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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

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  • From ANON - ranni on June 01, 2012
    Awesome new chapter. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From BellixiesPixies on June 01, 2012
    wow five chicks!! awesome! this update was so great...xD poor Herry on denial...i felt bad for him :(
    thank u for the update.

    ps. weather has been a bitch...some days i cannot even breath...:$ average temperature for Queretaro Mexico is been of 30-32 degrees...sometimes more...sucks
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on June 01, 2012
    You know... you could write Draco and Harry into their own little love scene the same day that Harry was still in heat through the Scaled Bits stories. That way Draco could in fact then be included into the current clutches as one of the fathers.

    Just a suggestion.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2012
    Yay another chapter!! wow five is a large clutch, with Harry freaking out about being pregnant again i can't what to see what happens when he finds out he is having five babies :) this was a great chapter, i loved Harry's little rebellion going off on his own!!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on June 01, 2012
    so good love it want more this story is a part of me just like the other story you write
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  • From ANON - sarah louise jones on June 01, 2012
    Loved this chapter, but question...

    The next clutch of chicks; I know there will be five, both males and females, but my question is - will the five chicks have the same dad or could it be possible for (example) Nasta has 1 chick, Max has 2 chicks, Blaise has 1 and Draco has the last chick of the clutch??

    Be greatful for a reply.
    Sarah Louise Jones xx
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  • From Bloodredrose13 on June 01, 2012
    Oh I love it! I can't wait to see Harry use sex as a weapon :) Nasta is so gonna be wrapped around his little finger LOL
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  • From twilitdragoneye on June 01, 2012
    Good for Harry, even if he was made to feel ashamed by the end of it. Playing the Dursley card was low, but it did the job. All of the trips he made and the advice he was given was great. Lived the chapter can't wait for the next!
    ~*Pen
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  • From ANON - Nicola F on June 01, 2012
    LOVED IT!!!! I almost cried!!!! its soo good :D

    And i loved how myron and richard apologised! I hated the thought of them being angry with harry!

    What will harry do next? lol.
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  • From SailorSol on June 01, 2012
    If I haven't said it before, I love this story.

    As for heat, it's just hot. Ick. I'm in Los Angeles, and it was 88F yesterday, which is about 32-33C.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2012
    I'm really scared for Harry he seems to take every little word as an offence. Maybe there's something affecting him psychologically? I don't think it's healthy even before he thought Braiden was really smothered and I was like that's what people usually say in jest but he took it in such a wrong way. He's so overprotective like he doesn't trust the other dominants to care for their baby, maybe it's the submissive in him. Hopefully it's just stress from being pregnant again it's such bad luck I bet he was hoping from a break of being pregnant. But I'm sure he'll treasure this clutch too.

    It's so sad that Draco doesn't get to be the father of this baby, he was really looking forward to being the first one and now he can't even be the second father though I'm sure he'll love them just the same. It's okay, Draco love, hopefully you get more loving from Harry. Too much Harry Blaise interaction,not that I hate it mind you, but the other dominants should have some loving too!
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on June 01, 2012
    It's a good thing Harry learned that trick, otherwise He would of ended up hating his mate, i mean i would if i was smothered like he is. I can't wait for Blaise mother to get a hold of him(her son) and rip a new one into him.
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  • From ANON - Krystal on June 01, 2012
    5 babies and Draco gets none i bet Lucius is going to be thrilled! Lol
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  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2012
    review thing is glitching so this review is going to be reviews... sorry.
    edible foot lotion... snickers. but still, the boy wasn't raised dray so i guess he doesn't realize how hair trigger those instincts can be. Still, as a Slyth, you'd think he'd be used to watching his mouth.
    wow, that was quite a blast. So, I'm thinking Am's is going to be steering clear of har from now on. I'm betting he scared the cacky out of most of them with that burst.
    the hubby of the lady with 12 kids made me grin. It's a pity they can't manage all their heats like that. It'd be a lot less wear and tear on them all and far less exhausting, though regular heat is a good thing if har doesn't want to get knocked up all the time. >>


    I know they're precious and blah blah, but wouldn't it make it easier for everyone if the subs were less princess me and more level headed. Not quite so spoiled with the emphasis on rotten? Also trained a bit not to let their instincts rule absolutely everything?

    Oh, I am so glad they made up. har is such a sweetie and he has enough issues left over from the Dursleys to cope with without his extended family dumping more on him. I hope they'll be a bit more forgiving of any future slips.

    oh,oh, will we get to meet Kyra, she sounds like fun. ^^ sort of like a drack weasley twin but more physical.

    poor har. he's very 'i do but i don't' about this isn't he. I can understand why, but Nasta's dad is right. he has a vast and healthy support network, so i reckon he and his mates can swing this. Will har be able to finish his schooling. being constantly pregnant will be a bit of a drain.

    so, the art of being a good sub is channeling your inner slyth to get your way? Well, since the hat wanted to stick har in slyth to start with, he just needs to get back into practice. :D Would his slyth's recognize slyth tactics though or would their instincts be talking to loud for them to hear?

    Heh, working already. Nice one har. I mean, har isn't unreasonable. They need to TALK with him and vice versa, then he wouldn't feel this constant need to act out. Still, they're pretty young as families go and they're all still learning.

    with the litter? clutch? (guess who's forgotten the right term. >.< )is it like with animals that throw litters? i mean, does one father sire the lot or is it luck of the draw who fathered which chick?
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  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2012
    with your weather, i'll trade you. we had the fire going all day and it was still fecking freezing. I could use a bit of the warm right about now. I mean Aussies are fairly used to warm (except for possibly tasmainians)but I imagine that to the welsh (and all those who live on the British isles really)weather like that is a serious kick in the goolies. remember, drink lots of water, wear a hat, use sun screen, and between a 11 and 3 try and keep out of it. sunglasses and similar eye protection is your friend. (cycles off more sun smart cliche advice as i think of it. See the 'slip, slop, slap ad for details. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ViuLeQho6pY
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