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Reviews for The Kill Shot

By : Lizski
  • From winter748 on June 03, 2011
    I'm keeping a close eye on this story. I like the pace of the story's development. What is Severus' motivation? When will Lucius make his intentions clearer? What will Hermione decide to do with the truth of who killed Voldy. Will Harry come clean with her at least? Or did Harry even see what Hermione & Ron saw? Wonderfully written and hugs to you and your beta. Thanks.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 02, 2011
    Wow, and I had such high hopes for Severus. But, no. He had to act like an unmitigated bastard. Sigh. I guess he and Lucius are far more enemies than friends. This doesn't bode well for poor Hermione getting some companionship out of Lucius, with Severus breathing down their necks. His trying to get closer to her after ranting like a lunatic was kind of creepy. I hope she's smart enough to stay away from the real master manipulator. Lucius may be good, but Severus was able to fool everyone on both sides for years. I can't wait for more!!! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From Carousel on June 01, 2011
    The word that best describes this story is yummy. The sexual tension between Lucius and Hermione is thick enough to cut with a knife. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From winter748 on April 30, 2011
    I like that you are taking time to develop this story and not rushing to the smut. As lovely as I know it will be, it's always better for me with a slow build up with fully developed characters that I have connected with. It will be interesting to find out whose AK spell that partially hit Hermione, why Ron is so worried about the truth of who killed Voldemort, can Draco be helped and who did that to him, what is Hermione relationship to Severus if any,and would Voldemort have stayed dead if Harry's spell hadn't hit him also? Are you ignoring the prophecy and horcruxes entirely? If so, that's OK. I'm just wondering. See I'm fully of questions, which is good as I like a story that has me speculating. Oh, and I absolutely love a scheming Lucius. I think Hermione does, too.
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  • From jaimelee on April 29, 2011
    Please update soon! This is great stuff! I hope they move beyond hand-holding quickly.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 28, 2011
    Darn people taking over their own story! lol I hope you win the fight soon, but watching him try honesty as a way to talk to her was refreshing. I still feel a bad for him because of Draco, but like Hermione, I really want him to confess to killing Voldy and tell her why he did it. Looking forward to more soon. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From alecto on April 28, 2011
    I am thoroughly enjoying reading this story. The characters are so very vivid. Can't wait for the next installment! These last two were pleasingly close together.
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  • From savigar on April 27, 2011
    I'm enjoying this story so much! The meeting between Draco and Lucius really touched me, and the friendship and attraction developing between Hermione and Lucius is lovely.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 26, 2011
    I know how easily real life can get in your way. But, I am glad you found the motivation and time to write for us anyway. Thank you! I truly felt badly for Lucius throughout that chapter. Though he brought it on himself, he's lost everything and then had to face that. The only person who's life he valued is the one that got destroyed. I don't feel bad for Draco, as he doesn't know what he's lost, but for Lucius, that was simply awful. I am glad Hermione was there for him emotionally and wasn't afraid to let him know it. I look forward to more soon. Thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From LCGrabski on April 25, 2011
    I love the nuanced way you write and it especially came through with the last chapter where Lucius and Draco interacted. I was actually close to tears a couple of times and not because of overly dramatic lines like some writers favor but because of how honest and raw the emotion your prose evoke.
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  • From jaimelee on April 25, 2011
    Oh, that is so sad. Is Draco ever going to recover?
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  • From Drea1256 on March 26, 2011
    Haven't read anything like this so I'm excited for another chapter. Poor Draco, I wonder who did that to him and if he'll get his memory back. What's up with Ron he seems to know about Lucius and the ak but of course wants the fame for the Trio. More please
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 26, 2011
    In a hurry, but didn't want to leave you with nothing... That was a fantastic date and I laughed out loud at her throughts several times. Thank you! I look forward to more really soon! HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 23, 2011
    Well first, welcome back! You and this story were missed around here. :-) I am glad to know your life is bumping right along and thrilled that you found time to write more of this story. It stuck with me enough that I was able to go back on one chapter, read the last few paragraphs and be right back in the action. I look forward to more. I think seeing him act tenderly toward Draco is going to have quite the affect on her. :-) But, not as much as him seeing her all dolled up for their dinner. lol Thanks again! HG4eva
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  • From LCGrabski on March 22, 2011
    I just wanted to quickly say that I cannot wait for the scene with Draco. I am really infatuated with this story and am excited for future chapters. :)
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