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Reviews for Verto Vitae

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  • From MotekElm on August 15, 2017

    I love the updates!


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  • From MotekElm on August 14, 2017

    great job with the rewrite!!


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  • From MotekElm on July 31, 2017

    oooo, I'm so looking forward to the next update 


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  • From MotekElm on July 28, 2017

    great job. I know I've read tbis story before, but I'm excited to read the re write


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  • From MotekElm on January 06, 2017

    Great adventure, romance, angst


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  • From ANON - SadieW on May 05, 2013
    OH what a FABULOUS FABULOUS ending!!! That entire last chapter---GAH! I have no words! FANTASTIC!! Thank you for sharing!!!
    Sadie
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  • From Kayrox133 on February 16, 2013
    I really really enjoyed this story and loved the end. I couldn't help but to then re- read some of your other stories and I have to leave a tip. When someone does a 360, they are right back at the place they started. If someone does a 180, they are opposite from where they started. :)

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  • From ANON - Victoria Cox on February 16, 2013
    This is a gripping story, so exciting I couldn't stop reading it and had to tell my family to leave me in peace because I didn't want to be interrupted. It's fascinating and action-packed and suspenseful with marvelous love scenes. I am so very eager for the happy ending that has to be just around the next chapter or two. Kill off old voldy and make something happen so our dear Draco & Hermione get the future they deserve.
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  • From ANON - SarahW on February 16, 2013
    Wait...you came to drop off that gem of a chapter only to tell us at the end that you MIGHT NOT BE BACK???!! Are you barmy?????!!!
    p.s. WAY TO GO to Draco, Hermione, Narcissa, those behind the scenes in the Order, and to you, dear writer, for that excellent scene and the end of Nagini! Now bring on the end of Voldemort, a few happily ever afters, and wrap this baby up!!
    p.s.s. It's nice to see you haven't abandoned us!
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  • From mistressgenamalfoy46 on October 17, 2011
    i am in love with this story. it is probably one of the best fan factions i have ever read. please tell me there will be a sequel?
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  • From loisalcantara on August 30, 2011
    cliffhanger. I hope draco doesn't get himself in too much trouble. I eagerly await your next update
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  • From baseballmom69 on June 16, 2011
    I absolutely love this! What an original idea and I think you have done a really good job so far. Keep it up and try to hurry please.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on May 26, 2011
    kind of akward if you think about it. They are practically fucking themselves. Mione looks like Draco and Draco looks like Mione. LOL


    Good chapter though;)
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  • From JaceDamian23 on May 26, 2011
    I must say that I was very surprised when I started this story. In this chapter I thought they were going back in time but for some reason they were changing how they look. I then realized that that was not what was going on. That they were practically switching places. In everything but keeping their real gender. That was extremely interesting to me. I have never read a story like this. I have read time turner stories or PolyJuice stories but nowhere like this. What a awesome idea!!!!!

    I read a few chapters and the story keeps on getting better and better! I love how he agreed to teach her how to be a sexually active young girl! I loved the scene where he ate her out. Very hot!!!

    Also I liked her visit with her mother and the slaps. I like how she ran away and ran into Draco BUT I thought it would have been more interesting if he actually reached them and overheard their conversation and seeing the slaps. But its good either way:)


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  • From LydiaLydia on May 13, 2011
    It seems the site ate my previous review >[ Well, it's not a great loss seen as I'm rather speechless after reading half of your beautiful story. I don't even want to think about the amount of time it took you to give us something so well written.
    Going back, now. CAN'T STOP READING :D
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