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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From bloodshound on August 21, 2011

    I didn't see that one coming. We,ll done Harry for not letting your critter self ditch Dray. Still, poor Har, 3 mates and a clutch on the way and he still has school to finish. About that, will it be a literal clutch (multiple birth) or just called that cause they're dragon based? I know your hinting at 1 this time out but...
    Har will be most relieved to have that final mate. *shakes head. Only harry could end up with a pair of half mates.
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  • From ANON - Emma on August 21, 2011
    Also, I think Max should be the father of baby 1, he is most mature. It'd be fair if it was Blaisr, since he came first, but it'd be more logical for it to be Max.
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  • From ANON - Emma on August 21, 2011
    Max max max!!!!!!!!! YAYYYAYAYAY! The right man won :D I'm guessimg Nasta will be the grounding mate, although if Harry's already pregnant, why would his dracken demand another?
    Maxxxxxx! :D sorry, just so happy! It was so fitting after that mean one rejecting him when he was young, that he'd land the big price (Harry) in the end. Max
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  • From ANON - Jazz on August 21, 2011
    OMG I could KISS you!!!!! I know from personal experiance how brutal it can be to keep writing even if your dead tired so I deeply appriciate the effort.
    I must admit though when I found out it was Max I was all "aw NO!" but I'm glad that Harry needs another mate (though i think four is a little much) because it means that Nasta still has a chance! >:D
    Try not to push yourself so hard. I'm not saying that I LIKE waiting a month for a chapter (because I'm like a crack-head to your story) but set reasonable deadlines for yourself (like a chapter a week or something. It'll help keep you sane, prioritize yourself AND appease the readers.

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  • From theladykt on August 21, 2011
    Poor Harry.... life will always be complicated for him. Woo Hoo for Max. I like him.
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  • From Trowachan on August 21, 2011
    another fabulous chapter! keep up the amazing work! oh and i hope you do eventually finish this fic! i'll go crazy with the not knowing if you don't!
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  • From ANON - Luraji on August 21, 2011
    What?! What happened to Nasta winnning the votes? Did I miss something? He's still gunna be in there, yes?
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  • From ANON - Catty on August 20, 2011
    Actually, I don't mind the twist on principle, but I am disappointed that it wasn't one of Harry's known prospective mates joining them- like Nasta (who won the vote, after all) or Max. Instead, we got a complete stranger. I don't really understand why, since you had so many nice and enigmatic characters to choose from! To be honest, I feel kind of cheated after that useless poll, but it's your story, so whatever.
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  • From ANON - Shanda on August 20, 2011
    OK, so I've been reading some of the other reviews and one in particular caught my attention. It said that you mentioned that Drackens (submissive drackens) can only have one new mate per heat. In this case that means Harry would have had to reject Draco for this new mate to be called. IF that is what happened, I'm no longer on the hate side of the Marmite effect. However, I'm still not on the love side either because while most reviewers thought that lemon was hot I found it a bit disturbing. Especially, if this new mate is truly an unknown character =/
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  • From ANON - Pupcuz on August 20, 2011
    I think this new mate should have a shot. Harry is actually not totally pissed at Blaise and Draco which means he might have a chick thanks to this guy. Plus, he obviously wanted whoever. I say THREE MATES!
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  • From killerkitty on August 20, 2011
    so what your saying is, is Nasta isn't the newest edition. That's a shame. He seemed the nicest and his age was a bonus to your plot since you mentioned Harry doesn't care about age, yet he has two teenagers as mates.

    Update soon
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  • From ANON - Hazel on August 20, 2011
    any who, I sit here with baited breath waiting for your next chap. I love this new twist you have so glibly slipped in there. I still want Nasta, but it will put a 180 twist to the story if it is a completely new guy. but with the big I think that hints of Nasta.
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  • From ANON - Hazel on August 20, 2011
    You are so cruel were you left the story hanging. So cruel!
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  • From ANON - the horseman of death on August 20, 2011
    cruelty of cruelty i wanted all three *cries*
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  • From magentah on August 20, 2011
    I like the twist as long as it's not permanent! ;) At the rate this story's going, I will learn to live with it if it is. Everything is so deliciously hot. :D I'm surprised the three of them aren't more upset about not feeling like it was wrong to have a stranger involved. I guess we'll see what happens. Thanks for the update!
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