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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - spaz666 on November 30, 2011
    Finally they know about the Dursleys! I can't wait to see (or read) what the four of them do to Harry's "loving family"... hehehe..

    But about the birthing scene: I personally don't need it. It's just like a normal birth right? So really I don't need it, I want more Harry and mates!
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  • From ANON - A on November 30, 2011
    I'm interested in a female dracken birth scene. Keep up the good work. And SO looking forward to Remus making an appearance. . .and going ballistic lol.
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  • From AlphazSlut on November 30, 2011
    Oh, and also about Amelle's birthing scene. I don't really know, I mean if you want to write it you should, but I think it would be odd unless Harry or one of his mates was present since the story line is following them. I mean, I think if you don't we'll all assume the process is similar to a human female giving birth, but more feral. I do think we should learn more about Amelle, because Max's sister called her a bitch but we don't really know much. Is she going to be a key person in the story, like a bad guy I mean?

    Well, at this point I'm fairly certain you're the best writter in the world, so I'm sure whatever you decide will be perfect. xD
    XoXo
    Princess
    P.S. ALMOST 1,000 REVIEWS!! WOOO!!! That has to be a record.
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  • From ANON - Skizzy16 on November 30, 2011
    This is just a guess but is Harry's nesting place going to be the burrow? It's hight, it's got some really good hiding places, it's the only place he ever called home. To me is seems the best place at this point. I can't wait till the next chapter to find out nhow they are going to react and to find out exactly what the Dursley's did to Harry. Update sooooon xxx
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  • From ANON - marie curie on November 30, 2011
    Update! Yay super long chapter!!! "does a little happy dance"
    Thank you for answering my (very) rambling question. (Thought I posted this earlier but the review didn't register)
    Your characters and the way you describe the relationship between the mates is just amazing.

    I love Nasta!!!!! Big, cuddly and smart shiny dragon that he is, the scene with him and Harry was really touching and sweet.

    Bit nervous for poor Harry and all the questions his mates are bound to have over his life with the horrible dursleys, hope that all the mates are together for that, Harrys gonna need them. I always thought that the dursleys deserved a sticky end (preferbly with tons of pain, screaming and dismemberment... I think Harrys mates are going to deliver.

    Can't wait to read of when Harry starts searching for his nest, wonder what you will come up with. A cool tower with some boiling oil on top in a cauldron to use on approaching predators?

    I'd love to see the birthing scene both male and female versions (though, she seems to be a right bitch, I'm hoping that Harry gets the chance to have a go at her)

    Looking forward to your next update! Can't keep from checking almost every morning, I think I'm a wee bit addicted (I'm not complaining, your writing is the best addiction ever!)
    Best of wishes in this time of december and Advent.
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  • From ANON - Jazz on November 30, 2011
    It doesn't really matter to me if you include the female birth aswell. As long as you continue to write this story i'll be happy :)
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  • From AlphazSlut on November 30, 2011
    TT^TT CRUELEST CLIFFEHANGER EVERRRRRRR!!! Thanks for another awesome chapter though. xD I love Nasta even more now and I wanna see what happens when they get home with Harry!!! Take your time updating though, don't let me rush you, buuuuut I wouldn't be upset if you updated really quick again either, it is my birthday!! xD Hahaha, jk, take your time.
    XoXo
    Princess
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  • From FaerysWing on November 30, 2011
    The female birth would be pretty interesting, and I would read it if you decide to put it in the story. Are you going to do more of Harry's mates point of views? Getting to know how his mates feel about this mating (especially the older ones) is pretty interesting.
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  • From kitmistress on November 30, 2011
    *squeals in happiness* down with the dursleys! hehehehe...sorry...loved it as usual. but i thought females did it the same way as males or did i fabricate that in my head? it would work ether way for me, with or without the female birth scene. but lovely chapter and now i'm dying to read the next...will they be tourting the Dursleys? cause if they are I really CANT wait to read that ;D thank you for the update.
    Kit
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  • From ANON - mnfm on November 30, 2011
    Great, great! Another great chapter; and yes to the female birth scene!
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  • From Tesgura on November 30, 2011
    Oh I love this story! These past few chapters have been amazing, and I'm so looking forward to see if everyone can keep their cool after they find out what Harry had to deal with. I hope Harry doesn't start nesting too soon though, and end up hurting his mates. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - boxtersushi on November 30, 2011
    This is my fav story - I kept looking for your update last night & was so
    happy to see it here this a.m. Not really interested in female Dracken labor
    unless as an anecdote in story - (maybe when they visit w/baby?) would
    rather hear about life at Max's house away from castle. It's all good, thx
    for the great writing & Happy Holidays!


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  • From tiatan101 on November 30, 2011
    Another great chapter! Well Done. I read your ending author note, I would find it interesting yes, but I don't think that I would need to know about how a female dracken gives birth. Maybe in a side note or a separate story of deleted scenes for those that would like to compare.
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  • From NessaC on November 30, 2011
    Finally, Harry's past is coming to light to his mates! You've certainly kept us on our toes about that one long enough.

    Personally, I would be interested in reading about a female Dracken birthing scene, maybe if Armelle recounts it to Harry to give him a small inkling of how it might go? That might tie it in nicely, with Armelle, Cesear, and the baby coming over for a visit or something.

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From PaintTheLily on November 30, 2011
    Must... Read... More...

    This is the only disappointment with reading fics that aren't finished.

    Brilliant so far, can't wait for the next bit!
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