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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From RikkaiDaiLove on September 26, 2012
    I don't even know where to start... This story is absolutely amazing! Your writing really draws the reader in. It flows really well, and it's very descriptive. I sat down and read this in 2 days, doing almost nothing else. I didn't want it to end. I even skipped a lecture to read this ^_^;
    I'm not usually a fan of creature fics, especially ones with OC's, but I saw this one and decided to give it a shot. I kind of fell out of the HP fandom for about a year (I know... Shame on me!) because I fell in love with an anime, and hardcore fangirled over it for about a year, but HP is my first and true love! This is one of the first fics I've read since being back.
    I love the OC's you've created. Max and Nasta are just... ugh they are wonderful! I think the best part of your story is that it goes so deep. Not only do you have Max and Nasta, but there are their families. I feel like you have created a whole world for the readers to get lost in, one that is both familiar, yet new.
    I know I have so many things I want to tell you, things that I loved, my thoughts and ect., but I can't think of any now (of course). I do want to say that I really, really, REALLY want a Max/Draco scene. With just them. Actually, I don't want it, I NEED it!! Also, I love the relationship the five have as a whole, but I also love the individual relations between each of them. Oh, and I have to say I like that you gave us Amelle's history. I like Caesar, and I've been hoping that Amelle would come around. I hope that was a start for a positive turn around for her!
    Well, that's all I really have to say for now, but you definitely have a new follower and fan of this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - quaff on September 24, 2012
    Is Luna a Faerie? Thanks for writing this wonderful story.
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  • From tkykitty on September 24, 2012
    A Lovely Chapter!!! I can't wait to see what ginny and luna get for harry. hehehe. Also I love Natsa's family making up with harry. Can't wait to see what the Scaldie Bits chpater holds.
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  • From tkykitty on September 24, 2012
    OMG Amazing Chapter. BTW sorry this review is sooooo late. I've has a massive amount of work load so it cuts into my dracken reading time. LoL. I love this chapter. It is so sweet with the family and yet I get this terrible foreboding with Theo and Greengrass jr. Maybe its reader
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  • From Woodlandspirit on September 22, 2012
    Just finished rereading the whole story, and I just got to say even better the 2nd time around. (:
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  • From ANON - Francis on September 21, 2012
    I cant remember, wich baby out of the 5 newborns is a dracken?
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  • From angeljin on September 21, 2012
    I am so in love with this story that I read all of it in a little more then a day and hardly even slept. I can't wait for the next chapter. And just so you know; I'm going to recommend The Rise of the Drackens to as many people as possible.
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on September 20, 2012
    You write so well it's sometimes hard to remember that each chapter can either flow smoothly or be a labor of intense complexity. I like the fact that in the last portion of the chapter you resolved the situation with Aneirin and Sanex. I appreciate that Malfoy senior is starting to cooperate and not be such a cold p***k.

    As always I loved the last two chapters, 57 and 58, and look forward to future ones.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on September 20, 2012
    this is so brilliant looking forward to regulas funeral in grandpa coming over to help want more
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on September 19, 2012
    59 is a great chapter! and my birthday was the 2nd... :)
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  • From ANON - Me on September 19, 2012
    I have to say I really love this, so does my dog Lady, to whom I read it out loud. She always wags her little tail extra hard when I say you've updated so keep up the good work and know you bring a little light into my life and the old girl's too/
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  • From ANON - kyuubichild717 on September 19, 2012
    Is Harry asking for cereal the start of his heat? love the chapter, poor Harry has separation anxioty.
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  • From pollita19 on September 18, 2012
    Amazing chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Lizzosaur on September 18, 2012
    I have mixed feelings... I loved the chapter as a whole, but as individual events, I'm not that thrilled. Why? Mainly because you made my little guy cry throughout the majority of the chapter! (I'm still glaring daggers at you for that one *wink wink*) But also, when you told us you planned on giving the younger ones a little more attention, I expected more one on one action with each individual baby. I felt that while they were mentioned more then most of the last few chapters and there were a lot of cute scene; I felt like the mention of the babies was as an aside more than anything else. Additionally, while I enjoyed the Lupin/Tonks scene, I felt that it was rather random. Sure it gave a lot of backstory that I know people have been hounding you about, but I didn't really see the connection of it to this chapter. Other than those points, I thought it was wonderfully written and I enjoyed the majority of the chapter. Oh, and I swear I didn't go looking for it, but I found a typo: first full moon 'there' were together. Hope I didn't upset you, but I thought I should be honested.
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  • From Rabbit84 on September 18, 2012
    I had thought that Tonks had known about them being drackens because she was there when they came home from the hospital and drackens were mentioned because of the artical saying that they couldn't have survived. Did I miss her leaving or misread it?
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