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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Meechypoo on February 04, 2014
    I doing a great big happy dance here! I'm so happy that little Leo pulled through. It could have went either way because at that last stage it's just so easy to give up. Remus finally makes an appearance and tries to explain himself. Thpugh Harry is trying to move on and forgive, I think it will be a while before he will truly trust Remus again. It's wonderful how the mates support each other and give comfort how each needs. It's also good to see that Ashleigh has seen the light and is trying to get the help she needs. It takes hitting rock bottom for some to get a grip on reality. I hope she heals so that she can really be a part of the entire family.

    ~ Meechy
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  • From Lady_Arachne on February 04, 2014
    Loved the chapter! I'm so glad that Leolin survived!! I really love him and the other babies, I hope nothing else life threatening happens to them!! Looking forward to the next chapter!! :D
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  • From ANON - lilly.n.g.k on February 04, 2014
    i don't think i ever felt such happiness when reading a fic as i did wile i red little loe's comin come...i cryed and was so happy i laughed at the same time...beautiful ch!!!
    as much as it pains me to ask cos' i like the calm after the storm...whats going on with the trial?
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  • From ANON - DarkFasha564 on February 04, 2014
    Once again another compelling chapter my complements it was a lovely change to the those tear jerking chapters very heartbreaking I also noted if I may that you mentioned Ashleigh as well as her correspondence to Harry. Another question however as I'm unsure as to whether you answered this question before however are Max's sisters Dracken or Human? I apologise in advance if I'm persistent with this question however will we discover what was Harry's paternal grandparents fate? As I have yet to discover a fanfiction which covers it in a small area. I'm relieved as well as glad that little Leolin is alright again well done such an enchanting tale I can't wait for the next chapter once again hope to your wellbeing DarkFasha564 xxxx
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  • From ANON - astellig on February 04, 2014
    I had the tissues ready and am so happy that I only had to use them for happy tears :) thanks and keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Seliki on February 04, 2014
    I am soooo enjoying this you really bring the characters alive and whew glad Leolin is going to be OK.
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  • From ANON - momoko on February 04, 2014
    good chapter, I am very happy that Leolin got better and that Ashleigh is getting the help she needs. I hope Blaise will let his mates help him.
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  • From ANON - Emma Cady on February 04, 2014
    This chapter was fantastic! Even all the better that no precious babies died, and that we get to know the twins gender! Happy Days! I absolutely loved the bits with Farren slapping away the Jack-in-the-box, and Braiden sharing his toys with Teddy. So much cuteness for me to squeal over :) I also very much enjoyed the tying up loose ends with Ashleigh and Remus, that made me happy that Harry is going to have two less situations for Harry to worry about less.
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  • From ANON - DarkFasha564 on February 03, 2014
    Dear StarLight_Massacre I first feel I must congratulate you on such a well written story so far however I have a couple of questions although I feel I should admit my confusion at your last authors note is this the end of The Rise of the Drackens? I do hope not as I find your writing most enthralling I usually lose interest by the third chapter of most fanfiction and discontinue reading however I simply could not stop reading and so whilst awaiting the next chapter from you I read your other stories they are beautifully wrote. Now my other questions I was wondering will you at some point bring Ashleigh back perhaps in a better frame of mind or even Harry confronting her and she explains her reasoning? Also will you at some point allow Harry to discover what happened to his paternal grandparents? My final question if I may with Leolin being in such a condition as he is I hope he will survive my question however is this will this affect Harrys current pregnancy? With sincere regards and hope to your wellbeing DarkFasha564 xxx
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  • From ANON - ChrisVags on February 01, 2014
    Quick question. Does Ashleigh still have family? Just that with everything that has been going on with her I would think you would hear of them/from them
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  • From ANON - MonsieurFoxy on January 28, 2014
    So the AN at the end of Chapter 82, where you mentioned Leolin's dependence on Harry? Did you mean that in a literal sense in that Leolin needs the physical presence of Harry to reassure him and stabilize him emotionally so he can keep eating and sleeping normally?
    Or is it more absolute, as in Leolin NEEDS Harry to survive?
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  • From ANON - MonsieurFoxy on January 28, 2014
    Chapter 83. I cried so hard at this. Losing a baby. It's not anything I wish on anyone. Not ever. Not for the worst criminal on death row. Because it's a life, and a young life that hasn't done anything to deserve suffering and pain yet.

    I'm reading Chapter 84 because I need to KNOW what happens next.
    *grabs a fresh box of tissues*
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  • From ANON - MonsieurFoxy on January 28, 2014
    OMG. CHAPTER 74.... ;^; *All my feelings*
    *All my happiness*
    (Throws them at you)

    No really. I've been reading for almost two and a half days solid. I'm so... attached to these characters now. And now many thousands of words are you up to? I could copy-pasta and do a word count in Office.... But all the work you've put in. I'm really happy I finally turned the page and read past the first few chapters.
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  • From Jan on January 28, 2014
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 86, and I'm hoping it's with bright big smiles that Harry and his mates bring home their little fairy baby back ^_^
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  • From Araea Swiftwind on January 27, 2014
    Loved this chapter, but one note, it's tenter hooks, not tender hooks.
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