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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Atty on July 18, 2012
    Dear god I need a family tree or something! XD
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  • From ANON - Nicola on July 18, 2012
    awwww soo cute! I loved the bed scene between harry, blaise and the lil baby! can't wait for the next instalment!
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  • From ANON - Doodle Penguin on July 18, 2012
    Nooooooo!!!!! The stories suddenly hidden? Why?!
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  • From ANON - slash_adherent on July 18, 2012
    I read the latest chapter last night, and it was amazing!!!, but I wanted to let you know that the story is hidden right now and you need to contact a site admin. Says its probably just a disclaimer issue. Either way I wanted to make sure you knew it was going on. ♥
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  • From bloodshound on July 17, 2012
    YES! Now come here so i can maim you.

    *voice or reason cuts in. 'now, now. If you maim the nice author person they won't be able to write the next chappie.'

    Me: Can't i hurt her just a little... you know, in the bits that aren't needed for writing. She left us with a name cliffie!

    VOR: NO!

    me:*pouts.

    That to the side. Are any of har's other kids Dracken or have interesting blood lines? It would probably be to obvious to give the Fairy kid a name that means Fairy Child, wouldn't it. >>

    Still, I'm glad har can over ride his drack instincts at a time like this. Otherwise, like in the original version of the chappie, they would be very, very dead.

    Will har ever recover completely from having one of his kids pull an 'alien' and try to but its way out of his guts?

    Oh, oh man. Har's new family or so going to have that papers asses as grass. who needs lawn mowers when you're dracken mates can scorched Earth the bastards. Still, they are serious and hard core going down.

    I'm thinking dear Amelle will have to shut her pie hole just a bit. not only has har managed to produce five live young, but he kept the youngest two alive when someone who was wholly in the thrall of instincts (the dear Am's appears to be) would have lost them. And he produced a Fairy Child no less. Is that cause har's so powerful? His power sort of kicked that recessive trait awake again?

    Still, that kid has an interesting future in store I'm sure. Will more of the extended family be staying with them to help deal with the five new borns? I mean, one baby had them run ragged. With five they'll get pretty much nothing done and next to no sleep.

    Looks forward to seeing what other names you come up with. *wonders off to look up the names in this chappie.
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  • From ANON - THEY HID THE STORY on July 17, 2012
    AHHH!!! They hid your story! I love it, and I want it back, and more importantly YOU should have it back, so contact the admins and figure out what's wrong but PANIC!!! I don't want them to delete this story. It is far, far too amazing. If you have to find somewhere else to post it, fine, but GAHHHHH I don't know what their problem is. Disclaimer? Responding to reviews in author's notes? Heck if I know, but I wanted you be aware as fast as possible!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 17, 2012
    This is the best fanfiction that I've ever read. It is so well written and intriguing. I can't wait until the next chapter is updated.
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  • From ANON - Tani on July 17, 2012
    So... I'm mentally kicking myself right now. I started reading the latest chapter last night but stopped about half-way through because I needed to go to sleep since I have my own newborn in the house and now I come back to finish the chapter and it's hidden. D: Boo AFF!
    However, yay that the faerie baby is ok!!! I almost cried last chapter when Harry thought it's back was "inside out". I'm glad all the babies are ok and doing well (up to where I read at least)!
    Hopefully the story is unhidden soon so I can finish and start eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
    Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - jenna on July 17, 2012
    please answer me ! all of the babies are alive ? Quintuplet= 5 ou 4 ?
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on July 17, 2012
    I can't wait for ch. 55! Can't wait to see what the baby girl's name is.
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  • From ladilyndi on July 17, 2012
    Wow, take a little holiday and return to multiple chapters of my favorite story - what a great way to end the holiday! I am so glad you rewrote chapter 53 instead of going with the one in Scaled Bits. I couldn't finish reading that one and was so happy with your rewrite. I'm glad Max has boys, he's made to be a father of boys and I'm glad Nasta had at least one girl so he will have someone who will always want to cuddle with her daddy.

    Thanks for explaining about the multiple births for male wizards and how many have harems as I have wondered why people did not think it very strange and question why Harry was able to have a harem at school. Also, while multiple births may be possible for "normal" people, it is usually with fertility treatments so this explained for me why Harry's pregnancy would be seen as "normal" in the wizarding world.

    You do a wonderful job at foreshadowing and it was fun to read so many chapters together to see if my impressions as I'm reading happened, such as problems should there be a faerie baby.

    As usual, I so appreciate all your hard work writing this. Hopefully you will win the lottery so we can appreciate more of your writing.
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  • From ANON - red-dragon on July 17, 2012
    Hey great chapter. I know it's going to be hard for my favorite mates, but I was hoping for a Faerie baby. An yes that was mean a cliphanger?!!! ;) I can't wait to see what Harry names the rest of his babies. I really hope they get back that newspaper and fast. I hope this story goes on for a long time, I really want to see how Harry goes about raising all of his babies; and dealing with his mate. I hope he doesn't give the Faerie baby more attention and forget his other babies. But I am pretty sure that's not gonna happen. I know it seems like I am toooo into this story, but that's because it written so real like.

    I wanted to ask how long the babies who aren't born Dracken live, will there lives be as long as there parents? Also are they wizards or just human?
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  • From ANON - Woodland Spirit on July 17, 2012
    Yay! All five are okay and he loves them.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2012
    A Faerie!!! How wonderful!!! I'm sooo glad they are all doing well. It would have killed Harry if one had died.
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  • From ANON - Angel_Kellar on July 17, 2012
    This really was a super evil way to end the chapter, but i loved it anyways. :D i love the names!!! And i'm just guessing that Harry happened upon the name Lowri in the book. Oh, i can't wait to see and if i'm right i can't wait to see what Aneirin's reaction is. And i love the twist with the Faerie baby! i was thinking that Harry would have at least one after the whole "I'm Harry freakin' Potter... etc., etc." and when i saw the littlest baby i was think maybe... But i wasn't for sure. It was really cool how you explained the wings on his back though. :) And i can't wait to know his little name. i'm sure Harry's going to be super protective of him. Also, i've been wondering if you were going to have Harry explain sometime to the families about the rest of his Hogwarts adventures? i kind of got the hint that maybe you weren't in this last chapter, but i wasn't for sure. Will he ever tell his family about the rest of his Hogwarts adventures? Or will the ever somehow find out about them? Like an outside source like the newspapers, or people they know or work with telling them about Harry? It was just something i was curious about because Myron's reaction to Harry's first year was really funny in my opinion. And sometimes i get the feeling that while Harry has matured a lot in some areas, he doesn't really get the idea that the things he did during his Hogwarts years were really dangerous. And the fact that Myron's reaction showed just how much he cared about Harry and his safety was super cute in its own way. i will be patiently and anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Thank you so much! :D
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