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Reviews for The First Horcrux

By : magentasouth
  • From ANON - krysania on August 27, 2012
    Now that was an interesting turn, Tom's pride must be stinging all the way to Australia... can't wait to see what will happen next...
    PS Have you ever thought to move and in AO3 as well???
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  • From ANON - krysania on August 08, 2012
    Love you at this moment!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Krysania on March 08, 2012
    You are back HOORAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    A bit creepy chapter but I can't wait for more... Any chance that you could update and the rest of your stories someday espesialy the Tom/Harry ones...

    Welcome back...
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  • From roguelle21 on March 07, 2012
    AAARRRGGGGHHH! YOU'RE ALIVE.
    That excites me. Very much so. Please, please, please update soon - I love your story and your dark, young Tom and can't wait to see how the story unwinds: particularly in the relationships of Tom, Harry, Hermione and Draco. x
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  • From ANON - Raven on March 06, 2012
    Yay im a happy girl so glad your back hopefully to stay. i hope to see harry in the next chapter! as always lol
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  • From ANON - Raven on March 04, 2012
    that was just cruel its my birthday again and i thought y9ou updated and it was just a edit....... i hope you do update soon its been a month of sundays
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  • From bloodshound on March 03, 2012
    wb, it's been a while neh? good to see you back.
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on March 03, 2012
    This story is like a train wreck, you can't help but look even though you don't want to, that is until you see something to horrible and then you look away and puke your guts out. I know Tom would never be really 'good' but to remain evil and win in a better way is not really what i would like to see. so the story is well written i just tend to like happy endings all around and this looks as if it's heading into the i hate jerry and bugs moment for you. I loathe when people always get away with stuff. Tom raping mione would be the clincher for me and Dumbledore deserves to be cruelly tortured for his lack of empathy for people. He is a conniving, manipulative douchebag of an old man.
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  • From ANON - Raven on December 21, 2011
    i really do wisht you would update soon! i need to knwo whats going on darnet lol hope all is welll
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  • From ANON - Raven on November 27, 2011
    Just reread this again.... ahhh such a wonderful story
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  • From CrownofLeaves on October 11, 2011
    read something on someone else review that I have to respectfully disagree about... I really like how we only really know Tom's POV. It really creates an atmosphere and I can understand how trapped Tom feels. Plus not knowing what is truly going on outside the room gives me the same anxiety Tom must feel and it really goes to show his genius that he is still able to hold somewhat of his own.
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  • From CrownofLeaves on October 11, 2011
    Dumbledore is the ultimate troll. He just had to get that goddamn twinkle in his eye! I can't wait to see what he makes of all of this. And holy crap did that curse Snape cast on Tom sound truly awful!! And what is this? Could Harry be... jealous?? Great chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on October 11, 2011
    wb. been a while neh, but then these stories are so complicated plot wise, i suppose it's hard to keep it flowing smoothly. Poor tom, being truth potioned sux. still, it's interesting how he feels about Harry. Would it be disastrous if voldi the elder were to discover Harry's horcrux? Things are going to be a lot tougher on Tom now, i bet. He's really going to feel this screw up and how.
    btw, the pic link didn;'t work when i tried clicking. not sure what the prob there is.
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  • From SalonKitty on October 11, 2011
    Gosh, so you're finally updating this one, eh? I was surprised to see it when I clicked on AFF's first page, I had imagined that you'd dropped this story in favor of finishing the others.

    I had to go back to the previous chapter to figure out what was happening, but even still, I couldn't understand how Tom suffered so much damage from a simple Stunning spell. Had Severus cast a few more after the boy blacked out? And what of the spell to put Draco into some kind of parseltongue-induced coma, what did that achieve? You have so many tricks and ideas up Tom's sleeve that it's hard to follow them all.

    I have to say--the way both Draco and Harry ogle Tom's pre-teen body as something they are attracted to is a bit disturbing. I can buy Harry being fixated with Tom because of the actual person, but for Harry to detach Tom's personality and focus on the appearance as something now desirable makes me wonder about Harry's strength of character and what may have happened to it.

    It was amusing to see Tom taken down a peg, however, by Dumbledore. I love that he had to 'confess' just what he felt for Harry. Made him sound a bit petulant and childish, like the actual thirteen year-old he appears to be. I'm curious to know how Dumbledore will act on this. Will he keep Harry away from Tom, not realizing that Hermione is also a target? It can be stifling reading this from Tom's pov, because we can never know what's going on outside of the damn room/prison that Riddle is kept in! I want to witness a conversation between Harry and Hermione at some point, see if they are comparing any notes. Or are they both just keeping everything themselves in silent suffering like maddening Gryffindors? Hope you update this one a bit sooner next time. You have so much crammed into each paragraph that its very easy to forget a lot of stuff when a lot of time has elapsed. I would re-read it from the beginning, but I have fics to write! Look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - CJB on August 10, 2011
    Please continue your story I love it so much it would be a total shame if all your fans never get to finish the story.
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