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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Mars Bubbles on August 28, 2012
    another brilliant chapter! :D I have been reading since the beginning and have been patiently or impatiently waiting for the chapters lol. i love the original characters that you have created and they seem realistic. its a lot different then other HP stories with original characters because i find that some of the original characters just fall flat after awhile and just stay the same. With this story there is a lot of variety and more depth to the character and the HP characters as well. hope to read more! :D
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  • From ANON - kissedbymidnight on August 26, 2012
    *happy sigh* I absolutely adore this story. I love all of the characters, every single last one of them! I love their relationship and how all your character's are clearly defined. I love how many babies they have and the drama and problems that have come with it. I'm glad that Max and him are working it out and I love how Harry had perverted fantasies about the three at home!:) I would love to see Harry spend more individual time with each of his mates, especially Draco. I love all of his mates, but poor Draco still doesn't have a biological baby yet, though thank goodness for Harry's sake. I know that Draco loves the other babies as if they were his own and I thought he got a perk, what with him being called Da first, but I'd like to see him get some bonding time with Harry, to reaffirm him connectedness with the group, though he doesn't doubt it and neither do I, but it would be a nice bonus. Super glad that you updated. I wish the story was finished so I could read, read, and read some more, yet I'm glad it's not finished yet because that means there's still more to come!:) Thanks for the chapter!:)
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  • From dinkadot on August 26, 2012
    loving this story been glued to it for three days solid. How do I set up for story alerts? Now that harry has helped severus will it come out that he is also a dracken or will they be exposed? Looking forward to the next chapter.
    Brandi
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  • From tkykitty on August 23, 2012
    Sorry it took so long to review!!!! I had to start reading your story all over again so I was caught up for the new chapter. And let me tell you reading it twice makes it soooo much better. There were tons of things I forgot! Max and Harry's dinner was so sweet. I really liked how they figured out the cooking situation. And man do I love Max's Dad's and family. That are a hoot! I hope to see Draco with a wee one soon. It would be nice to have each of them with atleast one heir. Though I'm sure Harry needs a small break. lol. Can't wait to read what comes next. (Just no major deaths please, I don't think my heart could hadle it yet!!!!)
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  • From ANON - Agata on August 23, 2012
    Hi! I don't even know where to start... I love Your story! It's really great, interesting and funny! I keep laughing so hard that my mum asks me if I'm fine ;) I can't wait for next chapters and I'm sure I'll follow The Rise of The Drackens till the end! Good luck ;)
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  • From ANON - Monkey Lady on August 22, 2012
    I've been reading this for days and it is just amazing! I love all of the characters and the plot is very intriguing. I'll have to check back occasionally to see what happens post Max/Harry date night. :) I wish I had the talent and patients to write like this. I am amazed that you've hit 57 chapters (and not small ones) and there is likely some other big things coming. Very nice. :) Just lovely. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.
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  • From ANON - Sareco on August 19, 2012
    If less proof reading means a faster update than I totally don't mind! To be honest I was so into the story I didn't notice any mistakes if there were any. Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next update :)
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  • From BlackAngel6947 on August 19, 2012
    I just had to review this chapter! I was heartbroken for Severus. I was hoping that SOMEHOW Regulus would be found under extended stasis or something similar. Sev really needs some light and love in his life. Maybe that's something you can work in *begs begs begs* since nothing has been said about the actual funeral or something. Maybe Sev and Poppy will find something once he has a chance to calm down and clean him for the funeral. Just a thought. I absolutely love this story and always come back daily to refresh and see if a new chapter has been posted. If I get impatient enough, I may just go back and read every chapter (again) and leave begging reviews! But yes, Sev needs love
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 19, 2012
    They are being careless. Leaving those boxers behind worries me.
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  • From ANON - Bellasea on August 18, 2012
    I really like your story. I just have one question. In fhs distort where Harry runs away to tell all of his in-laws about his second pregnancy, he talks about drackens ib front of ron at the weasley's. Does ron know about drackens? If so, won't he be a vindictive little bastard and tell some one?
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  • From ANON - ranni on August 18, 2012
    Love it! so cute, sad about regulas though. can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Woodland Spirit on August 17, 2012
    Hooray for updates! Loved it can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - asiacheetah on August 17, 2012
    I'm glad Snape finally has closure regarding Regulus.
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  • From bloodshound on August 17, 2012
    YAY, dracken double shot. ^^

    Blinks... wow, har still moves extremely fast when the urge is on him. Poor Sev, at least now he can begin the grieving process for real.

    Reg was pretty imprudent taking of like that, but if he had a v horcurx in hand, perhaps he felt it was worth it... that or he wasn't thinking clearly when he did or he wouldn't have left his mate like that. still, i think he would be glad it wasn't totally in vane. The Horcrux went up when har fried V.

    Heh, I'm betting Har was right about Kreature. Still, har is still his master even if Calix has been named heir. If har called for him, he'd have to come yeah?

    Well, that's the sev/reg issue out of the way.

    *blinks. Are Har's hormones straight. He went from commanding, to sex fiend, to slightly childish in a fifteen minute space.

    Wow, that's a serious blow to max, but he bought it on himself. I'd ask what he was thinking when he tried that stupid stunt but it's obvious he wasn't. Anger will do that to you.

    maybe har can help write DaDa books or something. Something he can do around the kids like a hobby at least, if not a job. He needs something more than just the kids cause when they grow up and leave, empty nest will hit him hard. Even home makers have something aside for themselves, even if it's just watching their fave soap operas.

    I'm glad both har and max aren't willing to leave har's new lack of trust for him lay. They'll work together to get over it and max will never do anything quite so stupid again.

    considering how much bigger he is than most of those mentioned... did Max stand still and take the beating as punishment he had earned? I know he'd bow to Nasta as top dom and his parents as that's ingrained, but i'm surprised he'd hold still for Draco unless he felt he'd earned it.

    So, a drunk har is a loose, topper from the bottom, domish, sex fiendly har? That's useful to know, so there aren't any embarrassing incidents in company other than his mates when there's alcohol around.
    Still, har's going to be feeling that tomorrow. :P

    back to school next chappie?



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  • From BellixiesPixies on August 17, 2012
    Braiden does sound cute, hope my future nephew turns out like that *.*!! this was a great chapter and i really enjoyed it.
    thank you
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