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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Kat on July 12, 2013
    I am so sorry for your loss. I might be going through the same thing in the next few months. My cat is 17 and getting worse quickly. When you have had them this long, a cat is not just a cat. Mine is my baby.

    I would love an update quick, who wouldn't? But do what you need to before you worry about us out here. Also, I hope Smape did not just die. That would make me miserable :'(. Other than that, I LOVE this story!
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  • From ANON - Moonchild16 on July 12, 2013
    Oh wow! I cried so hard at the end I had this idea that somehow that he would pull through but I think that I knew that he wouldn't make it. I loved the chapter and am really happy with the way the chapter even if I cried like a baby at the end but that might be why I love it. Thank you for the update!
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  • From ANON - quaff on July 12, 2013
    This is a wonderful story and a joy to read. Thank you so much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 12, 2013
    This was such a sad chapter, between Max and Severus :( I was hoping things would turn around for Severus but alas.

    I'm very sorry to hear about your cat.
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  • From ANON - Panda on July 12, 2013
    This was a very awesome chapter. Poor Max.

    Sorry to hear about Suki... RIP Suki *HUG*
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  • From Meechypoo64 on July 12, 2013
    I'm so happy the boys are done with there exams and can now enjoy life in a more regular environment. Poor Max having to go through wi his threats in even a "fake" manner has devastated everyone but we can only be hopeful their plan will work. I cried when Severus died because I kept hoping that something would spark an interest in him again but he has lived for so long without his mate and only painful questions in his heart. Now that his questions are answered his heart has emptied as well as his soul. May he find peace in his next grand adventure.

    I'm sorry you lost someone precious to you. Our animals can often feel like our children especially when they've been a part of your life for so long. I thank you for taking the time to post and hope you take time for yourself to grief and find comfort where you can!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Lady_Arachne on July 12, 2013
    No!! He can't be dead!! Please tell me that Severus didn't die!! *sniffles* I hope he just went to sleep, that he didn't die!! *sniffles*

    And, Braiden is standing~! I wonder when he will start to walk~!! :DD

    ...

    *sniffles* I really hope Severus is still alive and just went into a deep sleep that didn't allow nightmares to get through~!! :'DD
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  • From ANON - lola on July 12, 2013
    poor Sev :(

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  • From ANON - Tinkerbabe7 on July 12, 2013
    I loooooooooooooooooooooved this chapter just like I always love what you post :D
    I'm glad they can now move on from the stressful exam week.
    I feel so bad for Max. I hope his mother can finally come to her senses or his fathers make something happen. I fear this will cause more complications with Richard.
    I felt so sad at the end for Severus. I hope he is reunited with Reg.

    Condolences for your loss. I wish you the best in this sad time and hope that you and your will be fine eventually. I bet your cat was very awesome :)


    P.S. The only thing that confused me was this sentence, "He knew this was his ending, he had nothing left tying him to this world except a grown godson in Blaise and a self-taken on ward in Potter, who was also grown." I believe you meant Draco as his godson. Just thought you'd like to know.
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  • From ANON - Outlawgal on July 12, 2013
    what an ending. I feel sorry for Severus but its better for him in the long run.
    Poor Max too.
    Who your chapter is sad all the way around.
    Ok I lied you did have a happy medium with Braiden standing.
    Im sorry about you cat I know how you feel I had to do that same to my dog. I hope you feel better soon and take your time with the update. Losing someone or pet you love is always a hard thing to cope with.
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  • From alma on July 12, 2013
    I'm sorry to hear about your little Suki. It'll be okay, just spend time with your family.
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  • From StarrCrystal on July 12, 2013
    Wait....wait....this is the end?? Like the END? No...noo...naw...this CAN'T be the end. Seriously. It can't be.
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  • From ANON - bluekitnaru on July 12, 2013
    harry has an amazing control over his dracken ether that or he's far to stubborn to give up
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  • From ANON - suzie on July 09, 2013
    Thank you so much for this story, I love the voice you have. It is easy to take a story already developed and make a side story with the characters. you on the other hand have created a whole new world, one in which I love very much.. You could very easily write your own books...
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on July 09, 2013
    I loved this chapter!!! And shame on those people for giving you a hard time about the story coming to a close. All stories end. It just hits some readers harder when such an amazing piece of literature, like yours, ends. I could give several examples of well known works but we all have a fav story that we just have to re-read over and over because we know there will never be more coming. That's why there are books called classics! I believe that yours falls into this class, even if its a fan fic. It will be something that when I'm in the mood for a great harry family fic, I'll turn to this one to re-read. So thank you for all your hard work and imagination that you put into this piece. Those others need to understand that and not give you grief. We should all be thankful that you didn't abandon this work! So also thank you for that!!!

    As to reviewing the story, aaweeee poor sweet Farren. The cutie pie has four teeth to cut at once. It made me want to cry for him. All the kids were adorable in this chapter. Also you sooooo are making me rethink about "if I were a witch I would love to go to Hogwarts" because of how hellish you make their testing sound! But its so realistic! And I feel for Richard. I have a friend that has a very stressful job dealing with neglected kids and she likes to off load stress by telling me how her day was. I try and be like Myron and listen but some stories I just have to say "stop! I can't hear that it's too horrible!" PS she isn't breaking any confidentiality rules, she just gives me bare basics of her day but it helps her detox. So I can completely understand how drained you have written Richard to be. I've seen her that way too, poor thing. Dealing with kids being hurt is hard and hearing about it harder but it makes me be more proactive and help organizations that can help them. I think your story might be helping other too in that way. Even if it's all fictional, it still is a very scary thought and I just know you have helped open peoples minds to getting involved. Thanks for the great chp!:-) See you next chapter!
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