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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

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  • From ANON - Melibea on July 07, 2011
    I love Nasta!!! Great story!!!
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  • From ANON - LKW on July 07, 2011
    I'd say all three if you really want to go for a big bang.
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  • From ANON - Sae on July 07, 2011
    I'm glad that Harry is back to normal. I was wondering if Harry could spend more time with Maximilius and Arsenio before I choose which dominant I would like for him to have. I think that I have only seen Maximilius two times and Arsenio once. Is Harry going to be pregnant before he gets his third mate or is he going to become pregnant when he gets his third mate? I would like to know or are you going to keep it a secret?
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  • From ANON - Kyouteki on July 07, 2011
    Your story has a very nice plot! I love how you really define the Drakens, and that you didn't make them have amazing godlike powers over everything. It gets really old when people create creatures that have telekinesis, elemental control, super speed, super smart, et cetera! I look forward to stalking this story. ^_^

    I want to throw my vote out there for Nasta. He seems like a person that could explain things to Harry, Draco, and Blaise. Also, the teeth discussion piqued my interest!
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  • From ANON - Third Angel on July 07, 2011
    I still think that Nasta should be one of the the older mates. the way I read the dialog leads me to think that he had the most compatible personality to Harry's, though you could also include one of the first 2. I think it might get confusing if there are too many more new potential mates introduced, but that is just me. It just seems to me that Nasta has a calming maturity that Harry responded well to, and he seems to like cuddles. ;)
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  • From ANON - Anna on July 07, 2011
    Right, first things first: oops? Sorry, I should have known there was a reason for Draco's behavior. Sorry I went off on you, it was apparently completely undeserved.

    Now, when it comes to the age question, I think Maximilius would probably be considered an older "young" dominant and Arsenio and Nasta an "older" dominant. In this case, may I suggest that you adjust the "half plus eight" rule and instead just try doubling Harry's age? Because technically everyone older than twice Harry's age is old enough to be his father, and I consider people old enough to be my father, well, part of a different generation. That being said, I think Maximilius is awesome and should have the chance to become mated to Harry. Twice is the charm? He is the one who the Ravenclaw girl rejected, right? He is almost all a dominant mate should be: handsome, strong, understanding, charming, etc. But he is a self-described "child at heart" and I'm afraid I've never been sure how to think of people who say that as if it's a good thing. But it might be better to make him Harry's fourth mate (if you are planning to go for four mates) because with this whole unstable Draco situation, Harry might need a calmer presence in the form of an older dominant to "stabilize" the nest, so to speak.

    As for choosing between Arsenio and Nasta, each have their pros and cons. From what I understood of your characterizations, Arsenio has a very strong moral principle, but is very worn down with all the previous submissive refusals. As such, I think he's a little too submissive, so much so that I worry about him not being an equal in the relationship with Harry's other dominants. Remember when he was first introduced, you made a point in mentioning how he immediately backed off whenever Blaise expressed some form of disapproval toward his actions? I understand that you meant it as "Arsenio is polite and courteous regarding the first mate authorities of Blaise", but it made me feel that perhaps there is an age whereby someone becomes "too old and too worn out", and Arsenio has passed that age.

    Now when it comes to Nasta, as I understood it he's very patient, understanding, and brooding. He already showed that he has no problem standing toe to toe with Harry's existing dominants, while able to go against instincts to make Harry happy (handing Harry off to Draco). He also showed that he has a very strong moral code, and he's very protective of Harry. The only interesting thing is that I think he will very probably be able to out silence-treatment Harry, which in a relationship stand-point should prove amusing. My only objection to the match is his intense streak of independence. Nasta seemed like the type of guy who is very used to dealing with all his problems himself. This might create an emotional distance between him and Harry should there be issues that would need to be discussed between mates, but Nasta might not be open to that discussion because he's so used to being independent.

    That being said, I think I would prefer Nasta as the third mate and Max the fourth. If Harry should have only three mates, then I think I would cast my vote for Max, because I think he might be caring and nurturing enough to make him a good final mate for Harry.

    So now that you've read all that, do you regret asking for my opinions now? Never let it be said that I'm afraid to speak - or in this case, type - my mind.

    Update soon!
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  • From ravenwinter on July 07, 2011
    I've been having problems leaving reviews, I don't know why, but I'm going to try agian. I LOVE this story. Older? 16x2=32 would be the average for older. When I was 16 I had a 22 yr old bf, he didn't act much differant then a teen, depends on the person. I love all 3 of your OG men but it would seem to me that Nasta and Harry have a stonger conection, though I wouldn't mind seeing Arsinio at all, I think I must throw my knuts to Nasta.
    Thank you for the wonderful story *.*
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  • From killerkitty on July 07, 2011
    Nasta and Maximilius... I LOVE Nasta after that chapter... I want to be a Submissive Dracken to claim Nasta for myself!!

    Regulus Black seems to be the most likely character to have been Severus' mate.

    Cant wait to see how you continue and who you choose as Harry's mates or if their is another

    best wishes
    sarah xx
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  • From ANON - starsha on July 07, 2011
    I say pick Nasta cause I like him (lol) and he's in the story alot, and he is there for Harry lots...he is a good pick =)
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on July 07, 2011
    I'm going to vote for Nasta officially here. However, I hope that he can keep mentoring Harry even if he doesn't win (and it looks like Max is going to), since Snape will more than likely be insulting, since I haven't really seen him interacting with Harry so far. I wonder if Sev's mate was Regulus? All I've got to go on is description, but since Sirius died more recently, and was older than 19 when he did, then it can't have been him.
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  • From ANON - Luraji on July 07, 2011
    ...You can vote for all three of them? Damn Harry would have a lot of mates, lol. I'd throw my vote in with that, BUT only if it doesn't lower my vote for Nasta!! I want Nasta to win so badly!!!!!! People cant cheat while voting can they? There can't possible be that many people who like Maximilius that much. I liked Arsenio, but once Nasta can in, it was all him! Also, how come there's a both Arsenio and Maximilius, but no Nasta and Arsenio? Can you throw that vote in? I'd be okay with that one too.
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  • From ANON - _Xavier_ on July 07, 2011
    But if I truly had to choose between either Max or Nasta (I love all of your OCs, it is incredibly hard to choose between any of them!) My vote would be on Nasta ^^ (sorry for double posting, I looked back and saw that I didn't put this in there ^^; )
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  • From ANON - _Xavier_ on July 07, 2011
    I am happy that Draco got punished and is now being lectured on how he should treat his partner/mate because the stunt he pulled with Harry for just cutting his own hair because Harry was being his usual stubborn self did not go well with me. But I love how each character stands out on their own! After reading this chapter, my adoration for Nasta increased. I just love his character ^^
    My vote is still having both Nasta and Max be Harry's next dominants though.
    I really do hope that the dominants who have been nice to Harry and have interesting characters do find themselves a nice submissive but also still keep their ties to Harry =)
    Anyway, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Solice364 on July 07, 2011
    Nasta or Nasta AND Max whichever :]

    Isnt their a potion Draco could take to clear the potion from his system?
    How exactly did Drackens come into being?
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  • From blackcub on July 07, 2011
    Hey enjoyed the chapter and the short waiting period. What I don't understand is why you had Harry cut off all his hair in the first place. My favorite is defiantly Nasta. So thanks for the update, this is my knew favorite story.
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