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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - unneeded on September 18, 2012
    this is soooo adorably domestic. I'm happy most of my previous questions got answered in this chappie. I can't wait to see what Gin ends up getting harry. ^^ He's hilarious as a cock tease.

    I can't wait till Remi and Tonks have progeny too. they're really good together. (after all the yaoi lemons it's nice to see a het one in there too.)

    aw, teething baby's must be so hard for parents deal with. No parent worth calling themselves that enjoys seeing their kids suffering. I'm very glad har has an assortment of grandparents experience to draw from. It would make it much harder without them.

    poor sev though, i hope he recovers enough to learn to enjoy life again. nasta's pa has but then Ani had three children from his beloved before she died. Sev will have it much harder but i think knowing that there are people who love him and would miss him if he were gone would help.

    As to the heat probs, it wouldn't surprise me at all if in the future, mio was responsible for helping drackens to have a bit more control of their breeding. probably something around being able to induce a dry heat rather than a fertile one. I imagine that most drackens won't care but in sitches like har where his body is small and needs a rest or that woman who went killed her kids such a thing would be welcomed. I imagine its use would be heavily regulated like the chick dissolver potion since dracken families are encouraged to breed.

    i'm glad they convinced har to stick with his studies too. Leaving yourself many options is never a bad thing.

    looking forward to next time.
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  • From Wyldcat1187 on September 18, 2012
    Great chapter as always. I have a general question that I've been thinking about for a while. I hope you haven't already answered this (I didn't see it mentioned in the author's notes).
    After Harry almost lost 2 of the quints, Amelle stopped being a bitch because she had lost a chick and felt some sort of connection and sympathy for Harry. However, Amelle treats Ashleigh horribly even though Ashleigh actually lost a chick. Is this because Ashleigh also lost the ability to have more chicks? Amelle's Dracken perceives her as a threat because she believes Ashleighs Dracken (out of desperation for a chick) will steal someone else's chick?

    Thanks for another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on September 18, 2012
    what freaked me out was when Harry and Hermoine started talking about Drackens out in the open all i kept thinking about was Reta Skeeter.
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  • From ANON - Paloma on September 18, 2012
    this was a really interesting chapter, specially because of Harry's tantrum. I really think he needed that, because even if he want to stay home to raise his children they will grown up and he will be bored without nothing to do in an empty house...

    baby teething... it's horrible, scary and can be migraine inducing to everyone in the family, not a pretty sign

    now I want to know... what was the squicky part? o.o
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  • From LadyFreak on September 18, 2012
    Amazing chapters and updates. looking forwards to more :)
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  • From ANON - Amanda on September 18, 2012
    Star!
    you are amazing!! ^__^
    I love this chapter! poor Braiden though! :( teething is rough, i would have suggested a frozen teething ring...thats what my mom used on us...or ice cubes...but since he is a dracken would that hurt him?

    haha Calix...so laid back and mellow he doesn't care if he is wet ^^ I can see max doing that...being like blah don't feel like moving ^^.

    I didn't find the squick you talked about on FB so maybe that was good...it means there was nothing too squicky for me? hmmm that may be bad haha.

    Anyways! Thank you for updating! it was a lovely treat to read after a grueling day of classes!
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  • From ANON - CeeCee! on September 18, 2012
    Heeeyy!!! Omigosh I love this fix waaaaay to much, thanks for your updates and I don't think anyone else could have done a better job! What I wanted to as was cooouullddd you pllleeeaaassseee please please write a lemon scene with Myron and Richard (Myron on top of course ;) ) I just love them so much and it's like ahhhh please!! You write so just SPLENDOROUSLY! It's amazing! Keep up the good work Caro, you're a bloody star!! xxxxxxx
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  • From ANON - Wicked on September 18, 2012
    I'm so glad that you've updated and this chapter is brilliant. Sure, I wasn't that fond of the intimacy between Remus and Tonks. I hope you don't mind but I actually skipped a lot of that part. I'm sorry. But other than that I love this chapter.
    I was so happy to finally get to see how Harry reacted to almost killing Sanex. I've been wondering that for quite some time now. So I'm really happy that you had it in here. I'm glad that no one blames Harry for what happened. But out of curiosity, let's say that you had gone with the scaled bit chapter instead and let Harry kill Sanex - what would have happened then? I was trying to think of something, but it all ended with everyone dying...
    I was also wondering if any of the newborns are Drackens? I don't remember if I actually read it or just wished I did.
    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
    Keep up the good work.
    Love// Vicky
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 18, 2012
    I love love love this story!! I am so glad we got a quick update! Keep up the great work!
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  • From NinaSweets on September 18, 2012
    Thank you for responding to my questions! You're so wonderful with that here and on your facebook page, we all love and appreciate it so much :) I was just so curious because though I do write Fanfiction it's nowhere near as detailed or wonderful as yours so I was looking for a few pointers :D I loved this chapter, I love the baby chapters, poor Braiden :( I love how everyone really comes together to help out, it's what I think a family should be like. Can't wait for your update!!
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  • From Lientjuhh on September 18, 2012
    Very nice.. I like it.. Very cute.. Nice drama.. :D
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  • From ANON - DazzlingD on September 17, 2012
    I love that you had some Snape in there. He so needed closure. The time with Nasta and Harry was devine and hot! Thank you so much for the update.
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  • From NinaSweets on September 17, 2012
    Awesome chapter! I love when they're at school! It's so fun! I just wanted to ask a few questions and I was a little to shy to do so on your Facebook page, feel free to answer there or here I've been following like a hawk. I was going through the category here on the site when I found the original story you adopted, I was just wondering how you came about using the idea, I mean the first chapter is fairly similar. How did you decide what to use and what not to? What made you choose Blaise and Draco from the Potterverse? I mean I do love them but the author had planned Snape and Lucius, what made you choose the others? Also, what was your deciding factor on having Snape a Dracken but not one out for Harry? Also how have you individualised an idea not your own? That came out wrong, I mean people do it all the time in Fanfiction taking a world and building off of it, yours is just so unique I was wondering where you got all the inspiration? I'll stop annoying you with the random questions it's just I've read stories people have adopted and you can tell because it's not theirs they struggle a lot with it and it's not good whereas yours is so meticulously detailed I was insanely curious. Thanks for an awesome chapter and I'm excitedly awaiting your update :)
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  • From chrissy on September 16, 2012
    cool update!! look forward to the next one! I hope that Snape is ok soon and finds a new mate!!
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  • From Krucksue on September 15, 2012
    Thank you...great chapter. Love the dynamic between Nasta and Harry.
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