last half of the fic is completely boring and then depending on how far they take it, the couple is blissfully happy and engaged, exchanging promise rings, whatever else. And while those elements have a place in certain fics, Draco is not that simple! He's one of the most complex characters in all of the books because of his upbringing. I loved how you brought out the fact that he actually had killed people. I liked how all along he was still not totally admitting his feelings for hermione. That's why draco/hermione is so compelling - the drama! The tension, the angst, the love/hate relationship --> all of this makes it so much more romantic and passionate. So even though many of the readers were looking for a clean crisp happy ending, PLEASE don't give in to their requests in the sequel! And PLEASE PLEASE write more!

    Hermione was also a wonderful character. I laughed, I cried. I was very impressed that you maintained her relationships with Harry and Ron really well. That's another pet peeve of mine - suddenly ignoring them or not having their support whatsoever and it's no big deal even though they've been best friends for years. Your story is very realistic in terms of how the relationships play out between all the characters. I felt like the only thing that was kind of a throwaway was the Ron/Luna bit, but then again it's subtle enough to not have it need a lot of attention, and if he wasn't happy with someone else it would be a huge thing to deal with in terms of Hermione admitting her love for draco.

    Also, in terms of writing style - excellent. Many fics can maintain good plotlines and solid characters with serious levels of drama and intrigue but very few people make it seem magical. Coming up with unique ways that the characters continue to use magic takes a lot of creativity -- and you did that very well. I loved the Hermione/Bellatrix scene and the "are you a witch or not" line...you did a great job of remembering that this is a MAGICAL world and thus they should be using magic a lot.

    I can't wait to read more of your work. Good luck!
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  • From pawprintmafia on December 03, 2010
    Love it! Keep up the good work...can't wait to read the next one :D
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  • From smmz79 on December 01, 2010
    I always love your stories!!!! I can't wait for the next to reveal what's going on with Draco!!!!
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