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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ladilyndi on May 22, 2012
    You made my day! I'm so happy for a new chapter and Happy Birthday ROTD. You are doing a wonderful job of keeping me interested and panting for what is to come. Harry is feral. Will he be able to once again overcome his Draken as he has in the past or has this little episode made it harder for him. The question is how much of this chapter was foreshadow and how much was color. Hmmmm, inquiring minds will find out (hopefully) in the next chapter.

    I love the relationships between Harry and Alexander, Nasta and Blaise. With Alexander, Harry is getting the grandfather love he never had before. With Blaise, Harry has that first, young, romantic love and with Nasta, someone who gives him the love, security and stability that Harry hasn't had. Draco and Max need to learn to put brain in gear before putting mouth in motion.

    As you can see, I love the story and characters. Thank you for all your hard work on this story, for the update and I look forward to the next chapter whenever you can post it. At a chapter a week (with Scaled Bits), you are doing a bang up job.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 22, 2012
    so good love it poor harry was doing so good dame draco want more
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  • From Sera21 on May 22, 2012
    Its a cute chapter but I am worried that you are making Harry act a bit to...logical. I mean how realistic is it for a 16 year old to realize moment after a fight that he was in fact at fault in everything and then go out and apologise the next morning. I realize Harry is mature but he seems to never ever be selfish and always seems to consider his mates feelings and their feelings in their actions.Why couldn't harry have acted a bit more human and just have been grumpy for a day or two? I realize that it may be a question of juggeling 5 main characters and half of the chapter will inevitably be spent with one mate telling another mate what just happened but I do wish you could give your chracters more depth by making them a bit more ...human...they all seem so perfect except maybe Draco. What if Nasta had a habit of trying to over protect harry by telling him white lies or if Max really really wanted to make sure the next baby was his...? At this point they are just sweet, caring, wholesome and, unfortunatly, starting to get a bit boring...
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  • From ANON - Mari on May 22, 2012
    Thank you for giving us a new chapter. I was very upset that you got dinged on FFN and had to take down/repost your story. Thank you for continuing to post here and for sticking with the story and giving us a new chapter. This is my number one fav n AFF.Net :) Great chapter had me squeeing all over.
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  • From shelly56787 on May 22, 2012
    Just gotta say how awesome this story is. I like found it one night after work, and I just finished reading what was up at at about four this morning. Then I woke up, and like was cruising the website, and there was another chapter... and I was like... holy hell i've died n gone to heaven... Wooooo... Sooo, yeah, so awesome. Figured I'd through this review here really fast before work. :D Story is super awesome, and all that jazz, but i'm sure may other people have told ou that. whatev's though... :D Yeah. Totally awesome. My demon llama's bow down to your greatness. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Nicola F on May 22, 2012
    BRILLIANT!!!!! Well worth the wait!!!!!!!!!! but now i CAN NOT wait for the next chapter lol
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on May 22, 2012
    Awesome, I'm now following u on here, I'm fron Fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - ArtemisEarth on May 22, 2012
    Thank you for going to all that effort to repost this story. I'm loving it! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Will Harry ever let anyone hold his child again? Will Alexander like the statue? Will Braiden still be just as cute? Find our next time on Rise Of The Drackens! :D:D:D
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  • From ANON - Ingar on May 22, 2012
    Thank you so much for updating. I've been waiting for ages for the next chapter. But it's been worth it. It's great. I feel sorry for Harry that he was sent to bed without food and I do hope that something like that never happens again. And I just love Max's family. They're awesome and his dad is such a lovely man. I think he's my favourite in that family, if you don't count Max of course. I would really love to know more about all the aunts and uncles in the family.
    I can understand Harry's fear at the end of the chapter. It was really stupid of Draco to use the word smother - Someone should hit him for it. But I understand Harry's reaction very well. I just hope he doesn't turn out like all the other submissives that won't let anyone near their chicks. I mean, that's what sets Harry apart from the rest of them and that is what makes him Harry. And I find it adorable that he trusts other people with his precious baby. Please don't take that away from him.
    I hope it won't take as long before the next chapter comes out because I really want to read about the rest of the party.
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  • From ANON - mnfm on May 22, 2012
    Well, I'm so glad your back and this chapter is great. I loved the interaction with the new family. I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From PandaGaara on May 22, 2012
    Love that you're back!! It seems because of Draco's word fumble Harry will be just as protective as those other female subs. Or bimbos as Max calls them. I've also seen those baby leashes in real life and every child looks miserable. Harry should set them all free!! Lol that would be funny to see.
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  • From Green_eyed_lover on May 22, 2012
    Praise the fanatics gods! I was so happy when I saw that you updated that I did a little dance! This was so worth the wait too, Alexander is one of my favorite characters especially when he's with Harry. I can't wait for more! Oh and whats ur addy for Facebook? I can't seem to find u *sob*

    green
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  • From ANON - sarahlouise on May 22, 2012
    Worth the wait!!
    I love Alexander and Myron... just love the huge family concept!!
    I hope Harry doesn't turn out like those other submissive mothers, but can't wait to read where you go with this.
    Usually after so many chapters a story gets boring and just drags out, but ROTD is addictive and has such a strong plot with amazing characterization that I can honestly say I'm addicted to this story and crave to read more!!
    Keep up this good work and Congratulations for getting past the fanfiction drama.
    Sarah Louise Jones xx
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  • From Sera21 on May 22, 2012
    Wait, WHAT? Nasta burnt Harrys little skirt?? Wow, I can't believe he is such a prude...in fact all of them! Instead of enjoying Harrys minor foray into looking sexy and enticing his mates, they are looking for a way to put a stop to it by burning and removing them...:( This story already borders on being a bit to much on the sugary sweet/ fluffy side with every little problem solved within a chapter and love and hugs all around and I was so happy that you introduced some "fun play" in wich Harry attempted to seduce his mates...but apparently they think of him more as a son then a lover as they want to hide his sexuality even when it is only among the group --___-- argh...
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  • From imsandir on May 22, 2012
    Yay a new chapter!!! I was so happy to see a new chapter for Rise of the Drackens, I am really enjoying this story, I love the interaction between Harry & his mates. Can't wait to read more, it is one of my favorite fics right now. This chapter was great as usual, I really hope Harry doesn't become one of those overprotective subs because of Draco's slip of the tongue.
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