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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - ranni on July 12, 2012
    Love the new chapter. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 12, 2012
    All 5 alive! Though the 5th one! Poor darling!!! Will he live? What are the sexes? Is Harry alright? Will his mates get there in time? Something tells me something bad is about to happen. Soooo need more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Wolfmistress on July 12, 2012
    Very good chapter. You are officially only one of about half a dozen authors who made me cry from their story. I appreciate that you went with this version of the births instead of the "Scaled Bits" version. I am going to have nightmares from that chapter. I am also glad that Sanex survived for I do not think that Harry could have ever forgiven himself and the family could have, almost assuredly would have, been tore apart. I am almost afraid to read how Amelle will act when she finds out, especially about the weakest infant. I hate where this chapter ended; however, I really cannot complain for you have worked hard at getting so many chapters for the main story and the side story to us, your readers. Thank you for your hard work and have fun at work. I am waiting impatiently until next week for the new chapter.
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on July 12, 2012
    almost got the sniffles when the baby was announced dead, tho i'm curious about the baby's back, is it like those rare children who have their hearts born outside of their chest?
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  • From ANON - Ria on July 12, 2012
    oh fuck I was so scared at first when the fifth baby didnt respond!!!!!!!! Then when she/he started coughing I laughed with tears in my eyes! I was so relieved!!!!
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  • From ANON - Andrea Readwolf on July 12, 2012
    Oh, wow! Wasn't expecting the birth before the new year started, even if I suspected it would be even earlier than "normal"... Oh, but, that poor fifth baby! And, are we going to miss the window of opertunity for discerning whether the new babes are Dracken, human, or else? I hope some of the adults are thinking responsibly and pulling together emergency kits for the newborns--bottles and swaddling in the least, potions for every and any possibility....

    I'm glad to see Ceaser stepping forward a bit with his wife. Although, I keep expecting to see her demise any chapter now. I know, I know... not quite likely, but still. There's only so far she'll be able to go before she really pisses Harry (and his magic) off. And then, it's *POOF*!! No more Dracken-bitch-from-hell! Wouldn't be a lick surprised if Quincy (or whatever you choose the name the fifth babe) and hir back isn't the catalyst.

    I am immensely relieved that you graciously allowed all five babes to live--was seriously worried you wouldn't have with this chapter. Despite how much more trouble this will cause--one of the babes in a truly horrible situation, where even Harry's formidable magic might not be enough to sustain the babe... another babe terribly weakened... Really, it sounded like only one or two of the babes were truly viable. Another week you say we have to wait for more? [sighs] Seems so long, even with the Scaled Bits to serve as appetizers!

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  • From ANON - roosickle on July 12, 2012
    O my Harry, how is he going to cope? Is the l;ast poor babay alive? I wasent sure, its hard to read through tears.......they say that the hard times draw families closer together so I hope this is what you were thinking, its strange but I feel so much empathy for the mates, my husband always complains that there is nothing he can do while I give birth, they would be feeling so useless,,,,,,,,thank you for the warning, if you don't mind I probabaly wont read the out take due to I think you probabaly do kill of Sanex and he an Cesear are two of my favourite second string characters,
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  • From Amar_Mystickz on July 12, 2012
    Hm it would be sad if the 5th baby died but for the story it would have been better because you had this pain and drama just fistting people's hearts at their pain makeing it wondrous and then you just let it go like your afraid of it. You should have ended this chapter at them grieving, how you put the baby breathing especially how you described the baby's back it kinda ruined it I believe. Oh the warning kinda detracts from the drama. Well I still like your story, I liked everything else in the story.
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  • From ANON - Violet Hope on July 12, 2012
    oh wow, poor harry, is the child with the inside out back going to survive or will he die as harry sleeps. maybe harry's magic will come into play and help the child. will harry be more protective over his final child becuase of the way he/she was born? are any of the drackens? oh i just can't wait for the next chaper this is so amzaing i loved it a lot please update soon

    love
    Violet Hope
    xxx
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  • From ANON - miapia on July 12, 2012
    no no noooooo don't leave it there,continue please!!!Please!!!!
    ...you made me review for the first time in the 7-8 years i bean reading fanfiction feel proud
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  • From ANON - sarah louise jones on July 12, 2012
    AMAZING!! My heart was in my throat for the whole birthing scene!! Poor wee baby, I hope they don't lose the littlest ones, can't wait to see what happens next... even if we're waiting a week!! I am so shocked at this unexpected turn, but SOOOO good!!
    Amele is seriously pissing me off!! I want to bitch slap her never mind throwing a bowl of mushy peas!! hehe
    sarah xx
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  • From ANON - rinet on July 12, 2012
    Hello SLM!

    wow, I've read your chaps as you've loaded them, and this is my very first review, but damn, WHAT A CHAP! I am really enjoying this very complicated story, and thank you sooo much for actually continuing the story [I usually just read the completed ones, just in case the WIP's are abandoned]

    anyway, just wanted you to know that I for one cannot wait for the next chapter, and chapters!!
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  • From ANON - sarah999 on July 12, 2012
    Wow, what a chapter. Thanks for the oh so quick updates. : ) I've spent the last two days rereading the story and got the the second to last chapter just as this one was updated. : )

    I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on July 12, 2012
    Omg I was so scared Harry was going to lose the kids! I was almost going to cry tears of relief. I hope they are all safe I mean wow i'm still trying to convince myself everything us going to be ok.
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  • From ANON - Larimar on July 12, 2012
    WOW!!! Just, amazing birth chapter! Left me emotionally drained, but soooo powerful!
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