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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - ShikaBear on December 05, 2013
    Another wonderful chapter. I have had a kid roll off the bed and hit his head on concrete before, so I could totally empathize with the terror of seeing a kid in a precarious position and worrying if they will be okay. Poor Harry, he is having nightmares, the minds way of working through your worries. Hope he totally works through them soon.

    I always love seeing the family get together, it's so great to see Harry with a big supportive loving family. But did they not invite Remus because of the whole getting married/having a baby thing and Harry not wanting to get into an emotional confrontation with him? Or did Remus not show up?

    I loved the slave scene. It was wonderful. I really want Nasta, Max, Blaise and Draco, please, can I borrow them on the weekends?
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on December 05, 2013
    I don't think I reviewed the last chapter before this new one so I first want to say how amazing that one was!!! It's always interesting to see how you will write harry's heat each time. This time is was "wham" just like that and it started. lol. poor harry will never get but a few moments warning then it starts.
    As for this chapter: OMG Leolin was totally the star!!! The cutest little Fairy baby ever! I can't believe he has such a big new development, coping harry's facial movements. That's a huge step! Also I loved that harry had a great birthday and a wonderful birthday present from his mates. Awwwweeee. So cute!
    As Always I cant wait for the next chapter :-)

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  • From ANON - DarkLady19 on December 04, 2013
    Oh my. Please excuse me while I mop my puddle of drool off the floor.
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  • From ANON - AR on December 04, 2013
    A fabulous read, as always--and what a lovely treat to find after a rather crappy workday, so thanks!

    Too cute with Leolin mimicking Harry, and Calix saying his first word--won't Harry be a bit peeved he missed that when they finally show him the video? I'm in terrified awe that any baby would have the perseverance and determination to crawl up an entire flight of stairs... sickening. And let's just say "master" = HOTHOTHOT and leave it at that! ^__^

    I'll be eagerly looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - slmncpm on December 04, 2013
    awww i love that leolin was copying him, such a sweet babie, of course i love all of them. the slave play was magnificent, i want a robe like that!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo64 on December 04, 2013
    Loved this chapter! When the boys said they had a birthday surprise for Harry and the title of the chapter is fantasy, I was just hoping it was the sex slave fantasy that they talked about in a previous chapter! It was everything and more that we've come to expect from these sexy Dracken! I loved the gag gift that Richard snuck in and I can just imagine Harry's embarrassed reaction. On the topic of everyone's reaction to Regan falling down the stairs, I can sympathize. When my son was a little over one and toddling we had a similar incident with him. We came home from shopping and he was playing in the living room of our townhouse while my husband and I brought the groceries in. Little did I know that the basement door was cracked open and not locked like normal. I came in with the next batch and noticed the door wide open and heard a thudding noise. I ran to the door and looked through the doorway to see my son falling down the stairs. Fortunately he only had a small scrape and bruise from brushing the concrete wall on the way down and other than being scared and a little shocked he was perfectly fine. Accidents happen with our kids no matter how cautious and you can only hope they are seriously injured! Harry's reactions were still perfectly normal for any parent!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 04, 2013
    I like this chapter, I like the fantasy at the end very much.
    thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Bamarose on December 04, 2013
    Loved it! Regean falling down the stairs though I was sorta prepared for it cause of the sneek peek on facebook still gave me a heart attack. The party was awesome I like it when Harry bonds with other submissives its cute
    The guys gift to Harry was hot and totally awesome but I think my fav part was with Leolin copying Harry that was adorable!
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  • From ANON - BriBB on December 04, 2013
    Thank you so much for the explanation, looking forward to the chapters to come.
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  • From Arithmancer on December 04, 2013
    Lovely for Harry's birthday. I love the showing of how it shocks Harry, but he loves it once he gets into it. Realistic!
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  • From ANON - Mama-purr on November 30, 2013
    Was wondering will we be seeing Harry's other family anymore? We had a part where his aunt was the main point will they be back? I would love to see there thoughts on the trail oh and just to let u know this is my first review but my 20th time reading this fix :) it's so great!!! Keep it up please
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on November 30, 2013
    This is a very interesting story so far and I like it but the selective reproduction is quite gruesome even for a story on this site
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  • From ANON - Kartsu on November 27, 2013
    I love this fanfic. I have read this story very long time and I always wait for next chapter. I think you do amazing job with this fanfic. :)
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  • From ANON - BriBB on November 26, 2013
    I love this story, but I do have one question, will you be explaining why Ashleigh acted the way she did? I can't remember the exact chapter but she is still on bad terms with Harry due to her comment about the kids normally staying with the family of the submissive. This is simple curiosity and I love how the story is turning out. I think you are doing an amazing job. Like I said I'm just curious.
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  • From ANON - SilentlySinful on November 23, 2013
    God, I just love this story so much. I just started reading it a few days ago and I haven't been able to put it down since. Including reading when I'm not busy at work and staying up at night reading until I just can't keep my eyes open anymore, and even then I try to force them to stay open so I can finish the chapter. I can't wait for the next chaper and now I'm off to read Scaled Bits too so I can keep up with the both of them. You're an amazing author and I hope you keep up the amazing work and don't let people like that CM person get to you, s/he obviously has trouble following basic story lines.
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