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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2011
    Awesome, i love learning about all the relations of Harry's mates!! I can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on October 31, 2011
    I started reading this story yesterday on hpfandom but switched to this one to read all you had written and finally finish ch. 30 after 1:00 in the morning. I've found it totally enthralling and look forward to your next chapters. Your story has given me quite a few laughs and I love how you have Harry's four mates interacting with him and each other. One thing I'm eagerly waiting to read is the meeting with Draco's parents (as they at least seem willing to welcome them to the family) and their reactions to not three - as Draco had written - but four mates, one of them being Harry and one of them only five {there-a-bouts} years younger than Lucius - I think that's one of the last things they'll be expecting.

    Keep up the fantastic work and - hopefully - there'll be another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Shay Khardeen on October 31, 2011
    Yay! 3 new chapters! Wow that was fast! You truly are a master! These last few chapters were just as amazing as all of the previous ones! I adore the families- though I'm waiting for Harry to bonkers on Myron- and I can't wait to find out how Richard got that scar! You are brilliant! Just... Brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Mari on October 30, 2011
    Yet more reasons to lump the Dursleys in as useless as Ron, I cant wait till a set of 4 overprotective Draken mates (AND their families) find out about how poor Harry has been treated by those vile folks. This chapter mostly made me so very happy and left me with a smile. I love that they'll have a little boy and that things are progressing. always a treat to get an update and I patiently await more.
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  • From dominique1 on October 30, 2011
    I love it can't wait in till they find out how the dursleys treated harry. and i love all of harrys family max is sister-in- law seems like a bitch
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  • From NessaC on October 30, 2011
    Last night, I had a dream about Drackens. I can't remember the details, but Drackens were definitely involved and possibly some characters from your story as well. That's how much I love this story. Keep it up!

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From ANON - Eternal Cosmos on October 30, 2011
    I think when Max will see the "charming mothering side" of Petunia Dursley he'll regret his words. That, or Harry's four mates are going to just kill them on the spot. God I hope so! Amazing chapter as usual!
    Take care!

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  • From ANON - Andrea Readwolf on October 29, 2011
    It's a boy! Yea! Aren't there just going to be a ton of happy grandparents. :D I was tickled over Max's family scene, what with him being a little under the weather and all--wonder what potion he was making and if it'll have any importance to the story. With Max being a potions maker and Severus being a potions master, I can't help wondering if the two ever engage in rousing debates and discussions of potions. Might be nice for Sev to have--gasp--dare I say it?--a friend. I enjoyed the meeting of families (previous chapter?), even if it was a bit much at first. No worries, just throw us those OCs and then occasionally remind us within the pose of how everyone ties back together. We'll manage. ^_~v Promise. Still, after meeting Blaise's, Max's, and Nasta's families, I'm really interested in seeing how the Senior Malfoys react to the whole situation.

    The Dursleys. [frowns] If I'm not mistaken, Voldie's gone to the ashes in this story, right? I'm remembering that right...so Harry shouldn't have to go back to Privet Dr. come the end of June or beginning of July, depending on your story's schoole schedule. But... why would the Ministry alert the guardians that a ward is expecting? What's the purpose of the plot device, and it's purpose within the history and protocals of the wizarding world, is what I'm wondering. Not to mention it would absolutely suck if I was a knocked up teenager who didn't want my folks to know and the ruddy ministry goes an informs them anyway!

    Still... Draco and Blaise live at home during the holidays, but Nasta and Max have their own abode, correct? Have they discussed where they're going to live during the holidays/after the boys graduate? I can't remember. With Harry being in such a precarious position with his pregnancy, I would almost think they would want to find their home and begin building their nests. Settling in, as it were, so they have a place to go for themselves during the holidays and after graduation. I just... I can see taking the summer holidays to visit each of the in-laws. Really, I can. But I feel the overwhelming desire to have MY home, my house that will be mine and my mates and the place where we will raise our children....and... [shakes and clears head] I just totally had a first-person-Harry moment there. Sorry. That's strange, but I can even sort of picture it--little larger than a "cottage", but not a manor house either.... Rambling and quaint, with fragrant herbs and flowers spilling forth the front garden and a crooked stepping stone path that leads up to the front door. Mmm...makes me want to play the Sims and design some homes again!

    Always a little thrill of happiness when I see an update. Looking forward to seeing where you'll take this. And I don't require an addressed response. Much rather see how your handle the plot instead!
    ~AR
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  • From NessaC on October 29, 2011
    Yay a boy!! Quite a family right there :) I'm happy Harry is settling in so well with Max's family, I'm forseeing a lot of grandparent involvement on that side! Looking forward to reading about Blaise, Draco, and Nasta finding out the baby's gender :)

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy21 on October 29, 2011
    I always have a giggle when I read the name Sanex. Over here its a very well known brand that is mainly known for soaps. Also shampoos and lotions and such ...:P
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  • From EyesOfMystery on October 29, 2011
    I love this nice long chapter. I know that it was probably quiet difficult to wright, and I am quiet grateful that you did write it; it really brightened up my night.
    I am liking all of your newly introduced character, I
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on October 29, 2011
    D&D means Dungeons and Dragons. It's an RPG that I play. It can get pretty graphic depending on who's running the show (Dungeon Master). They even have Mature-rated books (like the Book of Vile Darkness and the Book of Exalted Deeds). Anyhoo, I love Max's family. I'm with Harry and am curious about Richard's injury, but naturally it's all up to you whether or not it gets revealed. I can't wait to see what happens next, and the baby sounds like he's gonna be an exhibitionist when he gets older (sometimes they start early too; I've heard of toddlers who take off their diapers/training pants and run around naked; I can totally see that happening.
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  • From ANON - djaddict on October 29, 2011
    It's a boy!!!! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Just a little lol here - I think you missed Max's mom on your list!! ;)

    Really enjoying this more and more every chapter!! Please tell me that the Dursleys will be punished somehow!

    *bats eyelashes*
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  • From ANON - silver on October 29, 2011
    Awesome chapter! I hope the Dursley's get what's coming to them. I really hope Harry doesn't have to go back to them. It would be a catastrophe. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jazz on October 29, 2011
    I've given up on trying to figure out the families. I just kind of accept whoever Harry runs into and try and guess based on the following conversation. Speedy chapter though wow. merci. and i'm glad the baby's a boy. but now the question remains, who's da baby's daddy?
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