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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - QuintiliVare on July 17, 2012
    I must have a one track mind, because of all the amazing parts in this chapter the one that stuck out the most was Nasta possessively petting Harry's private parts. I giggled so much at that mental image!
    I was pleasantly surprised at the amount of love Aneirin showed toward Harry. There is no other way he would only stand between his son and someone who had just the day before, intentionally or not, tried to kill his son. I am glad that he did not hold a grudge toward Harry. Yes, he knows Dracken instincts inside out and that it wasn't Harry's fault, but a lot of the time logic can be elusive when your children are involved. Though, I bet giving him three grandchildren helped ;)
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  • From ANON - SB on July 17, 2012
    I was so excited when I saw a new chapter was up! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - sarah999 on July 17, 2012
    Thanks so much for the update. :D Love the chapter. Are you going to be updating weekly? Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Andrea Readwolf on July 17, 2012
    Oh, lovely! I was terribly dreading the thought of waiting forever and a day for the next installment! ^o^/ Yea!

    Little bit of squick-factor carried over, what with the whole ripping-open-your-stomach-to-then-reach-inside-and-pull-out-a-living-being... Really...[shivers] It's like _Alien_. And I love preg-fics, but... [shivers] It really isn't a kind of miraculously creepy thing. And, OUCH! tearing through stomach muscles is BAD! And my brain keeps trying to interrupt and say, "Those babies wouldn't be allowed out of hospital care for at least two weeks! Most likely longer because of how premature they were born!" And my fictiony-mind keeps shouting back, "Shut up! This is fanfiction, and they're all magical! They probably did some hocus-pocus-y stuff that stablized any would-be complications! Embrace the theory of magic-heals-all...err, most!" ^__^;;

    So, um, at this point, how many people are aware that Harry almost succeeded in killing Nasta's brother?

    And we've got a little fairy in the mix! How cute! Oh, but I am relieved that there was nothing seriously, horrendously wrong with him. So that would make: 1 Dracken, 1 Fae, and 3 magicals? Love little Farren's gustiness; Max's pouting over his name not being include;, Draco's insistance that he wouldn't just blindly love *any* name Harry decided on; the fact that all the parents are there to represent, even the Malfoys and the Weasleys and Remus.

    I hope someone tears the Daily Prophet ragged; with all those strong, powerful businessmen... Why hasn't one of the gained controlling interest of that newspaper and replaced the editor? Better yet, why hasn't anyone started their own competing newspaper? Also somewhat blame Nasta and the doctor for not at least grabbing a blanket or robe to drape over Harry when they arrived at the hospital. Despite the urgency of the situation, it was rather indecent of them to practically parade down the corridors with a nude body!

    I hope Harry accepts the fact that he cannot continue his "normal" education--in the US, part of the Title-1/No-Child-Left-Behind includes a stipulation for school districts providing specialized tutoring for expected teen mothers who can no longer attend school and/or hospitalized students. I would hope Harry would be willing to realize his situation and needs are different now, allow himself to step away from traditional education and perhaps turn his focus towards only 2 or 3 NEWTS with the assistancs of a private tutor to help him work through the theoretical properties as well as the practicals of his chosen subjects. That would cut out the need for actual "homework" in the traditional sense of essays while allowing him to continue studying the material.

    Will Harry and his brood be picking up a privately employed healer for themselves? The could certainly financially afford it--three of them being from old money, at least. I could see the Malfoys extending their personal healer to Potter's brood. After all, Draco is their only child. But, then again, it doesn't look like you've leant that way with this story--the old aristocrat retaining a personal healer. Although, with Harry's luck, it might be something one of them should start thinking about!

    Ah, a nice piece. Loved finding out about the babies--and a little girl! The grandmama's will be so thrilled! Looking forward to more details and fallouts! (And really! Hasn't anyone talked to Nasta's brother about the dangers of submissive Drackons and why one should stay as far, far away from a birthing one as possible? Or did he just forget himself in the crisis? Not good!)

    LOL--just for fun: the security code for the response includes 'graegmael' and "swithisl". Talk about random!
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  • From ANON - Rainbow12004 on July 17, 2012
    i love your story and can't wait to see what happen next in Harry world.
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  • From ANON - elf_demon on July 17, 2012
    There are too many babies to memorize!
    I am totally confused which baby is the eldest and belong to who!@@
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  • From picabone99 on July 17, 2012
    you are amazing! i absolutely love this story and squeal with joy and excitement every time i see that you added a new chapter. i have it favorited on the fanfiction site, but only read it here now. thanks for updating on both sites. keep up the good work and i have to say that i'm looking foward to draco spawning some children in the future. hope he makes up for going last by having the most.
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  • From ANON - Usagi1515 on July 17, 2012
    Yes you must win the lottery and only write. I check for your updates 2 to 3 times a day. When there actually is an update i do a fan girl scream. My husband thinks im crazy. Keep up the incredible story and writing.
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  • From dominique1 on July 17, 2012
    yeah 4 boys 1 girl naste and max's yeah loving this max's acting a bit like ass braiden was there first happy that the nurse was fired i still want the paper's destroyed and the nursed bankrupted farron i can't wait until the other babies are named and i hope that Aneirin sanex talk about what happen i like if harry would name his daughter after nasta's mom middle name something poor max wants a baby named after him the family get together plus i love that harry's not letting go of his faerie baby
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  • From ANON - under draco on July 17, 2012
    I completely let out a sigh of relief when I learned that the baby was okay. I have a 6 month old and a 2 year old and I go crazy with just them. I hope everyone takes shifts coming to help Harry and his men out for the first year. Oh and school, but now I hope Harry makes a speedy recovery and not do anything to strain his body.

    OAN my captcha has the word mate.
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  • From PeriLover on July 17, 2012
    WOW! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for writing such a wonderful and in depth story. I have re-read this story a total now of 6 times, and every time I get a little something more out of it.
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  • From Zx14ninja on July 17, 2012
    Thank you for answering my question, this is one of my absoulte favorite stories. I'm so glad that all the babies survived and can't wait to find out what Harry names the other three.
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  • From Amar_Mystickz on July 17, 2012
    ok, this redeems what I was talking about in the past chapter =w= so what I said is now null and void ^^
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  • From ANON - roosickle on July 17, 2012
    Awwwwwww, arent they sweet, I wondered if you would use the fearie part of Nasta's heritage , I ma so happy that you did,so we have one draken one faerie and three magical beings ...hmmmmm I wondering which one the draken is, I supppose I will just have to wait : ) and be happy to do so,still loving your story even over 50 chapters in .
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  • From Sneaker22 on July 17, 2012
    thank you for the chapter, it came at a perfect time. I'm glad all the babies survived.
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