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Reviews for Captive Audience

By : magentasouth
  • From ANON - Dinobunny on January 01, 2012
    Woah wait. So is hermione that kid's mum? Why did hermione have that dream anyway? Haha. This is a rather interesting story:D it was a little too dark for my tastes initially... But not anymore:D and I don't get it... How can hermione's parents still be alive after she was ordered to kill them?:O and I'm really curious about the not yet opened vaults:D update soon yea!:)
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 14, 2011
    I love this story!please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on November 08, 2011
    I just want to say again how much I love this story. I would love to know what happens! I truly hope you haven't abandoned it, though I understand your life has been very busy lately. Anyway, just thought I would drop by a word of encouragement :)
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  • From ANON - violettmichelle on September 26, 2011
    this is definitely my all time favorite fanfiction of any pairing i've read. i love a story that i can get so into that i can almost feel what the character feels.

    cant wait for the next update.
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  • From genjuro33 on August 31, 2011
    You've definitely created a "captive audience" in me. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on August 28, 2011
    Took me a while to read everything again, but I still love this story and yay, update :D
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  • From ANON - Alassea Malfoy on August 25, 2011
    Ooh, I'm happy! This is def. good :D I wouldn't hesitate. My dreams are ALWAYS foggy and blurred, so I know that if I get an order from one I love while sleeping, I'll do it xD Poor Mione, she has no idea what to do xD
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  • From ANON - apkblack on August 24, 2011
    Whoa.

    Slightly breathless here.

    Not sure where I thought you were going to take this, but it's gone in so many different directions from where I'd imagined it might ... wow. Very well done, and this turn of events just has me on the edge of my seat.

    We're still in her head all the way through, and as confused and intense a place as it is, we feel it all.

    Very well written. Looking forward to the updates ...
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  • From ANON - apkblack on August 24, 2011
    Taking a break from obsessive reading to finally review.

    Not sure how I got here, because honestly I never read anything with a Voldemort pairing ... but I'm glad I did. You've written him so terrifyingly. Yes, I know he's a "dark lord" and terrifying anyway, but often he appears almost clownish or charicaturish, if such a thing could be said about the most evil creature living. The idea that he is just in her head all the time, outrageously well done. It's gotten to the point that every time *you're* in her head, I read it flinching all the while, waiting for him to react to whatever it is she's thinking.

    Her characterization is sometimes (in my view) off, just here in particular, as I don't quite get how she would have been so quick to demonstrate all those hexes, and particularly the second time on Lavender. I get how quickly she could 'fall' when it's her own physical sensations ruling her brain, but to torture someone else just to keep her wand intact feels like a bit too ... easy.

    With all that, your writing is wonderful, really evocative, and I can feel that cage, the chill in the air, all of it. You really bring us into her head and we're just along for the ride.

    Glad to have found this. Now back to catch up with the rest of it. Looking forward to wherever you take it, and her, and us ...

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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on August 24, 2011
    Oh my goodness! I am beyond happy that you were able to update. This chapter totally made my day! It was definitely worth waiting for. The dream sequence was very interesting and well done. I'm glad he finally contacted her in some way. I am very interested to know what is 'beyond the door'. I hope you are able to update soon, I am on the edge of my seat :)
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  • From ANON - merryXgirl on August 23, 2011
    Ohh...yeah for the update! I love all the plots and twists that are forming. Great job and I hope to see more soon.
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  • From Gabby0515 on August 23, 2011
    Holy crap!! He managed to harm her in a DREAM? Well it obviously was NOT a dream but then what was it?? hmmm can't wait for the dark lord to return! And maybe the last part of the dream was his way of telling her she's pregnant?? With HIS child? So many questions running through my head! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Alassea Malfoy on August 21, 2011
    Wow, I love this! I didn't sleep at all this night to read it and well... I want it to continue. Is it safe to say, that I am suspecting Voldy's return?
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 03, 2011
    I enjoyed this one, even if I though Hermione's emotions were completely ooc after Tom died and even somewhat before then. I understand her getting attached, but I think she should have been more confused about his death than wishing Harry was dead instead. It just didn't ring organic. I'm very curious as to what Tom is up to, and I wonder if that has anything to do with Harry's new strange behavior.

    This story hasn't been updated since March, but I hope you don't abandon it.
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  • From ANON - melibea on July 18, 2011
    So I'm back. Yes, I am really that amazed with this great, wonderful thing you got going on here.

    I'm choosing to review on this chapter (the 2nd) because it was my favorite. This is when you turned what I thought was an interesting enough fic and turned it upside down so IT WOULD BLOW MY FUCKING MIND.

    You have a very peculiar way of writing. I love it. It is hilarious at times and flowing, but also terrifying and my God, you have a very disturbing, vivid imagination.

    It's amazing.

    I like how you can make me chuckle in one paragraph and then give me goosebumps the next. It is wonderful and delightful and something that rarely ever happens when I read. Ever. In fanfiction.net, you labeled this as a Romance/Drama but really I think it would be more suited as Comedy/Horror. One would think that's not even possible yet you've achieved it, somehow. Hermione's thoughts are often hilarious near Voldemort and combined with his sadistic tendencies it's really a great read. It's... it's just amazing.

    So, on to this specific character when I first read of VOLDEMORT NUDE and you established this Voldemort was clearly not asexual (and also hot as hell). I just wanted to say Hermione's thoughts while she was in the bath with Voldemort made me LOL, Voldemort's actions made me shiver with, erm, excitement and also his sadistic, controlling craziness made my hairs stand on end. If I had to choose, I would pick this chapter to read over and over again. I really wish you hadn't killed Voldemort. It is so very rare to see him so well written in fanfiction.

    I really, really, really enjoyed reading this.
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