Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

BY : StarLight_Massacre

  • From Magsie on August 12, 2017

    To be completely honest, I first started reading this story back when you first started it... but I didn’t like Harry’s characterization.  He seemed too dependent and clingy at first for me.  So, I gave up and stopped reading this just about the time Draco joined in as Harry’s mate (before Maxie). 

    However, I have read some of your other work.  I loved Blue Moon and my current love, which I wait for an update on, is The Beguile and Devotion of a Black Heir.  As I wait for an update to Black Heir, I noticed you updating Rise of the Drackens and decided to give it another chance, maybe I just didn’t read enough or was in the wrong mind set when I first read it.

    So, over the last week and half... I read all of it.  That is a lot gay orgies in a short span of time!

    And, my first attempt at reading it was wrong.  The stuff with Harry that I wasn’t fond of was more of him being territorial of his mates and him learning to deal with his Dracken side.

    I really love how you’ve grown Harry as a character, he is still a lot like Harry, but different.  His mates, babies and Dracken have changed him, but not in a way that doesn’t make sense in the world you’ve built.

    I love the dynamic between him and his mates, and the dynamic between each mate.  They have issues and problems, nothing is magically perfect, but they all are in it and willing to work, which is how a real relationship should be! 

    Babies.  I love them.  I have special place in my heart for tiny Leolin and tubby Farren.  You scared me several times with Leolin!  If something does happen to him, just know I may morph into a Dracken and hunt you down! 

    It takes a bit to get used to your writing style.  You don’t have an overarching plot, as most books/fanfictions have; you have a set up for the character but no major plot that needs addressing ASAP.  You have smaller plots within just a telling of their lives.  Not that anything is wrong with it, just that it threw me a reader at first and I had to adapt.  You repeat things a bit, you do it a lot in Black Heir, but it happens sometimes in Drackens as well.  Mainly, inner dialogue and exposition.  It can be a bit redundant and pulls the reader out at times, which takes away from your world and the characters.    

    I am very interested to see where you go and what happens with the Fairies!  I hope the new baby is Draco’s!  And, I am interested to see how you continue to develop the characters and their relationships with each other.  Oh, and I hope Warren gets with Eitri, like he obviously wants to!            

    Lots of Love,


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  • From katsplay68 on August 10, 2017

    I absolutely love the storyline and characters. I have read it every chance I got. I was even late to work a time or two because I just could not put it away.  I have gotten upset with other reviewers getting angry about the slow updates. Do what you need to and we will wait. Well maybe. Lol I love this story.

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  • From doglover180 on August 08, 2017

    I am in love with this story and hope that you write more! I haven't been able to stop reading once I started.

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  • From Velicol on July 31, 2017

    I have finally reread and caught up with this story I really enjoyed it.

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  • From Jan on July 15, 2017

    Wow! I have to say, I want a birthday like that! It would definitely be so much fun😃 

    Harry and the boys did good by Max, they definitely went all out for him. I can't wait to see what's going to happen in chapter 114! So excited!

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  • From silentxxdreamer on July 14, 2017

    With how needy Harry was for sex, is Thunderer's fluid craving semen?

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  • From my_perversities on July 13, 2017

    Holy hell that was hilarious !!! I want that inflatable course!!!! It soooo much fun!!! I'm glad Harry at least got a bit of action before he started feeling sick. And Ashley's finally back and doing much better it seems. 

    I love that Liolin is so enamored with his new mommy doll! It's just the cutest thing ever. 

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  • From KillingFrost on July 06, 2017

    I finally found this story again after reading it a few years ago...I celebrate reading it again; cannot stop and am more than happy that it still goes on!

    As I birthed my little daughter five month ago I have better sympathy and understanding for Harry and Co. Makes the story even better!

    I laughed, even cried and cannot wait for any new chapter!

    Go on and keep writing the way you do! Its just one of the best stories ever read!

    Greeting KillingFrost

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  • From Jan on July 06, 2017

    Poor Harry, hopefully the baby will ease up a bit when the actual day of Max birthday comes, so that Harry's able to spend time with his mate, please update chapter 113 soon.

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  • From my_perversities on July 04, 2017

    Wow! You touched on so much this chapter! It really forwarded the plot and is building up the momentum of the story again. 

    The situation with the fairies is grave. Poor Eitri. I mean, to think it wasn't all that long ago that women were treated the same (and still are in some parts of the world). It makes me all fired up. I envy his bravery and willingness to die to ensure fae rights are retained. But hope it doesn't come to that. It would be awesome if Kailen accepts the post as that would kind of make Liolin a prince!

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  • From Jan on June 28, 2017

    Absolutely loves these family moments, they're so funny and fun together! Please update chapter 112 soon.

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  • From my_perversities on June 26, 2017

    Sorry to hear you're sick. It's the worst. Take care of yourself. This chapter was just as wonderful as the rest of the story, sickness or not. So don't worry. I absolutely love when I see a new chapter out. It just gives me such joy and giddiness. I love this family, extended members and all. I'm so glad Ezrah and Larsen got out of the fairy city before it went to pot! It sucks that they would have Donella in Sindri's place even temporarily. I hope they pick someone better or that Sindri gets better. 


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  • From Nightstar on June 20, 2017

    Please please add some more chapters. Im praying that draco gets a baby from all thism i have read this story for 3 days and im in love with it. Dont abandon. I love every thing about this story. Truely a great read i have cried with it and laughed with it. Please update or i will wither up and die!!!! 

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  • From staar on June 16, 2017

    thanks for the update, hope your better !!!!!!

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  • From Jan on June 16, 2017

    Sounds like an amazing family gathering, wish my family were like that (all crazy and all), please update chapter 111 soon.

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