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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From TalisRuadair on June 08, 2012
    I have to admit that I am loving this fiction. It's much better on AFF than what you've had to do to it to comply with the requirements of that other fan fiction site. I was thinking something that I thought would be an interesting twist since you've admitted to bringing Teddy into the story. Now we know that Draco and Harry are both Drackens because of their shared Black ancestor was one. One can assume that the same genes are present in Tonks because she shares the same ancestry as both Harry and Draco. I'm guessing that your still going to have Lupin and Tonks ask Harry to be the godfather of their son. I think it would be grand if Teddy ended up being a Dracken as well. I think it would be even better if he ended up mating with one of Harry's children, you know one not fathered by Draco because I'm not sure if the relationship would be too close or not. As Tonks and Draco are first cousins. I love the vacation though I'm a bit disappointed that Harry's heat didn't rise enough or at least you made it sound as though it didn't for Draco to have possibly fathered a child. Like perhaps Harry was only pregnant with three but then after their vacation two more were conceived and one was Draco's. I guess it's just wishful thinking. I look forward to your next update and hope you have fun this summer as well.
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  • From BellixiesPixies on June 07, 2012
    o.O how r we suppossed to make it last? impossible...impossible i repeat, your chapters are too good and too adictive.
    i loved Harry's vacation, he was so happy!! awww and soo cute chasing iguanas xD lovely
    tnk u and have a good brake!!
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  • From ANON - roosickle on June 07, 2012
    Wow,can I just say wow, Harry seemed to have to come to terms with the pregnancy until the idea of multiples was brought up, I get the definate idea he's going to get quite a shock after the scan LOL, and poor Harry having to leave Briaden behind, I know he needed it but it is so hard to leave your baby, . Remus and the photo's made me tear up justt seeing a glimpse of wht could have been makes his life as it was so much harder to understand, the sex scene's were ofcourse wonderful : ) and it was great to see Draco getting some on his own for a change . A question though, in the first chapter it said in the information about Drakens that salt water is very bad for them however he went scuba diving in a place that Max saw a shark ? I thought possibly he went diving in a freshwater lagoon but am unawareof freshwater sharks? or is this part of the info on drakens that is wrong???
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  • From Meechypoo64 on June 07, 2012
    Thank you for the super long chapter. The boys finally got to enjoy themselves fully, without the fear of school, family, or even Harry's heat cycle to get in the way of them being able to truly feel the emotional side of their relationship. I'm most proud of Draco and how far he has come in the bonding with the other mates. Nasta is such a great top dominant and fights his instincts sometimes to makes sure that all of his mates are taken care of. Even Max let Draco and Blaise dominate him for a while. The boys will be better for their little vacation and we can give three cheers for Mariana making it possible. Have a good summer.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Glisssunseeker on June 07, 2012
    I'm on Chapter 32 right now. This isn't really a review, just a comment on one of the parts you put in the story. In this chapter, Harry complained about his balls feeling like the size of a snitch. This I couldn't quit laughing at. A snitch is about 1 and 1/2 inch or 1.5 inches in diameter. Male balls are about 1.5-2.5 inches. So for him to say his balls are normally smaller than a snitch - well, it just cracked me up. Don't ask why I have all this information running around in my head, I just learn things like this.
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on June 07, 2012
    I loved it, the places you described I hope to one day go too.
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  • From dominique1 on June 07, 2012
    so happy that harry had a vacation but love the sex and the baby pics i so want remus and tonks to have teddy that would be good nasta getting it from his dad. yeah love itas far merry gentry the pick up around the middle of the first book and the rest of the book after
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  • From roni004 on June 07, 2012
    ilove it. have a great summer
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  • From justpucky on June 07, 2012
    Have you figured out where Harry will make his next nest? He'll be at hogwarts and 6-7 months from Mid August is early to mid march... very cold weather in scottland for a rooftop nest. I can't wait to see how you play it.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on June 07, 2012
    ch. 48 is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2012
    love that harry saved his babies even if he didn't want a baby so soon but he'll love them. i can't wait until they find out that harry is having five babies i feel sorry for draco but when he gets his baby it will be brilliant its cool that harry can get with child just bye heating his body up if only i could do the same all my babies our grown and i mess having a baby it's been like 19 years and i'm only 39 but my husbands 57 anyway love it want more looking forward to more.
    love that harry went to visit everyone i also hope he get back in control of his men that will rock but his also going to have his baby at hogwarts i do hope that he gets to have them at home to soon
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2012
    so good poor harry so want amelle to pay a new babies
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2012
    Love the b day party i so hate amelle poor harry and richard and myron are ass i hope they grovel to harry like dogs but happy about the baby's
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2012
    so hot love this go harry
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2012
    so good love it it just sucks that this site only allows 5 reviews a day so i hope i didn't mess any chapter that the only reason i read it on fanfic because the easy use of reviewing
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