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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From kougalover on October 03, 2011
    29 farnheit? and ron is a total bastard
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  • From bloodshound on October 03, 2011
    good grief what a mess. Still, it was pretty stupid leaving him alone with Ron and dumber still to bait ron. Har knows about his temper. Well, finally, Draco's parents know of his partners... though I'm guessing they don't know about the whole Dracon thing yet.
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  • From ANON - djaddict on October 03, 2011
    Wheee!! Another chapter!!

    I knew something bad would happen with Ron, you evil author, you.
    And Draco told them just a little but not about being a Dracken? Interesting.

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From Cinder1013 on October 03, 2011
    *sigh* I'll never understand a no review policy.

    This is a very enjoyable story and fun to read. I hope you keep going.
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  • From ANON - paganwoman on October 03, 2011
    Dearest SM, This will cover both stories. I love reading your stories and while the wait is annoying, it is usually worth it. You put twists and turns in your stories that make them enjoyable and unique to the reader and it is always a pleasure to see a new chapter up. Please ignore the idiots who give you grief about waiting, these are persons who really don't know how hard it is to write one of these and sometimes it takes a long time to get it perfect. Wales sounds hot now, just starting to cool off here in the Gateway to the West, and beginning to feel like autumn is in the air. Don't worry dear, the heat you are complaining about now will cost you a fortune in the winter! Hang in there and keep up the good work. All my love, PW
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  • From PandaGaara on October 03, 2011
    Oh gosh I hope it doesn't take you 20 years to finish this. Lol I would be so old I could tell my children about this story. Lol can you imagine this "In my day we read stories about stories!" *laughs* that would be hilarious.

    I read this chapter so fast it seemed short! I wonder what's gonna happen to Ron? I mean hitting a pregnant person has to be punishable by some law..*hoping for the worst possible*. And hitting a pregnant Draken seems like a death wish. Hmm maybe Ron has a little run in with Harry's mates and breaks all his limbs mysteriously? Mwuahaha, I can't wait for more. *plots in her evil lair*
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on October 03, 2011
    Hey SLM! I caught this idiotic red head that was running like the hounds of hell were after him. What should I do with him? Right now, he's hanging by his big toes from my ceiling. BTW, he had pissed himself so I had to banish his clothes (EWWWW!!!!!) before charming some new ones I had transfigured from some random trash in my garbage can.
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  • From ANON - orkchild on October 03, 2011
    love the story. But to address sleeping in a heat wave take a thin sheet or towel and get it slightly damp place in freezer for at least an hour and cover your self with it to sleep. Or you can take a block of ice place it in a pan in front of a fan and let that blow over you while you sleep. Both of these work well. Hope it helps.
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  • From escapethefate on October 03, 2011
    Great chapter!! Please don't kill the baby! Oh and if it makes you feel better it's currently 39 degrees in Texas...I feel your pain.
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  • From ANON - Louise on October 02, 2011
    I recently started reading stories on Adultfanfiction.net and just came across Rise of the Drackens. I read all 24 chapters today and really enjoyed it. You hit on some of my favorite kinks with D/s and Draco/Harry. Will we ever see Harry meeting Blaise's mom? What about the confrontation Draco seems to be expecting with the Malfoy's? BTW - one thing I'm a bit confused about. In an earlier chapter, Draco told Astoria that she would be hearing from Lucius that the betrothal was ended since Draco is involved with someone. Yet in a later chapter Draco hasn't told his parents about his creature status or his relationship with Harry. Why would Lucius have ended the betrothal with Astoria (and he apparently did since she is now betrothed to some guy in Spain) if he didn't know about Draco's relationship? It doesn't seem in character for Lucius to end the betrothal just on Draco's say so since the whole having a Malfoy heir is so important thing. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more chapters.
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  • From ANON - baka_onna2003 on October 01, 2011
    I just want to say that your story is amazing. I started it yesterday and I haven't been able to close the screen since. I just keep re-reading it over and over and over. Usually in a creature!Harry story, I hate how the author suddenly makes him submissive and suddenly without a personality. You didn't do that though, which I really enjoy. I don't think that someone who offed a dark lord could be suddenly and magically become a piece of play dough, personality wise. Also, OCs more often than not make me lose interest in the story immediately and close it. It's something magical and special when I find a fic with OCs that not only don't annoy me, but I end up liking more than some of the main characters. I adore Max and Nasta, especially Max. I give you a standing ovation. You just did magic. This is definitely turning into one of my favorite fics ever. I eagerly await the next chapter.
    -baka_onna2003
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  • From lokifreak420 on September 30, 2011
    OMG I never really read a story that isn't completed, and most of the time when I search for one I make sure it is completed because I have a habit of reading a full story in its entirety in one sitting. I guess that I am a dork, but I absolutely love to read and find it frustrating to find an absolutely fantastic story such as this one. It completely blew my mind because I took a chance on reading it knowing full well that it wasnt finished. I sincerily hope you will continue to finish this one and write others even though I believe you had stated you had adopted the story. I just wanted to let you know that I have read thousands of fanfictions and I never really truely leave a review due to the fact that I have never came across a story that has gripped me like this one has, plus, I feel I really have no right in criticizing another persons work when my own is less than perfect, but I wanted to say that what I have read of this story is...... wow I really do not have the right words to express how I feel about it, and please I beg of you to finish this one if not for yourself then for the many fans you have hooked with 24 amazing chapters. Please email me at loki_freak_420@yahoo.com in your own personal time if you have it. I would like to talk to you I cant really say.... face to face but you know what I mean.

    Your sincerest newest fan,

    Celeste McLauren
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  • From ANON - ShayKhardeen on September 29, 2011
    Omg! I just discovered this story yesterday and it is soooo amazing! I absolutely ADORE your original characters! Especially Nasta so you can imagine how excited I was when he became the fourth mate! The only problem I have with this story is that there is no more! So... Please update as fast as you possibly can! I'm practically dying from anticipation!
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  • From Cinder1013 on September 29, 2011
    Yay for Nasta! So, I was wondering why Harry would go into heat after he's already pregnant? It's so he can consume semen for the health of the baby in large quantities?
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  • From ANON - addiena saffir on September 29, 2011
    wonder how this is going to play out? I'm also surprised that Ron hasn't got his ass beat by his family for acting like that towards Harry especially now that he is preggers.
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