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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Jazz on November 18, 2011
    I hope that whole "the baby was still" thing doesn't mean anything bad :( now im worried.
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  • From ANON - GuiltyPleasure on November 18, 2011
    I absolutely adore this story. The characters are so well thought out, and the story line is great. I can't wait for each new update.
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  • From djaddict on November 18, 2011
    Fantastic 'first time' for Draco! Whole scene really hot.

    A bit disappointed that we didn't see the whole scene with Lucius & Narcissa but I suppose it was better for Harry.

    Can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on November 18, 2011
    GUH! *brain melts and leaks out of ears* THAT WAS TOTALLY HOT! I may have to re-read this chapter over and over again. I know, I'm a dirty pervert.
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  • From helga1967 on November 18, 2011
    This chapter was intense. I love the confrontation with the Malfoys and explanation of Harry about his fears but the final was supper! The sex was hot, passionate but also balance.
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  • From Dxinsider on November 18, 2011
    FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait for them to find out about Harry's past before Hogwarts heehee.
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  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on November 18, 2011
    Just caught up on your last two chapters, great work - they exceeded any expectations I had. If RL is getting to you relax, your updates will wait until you can do them without adding any more stress to your life. By the way, your comment on the Italian was correct but you could also have just 'mi amore'.
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  • From bloodshound on November 18, 2011
    no, no, not fucking hell, fucking WELL! *snickers
    Luc and Cissa's reaction was about standard from what I'd expect from them. bit of kick in the tail this little revelation. Still, once they get over their shock they should be okay.
    Har dodged the 'reveal my muggle 'family' are utter bias bastards' bullet again but i don't know how much longer he can do that.
    The parsel tongue bit was seriously cute and the sex was adorable to. looking forward to more. ^^
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  • From ANON - slash_adherent on November 18, 2011
    Long time lurker, first time reviewer (and is slightly ashamed of this fact). I have to tell you how much I adore and worship your story. I check for updates on it at least 10 times a day and no matter how bad or good that day has been seeing you update makes it that much better. I actually squee like a teenage girl on occasion, no shame!! I've even gone looking on LJ communities for recs like your story because I can never get enough. I think I've re-read from the beginning at least 5 times now. And I have to say that you know your story is good and your original characters are awesome when a reader wishes that there were a Harry/Max and Harry/Nasta pairing section on the site, because--yeah--I could read them all day. Not only do you have such amazing original characters for Harry but their families are just as entertaining and dynamic. I can't even express how much the little details, such as the scar on Max's other father, give depth and life to the story. Every time I read your story I'm transported into their world and as a writer that's not an easy thing to accomplish. You can put up chapters once a day, once a week, or once a month for all I care; I'm going to love each and every one when they happen and I'm going to continue to obsessively check for those updates. I really hope you never finish this because I want to go on reading it forever...so yeah, if you feel like just continuing on with their lives into infinity--I'm totally on board with that.

    So long review short, I worship at the alter that is your greatness and thank you for every wonderful word of this.
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  • From ANON - Jazz on November 17, 2011
    I've been rereading this story and I realized that I've been picturing how Blaise, Nasta, and Max look wrong the whole time. *hits head* like come on! how'd I miss this?!
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  • From ANON - marie curie on November 16, 2011
    I hope that you are taking care of yourself and getting some (from what you told us of your RL)much needed rest. The last chapter was great and a bit disturbing (rightfully so with the topic) with the memory flashback. Yes it might just be the time to kill some Dursleys right? (The books always makes me want to do something drastic when they are mentioned) It made me think of a question, does Harrys heritage with the whole magical animal edge make him react differently to punishment then as opposed to when he was fully human? Or is it more in the whole sub/dom department? Ehh that was two questions. Ups one more (only answer if you can make any sense of my ramblings (english is not my first language). Of the dominants (I think) I've noticed that only Draco has a form of punishment that can be applied to active situations (like deterring or stopping a behaviour) as well as after an incident has occured. Like the others uses different versions of controlling grips but we haven't seen them used when the fight or whatever is over. Is this something that works out between dominants, like taking different roles? Or maybe I'm overthinking it (in that case, sorry). Well I really love your stories and I'll read them as long as you want to write. I'll stick with you and the, was it 20 years? for the live and trials of hpm. All the very very best from the north!
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  • From ANON - Jodine16 on November 15, 2011
    Ah, the good ol' nightshift work. It's such a fanfic writing killer. I definitely don't write as much as I used to. My life pretty much revolves around work and sleep, with the occasional social outing. Take you time with updating, you're doing this for free and for fun, so it's not like you're under an obligation to post every week or whatever. :)
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  • From pinklady on November 15, 2011
    I find myself wanting to know everything about your story! I get frustrated when there's not an update, its quite funny.
    Anyways I LOVE your story!!
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  • From ANON - AeruneMinuit on November 15, 2011
    I wanted to wait to read everything before I finally sent in my review of the fic. I've been enthralled, having only started the story early last night. I've fallen in love with your portrayal of Harry and Draco, and am VERY glad that you chose Blaise as his other mate. I consistently feel that Blaise doesn't get enough attention in Potterverse fics. It's refreshing to see it. I also fell in love with both Nasta and Max as I read through, finding myself hoping that one, if not both of them, got chosen as I read onwards. I adore your writing style. It has a way to drag me into the story, and I found myself so entranced throughout the entire thing that I never wanted to stop reading. I adore the Dracken twist on it as well, including the twists you've thrown in. I am delighted to say that this is one of the BEST HP fics I've read on this site so far. I look forwards to see more from you in the future, and can't wait for the next chapter~

    -Aerune MInuit-
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  • From Recordkeeper on November 15, 2011
    poor harry he has been through so much. I hope he recovers from the trauma. at least now he has a family who loves him. great chapter by the way. I love the nesting instincts.
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