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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From 07dyso02s on October 26, 2011
    Love the story soooo much!!! It inspired me to write my own. When are Lucius and Narcissa going to find out and are they going to be good guys? please say they are!!!
    Love your story can't wait for next chapter.
    xx
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  • From bloodshound on October 26, 2011
    that was awesome and adorable. i;m glad the fall out from the fight was relatively on the positive side for Har. I'm also glad that Rons family find his behaviour offensive as well. He's being and utter dick.
    Har is going absolutely wonderful parent and any kid of his (with Har's four mates) is going to be overflowing with family. he was so Kyaaaaaaaaa worthy with those little girls. The explanation of the female couple and Har;s reaction made me lol. I love how you've left Har good and feisty. He;s no ones doormat. ^^
    Can't wait to see where you go from here and I hope Har can make that party.
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  • From AlphazSlut on October 26, 2011
    Amazziiinnnnggggg! I don't think that introducing everyone at once was too much. But again, when they want to meet Harry's family is when it'll REALLY get interesting. xDD I can't wait for that!! And I have a crush on like half the dominants at the party. xD The guard at the children's play area, David, and that super cute flustered one behind the bar. Thanks for another awesome Chapter, and please tell "Hope" to go fuck herself. Though is it weird, that I do hope somethings actually wrong with Ron? Like part of voldemorts hate/soul somehow got lodged in him in the battle or something? I dunno I feel like something's off about him, his hate feels too strong over something so dumb. Then he feels remorse like immediately after (like with the baby) so I feel like something else is going on and he doesn't REALLY hate Harry. :/ Well, anyway, can't wait until next time! Wish you well until then!

    xDD P.S. I just looked down and my captcha says "Intrigue Maximilius". Hahaha
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2011
    Wow. Thanks for the very long chapter. It was great to read about all the families.
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  • From Recordkeeper on October 26, 2011
    Thank you for another wonderful chapter. that is a very impressive word count. All the introductions were a tad confusing but not chaotic. i loved harry's interaction with the little girls. that was adorable. and max's grandfather was a great character. I also loved that harry beat the crap out of ron.
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  • From Kuragari75 on October 24, 2011
    yay! NEW CHAPTER!*does freak-out happy dance* I got so excited when I saw the update! ^^ I'm glad I made you smile, especially 'cause your story makes ME smile so much! ^^ I love that scene with dumbledore and harry. So nice to see a little relaxation for him! gah! I have never hated Ron so much! stop being a douchebag! I hope harry didn't kill him, I know how hard that would be for him and loads of other people! I can't believe you ended with him getting hit by a spell! SO MEAN! lol cliffhangers are evil! I can't wait to read more and see if Harry's ok, and who cast at him. And I am very excited to meet families! they sound like too much fun! I'll keep checking back!

    PS. I was reading through some earlier reviews and I saw someone complaining about how you made Ron the jerk and how it gets old and stuff. Honestly, I've seen why more fics where it's Hermoine and Ginny who flip it over Harry's chosen relationships. And Yeah, they're older but Harry's not really human and in the Dracken culture it's obviously fine! Besides it turns out to be good that he has older mates because he and Draco and Blaise only know so much about the culture! and if they were all teenagers I'm pretty sure someone would end up dead by accident. There's only so long so many teens can be around eachother constantly and not blow up at something.
    ... sorry, didn't mean to go off on a rant... it just bothered me that they were giving you crap for it. On another note! I heard someone mention Fred and George? The twins would be a fun appearance! if they're around you know. ^^ Wonder how Molly's going to react to Harry's beating her son... she's been really good to him so far so I'm interested to see what she does... if you put her in there, you don't have to! lol take your time and write to your heart's content! We'll all be here when you post! ^^
    Love it and Carry on, darling!!!
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  • From PandaGaara on October 24, 2011
    Haha how embarrassed will Ron be knowing he got his butt beat by a pregnant man XD I can't wait for the gathering and for the Malfoys to finally show up.
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  • From newtothis on October 24, 2011
    why does every body have to make ron the jerk it get old, ron does have some ponints harry 16 there 40 that a crime, so ron right, and even if the courts front them not guily we know they are becouse we seen it, so again ron has some points, could you be ok with your best friend dating a guy twice there age and was a murder.

    sorry just hate have ron the jerk, it get old.
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  • From ANON - Mog on October 24, 2011
    Ack! I'm so happy you adopted this story, you've taken it to soaring heights and the very best part is Harry isn't a whiny, constantly-crying sub. Seriously that's the best part. Patiently waiting for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - And The Fallen Shall Rise on October 24, 2011
    I don't normally review but I love this story! Your characters have depth and you are developing a very intriguing plot line. I LOVE IT!! (And you wrote who I wanted for Harry's mates BONUS!)
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  • From ANON - Hekate on October 23, 2011
    My word, this story is so amazing! I look forward to all the updates, and when I see you've updated it makes me smile! Thank you so much for being an awesome writer.
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  • From tamsinjr on October 22, 2011
    I absolutely love this story its awesome :)
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  • From ANON - Storm on October 21, 2011
    While I am saddened by long delays between updates because I enjoy reading your story I certainly don't think it's right that someone should give you grief over it. I understand not having a lot of time. I'm glad you updated but I wish you hadn't forced yourself to stay up all night to do it. I love your story but I hope you don't abuse yourself to gift it to us. I liked this past chapter and think you did a good job on it even if you weren't happy with it. I'm sorry people gave you grief and I hope people being rude and insensitive won't frustrate you to the point of quitting. I can't wait to read more and I hope you get some sleep.
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  • From ANON - Ti-tun on October 21, 2011
    Hello! I been reading this story for a while, though my mind is a bit fuzzy on somethings and I'll problary end up having to reread some chapters.

    But will Fred & George ever appear in here? I adore the twins and I love when they are protective over harry and threatening the dominants would be amusing :P, though not where the dominants would do anything but you know. And I think if I remember earlier from you replying to a cooment, that twins can't end up with a the same dominant mate? If doing this correctly, I think it would be interesting if Harely(that his the son-like dominant correct?) could end up with the twins with one twin being a dominant as well and the other twin being the sub.

    Was just a suggestion, you can ignore this if you wish :D.
    -Ti-tun
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  • From Cinder1013 on October 21, 2011
    Great update!
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