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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Nikte on July 07, 2011
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  • From ANON - PrincessKay1128 on July 07, 2011
    First of all, I LOVE this story and I don't usually like creature fics. Anyway, I LOVE Nasta, and I totally vote for him.... BUT Max is sexy as hell, and I feel bad that the other sub turned him down T^T. I can't stand Arsenio though, I feel like his too kind natured and Draco especially would just walk all over him! It also bothers me that Max and Arsenio left at all, I mean if they really liked Harry and knew what Elder FuckFace and his nephew Dickwad were doing why didn't they try to find a way to let Harry know instead of just going home? I think Nasta has been very helpful and kind to Harry but is also strong and capable. I also feel like they have a strong connection (especially after this last chapter: naked dancing, sexy as hell when fighting, "How would you punish me? *blush*", need I say more?), and that Nasta genuinely cares for Harry and can come to love him, if he doesn't already. I also think that you really like this pairing (based on how much attention you've shown it), which means it would be better written than if you wrote a pairing you weren't rooting for. Always write what you WANT to write, or it becomes a chore and the readers will be able to tell, and then it won't be fun for anyone. (:

    SO THE VOTE IS: NASTA (or Nasta and Max, but NOT Arsenio)

    Thanks and for the love of god PLEASE update soon?? I LOVE this story!
    XoXo
    Princess
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  • From ANON - river girl on July 07, 2011
    Just read through a whole bunch of chapters all at once and had to get in on the vote. I like Nasta the best! I think he would fit in best with the other two dominants. He's mature, which seems to be needed, and he is a calming presence. Draco could use that and Blaise to, when the going gets rough. Just my two cents. I liked the other two as well though ^_^

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  • From ANON - Dekorx on July 07, 2011
    I believe 36 is plenty old enough! I'm 21 and 36 seems pretty big of an age difference... and Harry is only 16! The problem with this is there is a 20 year age difference. When Nasta dies, what will it do to Harry? (assuming he would be the new dom, of course) I am feeling partial to Nasta after hearing how much knowledge he has. I think anybody 30 and older would be considered an older dominant. You mentioned already that most subs only choose dominants in their 20's or teens.

    As for the vote? I think all three being Harry's mates would be pretty hilarious! However, there would be a lot lost with having to deal with so many dominants, someone would be left out. You should write a side story where that actually happened, just for laughs! Haha.. Hmm. I don't know who I want to 'vote' for, all three of them are likable!

    Btw, I'm kind of sad for the loss of Harry's long hair, I pictured it to be so beautiful!


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  • From Jessica86 on July 07, 2011
    I'm glad that Draco is being punished for what he did. Sure, I understand that he has to be tough towards Harry and I understand his argument perfectly. But he still needs to know what he can and can't do.
    And Nasta is just adorable. I love him. I would love to see him as the grounding mate for Harry. Because Nasta seems like the perfect anchor in a stormy world.
    I do hope that Draco comes back and apologises to Harry, or at least something similar. Cause I really want some hot smiut ;) and I want more interaction between the members of the newly formed family.
    I hope that you'll update soon again cause this story is awesome
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  • From doxiesmom14 on July 07, 2011
    great story...my vote is all three or Nasta and Max.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 07, 2011
    my vote is Nasta
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  • From kanibaby on July 07, 2011
    yea umm 5 mates a little much lol oh oh why not give draco a break and have him umm coplaes like a sign that the stuff is leaving him or something like that huh huh huh and i like the quite guy the most cause well i see him the most harry need taht kind of slience
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  • From ANON - csmith20 on July 07, 2011
    I love this story, and I like Arsenio as the third mate. The boys need an elder to calm them down.
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  • From ANON - Dx on July 06, 2011
    Maximilius is my vote ^_^
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  • From Akari-Seikatsu on July 06, 2011
    You say that you have no real excuse for you having taken six DAYS to update this story. But what about The Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy? What is your excuse for not updating that story when you were cruel enough to end the last chapter in a cliffhanger? If you can't figure out how to continue it let your readers know. Otherwise, well shame on you for neglecting an established and very good story for one that you've adopted.
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  • From ANON - Wolfmistress on July 06, 2011
    I love this story followed closely by "The Life and Trials of Harry Potter Malfoy." I like the idea of either or both Arsenio and Max as Harry's third mate. If Aresnio was chosen, the older doms will see it as a positive sign that they might one day be chosen while a different message was sent to the younger doms - youth is not everything. Max, on the other hand, would have a little pay back to the sub that rejected him so cruelly. The choice is hard there. Personally, I would not want to make the decision on how this choosing goes as I would probably wind up stating Harry was too powerful for three mates and needed two to ground him.

    I have two questions:

    1. What is in the book Harry was reading that worried Draco so much?

    2. Is Severus' mate Regulus Black?

    I found that for update notices I have story and author alerts checked on FFN and when I get the notification from them, I come immediately to AFF to read. An idea might be to post on your author page a link to your site on FFN and tell readers to check the alerts there.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter of "The Rise of the Drakens" and, hopefully soon, "The Life and Trials of Harry Potter Malfoy."

    Wolfmistress
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  • From bloodshound on July 05, 2011
    i had a thought... how can the poacheers tell if a kid is going to be a dracon? I vaugely remember reading that only the mum gets to pick up that scent as s/he and the chicks are usually in seclusion for the birth? If that's so, are the poachersw buying sight unseen and hoping the gamble pays off? Even with Harry as powerful as he is there's still no guarentee that the kids will be Dracon... is there?
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  • From ANON - Ganeshan on July 05, 2011
    Max all the way! Or all three, but Maxcomes first!
    And if I were Harry, I'd get back on Draco, or refuse to sleep with him for that kind of abuse. "In his nature", sure, but Blaise haven't been spanking or abusing him till he is an emotional and docile mess. Nasta can have Draco's place if that is how he intend to treat his lover, the mother of any child he could have. Draco just pissed me off here, so with Harry's temper, he should be plotting revenge or curling in on himself the moment Draco tries to touch him again. I wanna see Draco sorry for what he did, even if it was "within his rights", there should still be limits as to how much Harry has to lie down and take. The hair or the attitude did NOT warrant such punnishment and was more of Draco's excuse to spank him! Harry can't be okay with this!
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  • From ANON - unicorn53 on July 05, 2011
    First I want to tell you I love this story and am always looking for the next update. I am one of the readers who would love to see Harry with an older mate. I think it would help Blaise and Draco settle down and be a family easier. But I know you will work it out and I will just enjoy the story anyway. Even I have started to work out my own version in my head. Thank you again for doing such a good job. Donna
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