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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From Meechypoo64 on April 11, 2013
    Congratulations on the reporting anniversary of this story. I started adding it just slightly before it was torn down and one of many who are ever so grateful you decided to keep posting this story even if on another site. I even reread the chapters on Ffn when they were slowly reported to refresh myself with the goings on of our favorite boys. Thanks for such a wonderful story.

    All through this chapter I kept waiting for the other shoe to drop. Harry had some great moments I. This chapter where he got to st relish in his relationship with his dominants and babies but as always drama follows him everywhere. I can't wait to see what Nasta and Max have planned but I'm very saddened by the fact that Remus failed to include Harry in his life if even in letter more frequently to let him know of big and important changes. Something is definitely going on there that we're missing details for. Let's hope that Harry and Remus can patch ofmtheir relationship without further damage.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Johnny on April 11, 2013
    I love this story! Thanx so much for re posting and continuing to post and write it it is truely amazing!
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  • From ANON - mistalis on April 11, 2013
    What a wonderful way to end the other day before I go to bed, and start this new day which happens to be my birthday then with a new part of the story to read. Thank you for making this a wonderful beginning to my birthday for me. I always look forward to, and crave updates for this story so please keep up the great work.
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  • From Bickymonster on April 11, 2013
    Brilliant chapter. Loved it, I usually don't really like quidditch match scenes but this one was good. poor Harry though, stupid Remus being an idiot. I can't even begin to tell you how glad I am you worked through the ff.net problems and reposted, and carried on writing.
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  • From ANON - Takamiko22 on April 10, 2013
    Honestly I love this with a passion! But I am begging you with everything in me, don't kill Richard. Please don't kill Richard! I couldn't take it if that happened. I don't want to sound selfish, just please don't do it. Still love this though.
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  • From Jan on April 07, 2013
    Don't want to think what would happen if Myron wasn
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  • From ANON - Sarah11 on April 07, 2013
    This story is amazing! I've been looking for a good story to lose myself in- and my search is complete. It's not often I like OCs but Max, Nasta and their families are so well done and believable, it's hard not to love them! ^_^ Please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - richon on April 07, 2013
    love your story love harry in Dracken he is so cute with hisbabies and mates !!!craving for more
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  • From ANON - Katonie on April 05, 2013
    I was just reading through this fabulous fanfic once again, when I decided to actually look at the responses to various reviewers at the end of each chapter and I must say, you are pretty damn awesome. There seem to be quite a number of readers that are skipping over the important bits and having the balls to ask you to reiterate what was already written in the story. My personal opinion is that if you like a fic enough to review it, you have enough interest to go back, read it again, and again, and maybe again, and only ask a clarifying question once you're sure it hasn't been answered. I appreciate how you tell people to go back to previous chapters and look the answer up themselves, it's refreshing and I wish more authors did that...because dumbasses shouldn't be rewarded for their dumbass-ery. I hope you get a bigger group of people that aren't asking stupid questions than the group of people that are asking stupid questions, because you have built an interesting, believable world and you shouldn't have to waste your time looking at uninformed inquiries about it.

    Hugs & Kisses
    Katonie

    PS - Can't wait for the next update, cliff hangers are murder.
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  • From ANON - GuestAnon on April 03, 2013
    I've got a few questions for you.

    What if, and this is basically hypothetical, by a strange twist, a female submissive slept with a male submissive thinking that the male was going to be dominant or thinking that she was sleeping with a human, with Harry's version of circumstance of not knowing his dracken heritage, to do what that Solange girl did to get rid of her womb? Would either become barren or would it be seen as something else?

    Also: say there are two or three drackens, anywhere in the world, with something similar to and/or like Harry's circumstances(Example: One of them lives in an orphanage and uses his/her magical school given orphan funds to get what they need when the need it yadda yadda, one of them is the last heir to the house but everything that was left to them was just funds because for whatever reason the house and all his/her history went down in... a blaze, an explosion, a raid when he/she was young enough to not really be interested in history and lives with a friend's family or family friend, whatever, and the last could... be living with his/her grandparent(s), alone, on the street.), in a certain proximity, one submissive and the other two dominant, and they come into their inheritance and they mate. First dominant with the submissive, and both are freaking out trying to fight their instincts but not willful and too full of fear to do so successfully, they mate and basically the same thing happens with the second one but no one else knows what's going on because well... they didn't know anything about their heritage. Not them and certainly not whoever is living with them. How would they be treated when they finally are found or they get driven away or they try, maybe succeed, maybe fail, and try to get some help finding more of them. That would be, maybe, a one in a million chance of happening but IF it did happen what do you think would... happen?

    Oh! And what if a disowned squib of a dracken line made a 'muggle-born' down the line and he/she became a dracken? Or would that even happen?
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  • From ANON - ice on April 03, 2013
    hi just wanted to let you know this is by far one of the best harry potter fan fiction's i have read it's original, well written, brilliant story line and i can't wait to read more.
    To tell the truth i discovered this story 2 days ago and since then in my free moments have read all 70 chapters i was actually sorry when i had finished because it is just that good can't wait till the next chapter. keep going you have a dedicated fan in me.

    From ice
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on April 02, 2013
    I absolutely LOVE this story! Please, keep up the amazing work & write some more chapters!
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  • From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on April 02, 2013
    I love this fanfic it is the best one I have read and I have read about 600 of them. As normal it was another Brillant chapter from you, i am not looking forward to when this fanfic ends !!! What will I read?!!!!
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  • From truthseeker on April 02, 2013
    Wow now your made intrigued! Is something going to happen to maxs mom? Is she going to betray harry? Plse give us a hint! I love the progress with the babies and harrys relationship with his mates!
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on April 01, 2013
    WOW Great ending there. Really nerve racking! I love Myron and Richard so much that I wouldn't want anything to happen to them. The truly have accepted harry as family and family is really all that one needs (as long as their a good family and not like the Dursley's!!)
    Its so wonderful to see the kids all starting to grow and grow more each chapter. Braidan is learning soooo fast. I love that Baba Ca (to say that he did understand his brother was Calix.)
    Also I was just waiting to see harry find a microphone and be line "hey everyone I'm mated so back off me! And Don't even come near my mates or kids" LOL. Man some drackens can be so dense.
    I'm guessing that the dracken meeting is to continue next chapter so that harry can see those little girls? Or did something happen to them? Duh, Duh, Duh! (Suspense music). Also finals are coming up which i'm sure will be nice for you as a writer. Now you can move the family from Hogwarts and all those evil studens.
    Well Great Job as always! Much Praise to you.
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