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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From Lady_Arachne on August 20, 2014
    Loved the chapter! Really love that Braiden is starting to climb over his cot, and I love that Nasta's family are accepting Dain and Kailen!

    Really hope Draco is okay, and I hope that Healer is trustworthy; don't want him to find out about Draco being a Dracken and holding or handed him off to poachers during those five hours!
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  • From koizumi-Scarlet on August 20, 2014
    Gosh, I can't even imagine how crazy harry must be going, having to study potions and looking after babies, not to mention the amount of laundry they have!! Draco really should learn how to do more household chores, though I suppose we all love his haughty attitude hahahahah. Noooooo, why??! Harry doesn't get a break, does he?? First his children in the hospital and now draco!! I really hope draco doesn't suffer for too long. This can't be good for harry's studies, I won't be surprised if he fails his exam, seeing as he'll worry too much to study properly. At least he does have a extensive extended family to help them look after the kids, but still. Harry and his mates really have it rough. On the other hand, I can't wait for Ezrah's visit, though I suppose it won't entirely be the happy affair they thought it would be and I look forward to seeing what Braiden is going to get up to, now that he started climbing hehehe.
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  • From ANON - April on August 20, 2014
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHHHH SO MANY CLIFF HANGERS IN ONE CHAPTER MY HEAD! My head shall explode XD noooooo !!! Your fanatic stories are my personal torture!!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 20, 2014
    Awesome story. Draco doesn't have dragon pox does he? That would be bad.
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  • From ANON - Jane on August 18, 2014
    YOU. YOU. YOU. I ABSOLUTELY ADORE YOU! This story gets me so freaking emotional. I don't even know why I cried over this last chapter. This story is my go to story. I love Nerys and Idris and I can't wait to meet Nasta's grandparents since hello more awesome people!!! The babies are gonna make me cry with all their awesome development. Random thing though, how will Nasta and Max get everyone to know that they are all mated? I've been dying to know what they have planned. But on another tangent, THE BABIES! I just can't get over their cuteness and I don't know how you can write all of them so fantastically! All of them (adults included) seem so real and natural and you just get sucked in to their lives. I can't even believe it's been 2 years that they've been mated though. Where has the time gone? I've been meaning to write a review for the longest time. And I'm so sorry I haven't actually done it because you deserve every awesome compliment of all kinds because you are just phenomenal and I've been reading other stories of yours without even realizing it (umm hello Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives,Building Families which btw is also mind-bogglingly fantastic)

    P.S. I can't think of enough words that truly describe how much I love this story and its subsidiaries and your other stories so yeah just a reminder you are freaking awesome :D
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  • From ANON - staar on August 16, 2014
    New reader !!!! First let me tell you that it took me 4 days to read all of this.....and I love it !!!!!!! This new twist to the Harry Potter stories is awesome !!!!!! This has everything I love in a story....You have made me laugh, get mad, cry EVERYTHING !!!!! When baby Leolin got sick I almost died with all the crying !!!! Well I'll stop now or I'll never will....I need rest and then I'll go and read your other stories !!!!!!! see ya soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Viral on August 16, 2014
    Darling I'm amazed to see you back so soon and impressed by your strength. I'm sending my best wishes and blessings to you dear. And Dain and Kailen's story! I totally wasn't expecting that. :) But it's a beautiful, tragic story and I'm so glad Harry ended up letting them see the kids. It should be fun to see how they deal with the little bundles of (not only joy, but also) terror. :) I get the feeling Tegan will have them wrapped around her adorable little fingers. So happy to see you back. :) May need to spam you with baby pictures until we have all eight on Twitter.
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  • From ANON - starlight fan on August 15, 2014
    Thank you for the update, it was amazing. Will you ever update "The Life and Trials of Harry James Potter-Malfoy?" I really enjoy your writing, it's fabulous.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on August 12, 2014
    Loved the chapter! So glad that things worked okay between them and Kailen and Dain, I knew that there had to be a reason they did see Nasta and his family! Really loved the cute babies scenes in this chapter, they are getting cuter and cuter, and each one of them are noticeably getting personalities of their own, it's amazing! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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  • From koizumi-Scarlet on August 12, 2014
    Yaaaaaaaaaay,an update!!!! I must admit, this fic is my alltime favourite creature fic!! I've read a few other good/amazing ones, but the effort I can see going into making this fic brilliant really pulls me in:) most of my fanfics I read on fanfiction.net, but I wanted to read rise of the drackens in its original form, not an edited one. The babies are amazing and I would name everything I love about them, but that would take forever!! I love the detail about the creatures, societies etc et that you wrote and especially how realistic it is, like the birth and so on. I don't usually like harem-type fics, but this one is amazingly well-writtenXD I look forward to getting to know the twins better, and to meeting draco's kids one day, when harry has recovered and ready hahaha. Greatly anticipating the next chapter=D
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  • From ANON - Viral on August 10, 2014
    I hope you're okay darling and you have my deepest sympathies. I never know what to say to people when there's nothing I can do... I just hope you pull through and get yourself to a doctor as well. Don't even worry about writing until you're feeling better, you've given us 97 chapters of a fantastic and beautifully written fic. Most don't even make it to 50. I do have one question for you though. Early on in the story you mentioned that Marianna went on heat, even though she was a dominant female. So when a dominant female finds a mate, do their heats sync up or do the families have to cope with both schedules? How do poor Sarah and Julia (the all female couple) manage?
    Best wishes to you, your family, and your grandfather.
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  • From ANON - Tasha on August 05, 2014
    Is snapes make Sirius' younger brother
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  • From ANON - Dominique 1 on July 29, 2014
    're reading and I just was think about. Blaise one cup of coffee and my family we would use a technical and have a 32 ounce cup instead of a 8oz since I said one cup I could imagine blaise doing something like that my husband did
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 19, 2014
    But can't a squib carry the gene? Assuming that muggleborns have a squib in the family, the magic must have come from somewhere. So if a squib had the dracken gene couldn't it pass on to a muggleborn?
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  • From ANON - Kayti M on July 18, 2014
    I absolutely love this story!!!!! I have been with it for a long time, and check on it religiously. I am sorry about your Grancha, the loss of a loved one is always very painful. That being said, I hope that you take whatever time you need for yourself before writing more, though I wait impatiently (can't help it) for the next chapter. Take care of yourself and your family before your work.

    Also, quick side note. In chapter 89, when Harry is telling the story about the Basilisk, the bathroom is on the second floor, not the first. Just thought I should clarify that so you can fix it at a later date. :)

    Again, this is an amazing story!!! I hope to see more for it soon (but not too soon, of course)!
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