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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Sylvia on November 22, 2013
    I started reading this fic at the beginning of this year and haven't stopped. I absolutly love your writing and look forward to each chapter as they come and hope they can come quicker but I understand that they need there time, but I still kill me waiting!! Arrrr amazing. I love the dinamics of Harry and his family and that you have original an old characters.. Thanks for keeping me on the edge of my seat startlight mass xxxx Sylvia xxxx
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  • From Jan on November 22, 2013
    Yay, I'm gone for a little while and come back to find not one but three chapters updated, my lucky day ^_^

    But is it wrong of me to still be asking for more? **looking up with puppy eyes and a pout**
    "Please update chapter 81 soon?" **pout**
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  • From dark-huntressmoony on November 21, 2013
    I began reading this story when i was pregnant with my Daughter. And now i can relate even more to Harry about wanting to slow time down, enjoy my baby being a baby. She's 4 months now and growing fast, she's started babbling and everything and my heart clenches every time. I still love this story and I really can't wait for more. At least now i understand how poor Harry feels though i can barely deal with my one husband and he has four mates to look after him lol.
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  • From ANON - e. pressnell on November 21, 2013
    it was just Brilliant.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on November 21, 2013
    I can only think that it would be harry blaise and draco in their quidttich gear but so brilliant love that the babies or starting be more active tegan is so boss and the boys just her little minions the more they learn the cuter it is i so hope that sean comes back to his mate looking forward to more
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  • From ANON - Lyoness on November 21, 2013
    I kinda hope that Harry now is pregnant with Dracos baby - it doesn
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  • From ANON - AC7 on November 21, 2013
    Funny how you say in your author note about the trial that you haven't forgotten, good thing cos I did, there's just so much happening in this story at the moment, from the Harry, Draco and Blaize graduating( which seems like such a long time ago, but only a chapter back); and the trip to faeries, so I've decided to start saving up chapters and reading in one hit. You must have such an awesome system to keep track of what's happening all the time. I loved this chapter, from seeing Nasta and Harry being protective of little Leolin, to the fighting of the faerie court to the Max, Blaize and Draco discussing the possibility more children and Max's insight to Nasta's position I found very interesting. Harry's thoughts on what his mates might think of more children and lastly I felt sorry for poor Nasta, he has such a big role in their family and to see the weight of that responsibility shows how strong he is as a person to be able to hold it together and teaming that with the information from Max show a bit more depth to Nasta character. So thankyou for sharing these little insights to each character and a little bits of information of the past. Now onto the next chapter, which I was surprised to see was up so quick. :D
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  • From ANON - unicorn53 on November 20, 2013
    Starlight, I just can't understand why readers can not read your creation for what it is. A wonderful story about Harry and his mates. I look forward to each and every chapter and read it over a couple of times because I know I miss things. But for someone to just sit and pick on your creation is wrong. You are right in telling them to go find another story to read. But I don't think that will satisfy them and they will just complain about that author. Keep up the great writing and I always look forward to anything you write, and I am in the process of reading all of your stories. Look forward to the next chapter. :))))
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  • From ladilyndi on November 20, 2013
    Wonderful chapter, as always. Alexander should be a riot if Harry has one of Draco's babies as he did "get in there first."
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2013
    Thanks for the update. A lovely treat to find at the end of a work day. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on November 20, 2013
    I loved Harry's heat period and they way Max distracted them all as they waited for it to start. Harry's still stressing over the visit to the faerie city but hopefully they'll get a good handle on Leo's routine. I did notice that Draco was the first to Harry during his heat period so let's hope that gives him a better chance for one of his own this time! Can't wait for the next chapter!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Obsesive Reader on November 20, 2013
    Loved this chapter, even if it was a short one. I was waiting for Uncle Nico to pop up again. I was wondering if you were ever going to have Blaise's paternal family pop in or are they going to remain stubborn and ignore him as usual?
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  • From ANON - Aldurn on November 20, 2013
    First of all, let me start by saying I truly enjoy your work. I have yet to read the last chapter, but I finally figured out what bothered me about the last one, and I believe this is a recurring thing in your writing style. What follows is some unsolicited advice, which I think could improve the story if taken to heart, but which you'd have every right to ignore as well: after all I'm just a random internet stranger who couldn't come close to writing something as enjoyable as Rise of the Drackens. ;)

    In the previous chapter, 'Audience', it felt to me like you focussed on developing Nasta's character in one particular way: pointing out how hard it is for him to be the top dominant. While this is important, especially in the case of original characters, it shouldn't feel too forced. In contrast to Max's development, which was much more fluent, it seemed like Nasta's personality and responsibility were being stressed too much.

    "Honestly, I don
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  • From ANON - eaglexeyes on November 20, 2013
    absolutely loved the last few chapters which I had not read previously.

    Please keep writing and don't let life get you down. You have a wonderful story going and I look forward to reading it in it's entirety whenever I get the chance.

    Keep writing as life allows.....
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  • From ANON - HeavenScent on November 18, 2013
    Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I've read this story a number of times now and I LOVE IT!! So kudos to you and your perseverance :) And your planning, all the babies are absolutely darling and I just wanna cwtch them! With permission of course ;)

    HS
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