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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    Chapter I forgot to look again

    Finally they all have names! I wonder which one is the dracken!

    How sad about Harry's "room". And him teasing max like that. Tsk tsk

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    Chapter fifty four

    I like how when it was just Blaise an Harry, Blaise said Harry will not have a harem of men! But now that's what they call themselves.

    Tee hee

    Great chapter, as always.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    Chapter fifty three

    And they are born! Good job Harry to get them all alive and breathing!

    His poor mates.

    Have to read the next chapter NOW!

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    Chapter fifty something

    So Myron's preferred punishment is spanking? I thought it was timeout. Haha

    Love the little bit with Snape, I loved even more the retelling of Harry's first year.

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    Chapter fifty one (or two) there are too many chapter! But yet, not enough. Lol

    This chapter made me cry like the whole time. Poor Harry. I would have snapped user the pressure long before then.

    You hav an amazing talent and I just want to be sure you know that.

    Kupo

    Also, my captcha is spray cock, lmao
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    Chapter fifty

    Ew Ew Ew. Those food cravings made my stomach roll.

    Also, poor Harry with five babes. He's so small. >.
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  • From Kupowrath on January 14, 2013
    Chapter forty nine

    Doing this review on the computer haha.

    It's nice that they're back at the castle, Harry's first "home". I can't wait for them to truly realize what Harry has actually been through his entire life.

    They will post humorously freak the fuck out. xD

    To the next chapter! I can read til I pass out. lol

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - aramis on January 13, 2013
    This story is amazing!!!!! I practically read it all in one go! Thank you for an excellent story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2013
    Chapter fourty eight

    The amount of smut in this chapter nearly gave me a nosebleed. Haha

    The vacation was beautifully written, and the side piece with Remus is always nice.

    You rock, as always.

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2013
    Chapter fourty, I fell asleep in the middle of reading it and don't remember what chapter it was

    Haha.

    Oh man, I don't envy nasta sometimes for being the top Dom and having to make the hard decisions.

    Also I'm sad that Draco cannot be the father this time. :(

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2013
    Chapter fourty I swear I'll look next time

    Pregnant again!

    And oh no! He's gotten kicks to the stomach. Oh dear.

    I cried with Harry when Myron and Richard were mean. (Still weird with Myron being my dads name haha)

    Kupo
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2013
    Chapter fourty I forgot to look.

    Harry can only fight his instincts for so long. And poor nasta! He certainly didn't deserve a kick to his special place!

    Harry seems a bit whiny. Not sure if its on purpose or not.

    Kupo
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  • From LadyFreak on January 13, 2013
    Amazing as always! Thanks for keeping the story going. How far will you take this? Graduation? Beyond Hogwarts?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2013
    Chapter fourty something

    I forgot to review this chapter after I read it last night lol.

    I love the teasing and love the smut.

    Harry's mates reactions were priceless lol

    Kupo
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  • From dime on January 13, 2013
    Someone recommended this fic and I decided to have a look. So I read the first few chapters, just to see if I liked it... as in, the first 65 chapters... :P
    The story is a pretty fascinating mixture of Harry's childhood trauma, sex, and babies. I don't think I've ever read a story that made me both want and dread children so much. If your own pregnancy(-ies) was/were anything like you describe, I pity you for the extreme morning sickiness. On the other hand, the ḱids seem so happy most of the time, I just want to keep at least one of them for myself. ;D
    The sex also surprised me. Usually, I'm all in favor of threesomes/moresomes. It's good fun. And for the most part, I immensely enjoyed reading the scenes here. But some of them actually didn't appeal to me, were too rough, too primal, and not even truly remembered by any of the people involved afterwards. That just seems... wrong, somehow.
    Still, it really doesn't make me want to stop reading. *g*
    I had trouble with a couple of concepts. a) I don't think they ever went to that parenting class, despite everyone agreeing that it would be a good idea, first and foremost to calm Harry's nerves. b) This might be just me getting lost in translation: What's so bad about 'biological' washing powder? c) At first, I thought the 'platform bed' was just that: an elevated bed. But when things fell over the side and could be picked up by a person lying on the bed, I had my doubts. It took me a while to figure out that apparently, a lot more than just the bed fits on that platform. Hum, maybe I just skipped a line in the description or something.
    Regardless of those small problems I had with the logic and logistics, I enjoyed reading this a lot and am looking forward to furher updates. :)
    - Dime
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