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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From PsychoSmurf42 on September 20, 2011
    ch 23. great chapter. Had to go backwards to remember who Nasta was though. lol.
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  • From ANON - MrsFreyjaSnape on September 20, 2011
    YAY!!! WIN!!!
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  • From Aoede on September 20, 2011
    You have to write the next heat. I have to admit I am really glad Nasta is a mate. I am really enjoying this fic. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on September 20, 2011
    I went back a re-read (thanks for the quick reference). You said all the horcruxes were taken out simultaneously with old Moldyshorts. BUT in HBP, Reg went after the locket, found it and gave it to Kreacher for safekeeping (before Mundungus stole it from Grimmauld). Shortly after leaving the fake in it's place, he died. Soooo....I'm gonna guess that he's still there unless you prove me otherwise. Therefore, I'm looking forward to whether I'm right, or to be pleasantly surprised at your response. TTFN. BTW, I hope we get to see some other combos amongst the mates soon. I think I'd like to see Draco and Blaise getting it on, or Max and Nasta, or Max and Blaise, etc. etc. etc. YUMMY!
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  • From ANON - lucie on September 20, 2011
    i love this and i go absolutely nuts for it i can't click on the link fast enough lol as to your questions i think it might be draco that will step off the reservation so to speak because they haven't hashed out who's the most dominant yet now that nas has joined, as for the heat its a hot and i think essentual part of the story and i'm looking forward to seeing how the dynamic could possibly change now that there's 4 dominants, plus i'm looking forward to then becoming a proper family because with threesome/moresome there's that pitfall some writers fall in to thinking it's all just about sex and i'm so glad this story is masterfuly avoiding those pitfall's because its the better for it and i'd love to read more about sev and reg i love tnat pairing :-)
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  • From ANON - Chloe on September 20, 2011
    I CANT SEE BEYOND CHAPTER 4...something about it not having a proper disclaimer

    pleasepleaseplease this is such a good story!
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  • From Danyealle on September 20, 2011
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information.
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  • From ANON - QuintiliVare on September 20, 2011
    I accidentally realized that what I pictured Harry in this story to look like, and Brent(the super cute twink pornstar) are the same... Now every time I see porn with him I think 'hum... which one of his mates can the other guy be...
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  • From Jessica86 on September 20, 2011
    Loved this chapter. I thought it would be Nasta, but I wasn't sure. Though I did hope that it was, so I was so happy when you made it so.
    I think you really should write that heat, cause I would love to read it.
    I have a feeling that Draco or Blaise would be the ones to try and kille Nasta first. Perhaps as a joint effort? And then Harry could step in the way and save the day.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mitsu on September 20, 2011
    Oh. My. Goodness. This chapter is much win. Thank you so much for getting Nasta in there! I wanted him to be one of the mates as soon as we 'met' him. So happy right now ^^ Please keep up the great work, and I hope work isn't too heavy for you.
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  • From doxiesmom14 on September 20, 2011
    yes on the write...they better not kill Nasta,I like him. great chapter
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  • From BloodTear on September 20, 2011
    Those boys are stupid! I hope Nasta puts them in their place if they try anything because Harry obviously needs sex! Great chapter!=)
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  • From ANON - Jazz on September 20, 2011
    Damn how'd you know I'd skip ahead?
    I think you should write Harry's next heat. it'll be the first one where harry has all his mates and I'd like to know the "dom order" if you know what I mean.
    I thin Draco would lunge for Nasta first, he always seems to be the most violent one out of all of them. But Max would be a close second.
    also, NASTA NASTA NASTA NASTA NASTA NASTA! :D *confetti and rice all around* ...*i don't get it either*
    Anyway, love you, love your story, and as always i look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mnfm on September 20, 2011
    This is one of your best chapters. I always liked Nas and was afraid it was going to be left out.
    Please write about the next heat, I can't wait to see how they manage to deal with a Harry! Please update soon!
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  • From BoundnHurt on September 20, 2011
    YAY FOR NASTA!!!! I was hoping for him from the beginning. But Look at him NOW!!! *dances the jig* Wow.... its been a while since I reviewed. I have been enjoying reading your story that I just let everyone else review. But I just had to because I was hoping for Nasta. lol. I was like Come on. Give me my Dracken. but as to first who is going to kill Nasta.....hmmm, i think it would be Blaise. I mean come on...there is only so much patience that can be had. And I think he will be the one to blow up and try to shank a dracken.

    ANyways, you are doing a HELLUVA job. Keep it up.
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