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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - SilverLion on July 14, 2011
    Darn you! Now I want Maxie and Nasta! I will wait and see what you do next. Take your time. RL is such a fucking bitch.
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  • From romanticfae on July 14, 2011
    Maximilius and Nasta
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  • From Ehvie123 on July 13, 2011
    i vote for maxie & nasta
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  • From ANON - Beyondblack on July 13, 2011
    You thought you got rid of me, sorry it's not that easy. I was just waiting until I had something relevant to say.
    I add my vote to Max or Max and Nasta.
    I think you have set up a very interesting situation where Harry's inner Dracken has rejected Draco and have left it open for any of the Draco, Max or Nasta to gain the second mate position.
    I like very much how you are making Draco live in a cupboard, it sets up the next possible Draco-makes-an-ass-of-himself moment. Then have Harry pummel him for a minute before fleeing from the room to someone/s who know his childhood (myself would chose the twins), have that person/s tell Blaise and Draco about how good the room is compared to Harry's old one. It would be interesting the reactions it would provoke, however it is only a possible option from which to choose from.
    Still enjoy your work, please keep it up i wish to stay with this fic till the end.
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  • From ANON - Captain Shanks on July 13, 2011
    Nasta Nasta Nasta!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please pick Nasta or Maxie and Nasta

    Soooo good!!!!!!!! really want to see if Draco gets another chance
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  • From ANON - DarkHearted on July 13, 2011
    this story is awsome and i think Nasta would be the perfect mate 4 Harry...keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Nikki on July 13, 2011
    Booo Draco. I say his mates should be Nasta, Max, Arsenio and Blaise. Draco as well if you have to. Three mates for chicks and two for grounding. One to ground magic and one for emotions. Makes sence to me.
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  • From ANON - anon on July 13, 2011
    if i write max and nasta numerous times will it counts as more than one vote? because really, who doesn't love max and nasta (as harry is seeming to)? it would be cruel to harry not to let him have both...f draco if thats what it takes (or maybe im bluffing ^_^)but in all honesty, he needs them all! he deserves to be loved by so many!
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  • From Ewe on July 13, 2011
    I vote for all three. lol the more the better. those stories are the funniest for poor harry. plus it would be funny to see what the council would do once they see how many mates harry has. Maybe there could be a special reason behind it.
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  • From ANON - Lashay on July 13, 2011
    Hmm... I do like this story, very much in fact. Which almost makes me feel like a child again, because some of their reactions are simply childish in places they shouldn't be. However, some are brilliant. But I caution you, if you want believable characters, do NOT blame too many things on the animal within. Take it from someone who've studied psychology for six years.

    That said, I do love the story. Especially Max, who I put my vote on if it's a remotely serious vote. But I am pretty sure you're going to add Nasta, along with Max. As I saw some of your reviewers had pointed out, it would have been rather pointless to have him come back if he's not going to be one of the mates, not to mention those kisses. Half of the latest chapter would be rather odd if he doesn't get Harry. I don't like original characters, as I'm in the HP-category for a reason, but Max managed to garner my attention. Hmm... He makes for a brilliant character. Use him! (Preferably let Harry do it) Nasta is ok, he was there for Harry, but I personally think it's a bit too obvious. But he's a good character, just not very believable. But I'm sure you can make him work. I still vote Max though.

    Also, what does Harry's mates think of him running of and making out with other mates in their settling periode? Hehe. Use Max!!
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  • From ANON - Kendra on July 13, 2011
    Since you have such a high vote for both I think you should use both. He has a strong attachment to both anyway, it would be wrong to make you chose between them and Harry. They both provide a valuable element to Harry's life.
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  • From ANON - c dickens on July 13, 2011
    Max came back so you simply CANNOT let him have done that in vain! Poor guy had been moping around! And Harry even kissed him! I vote Max, Max, Max.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on July 13, 2011
    Oh I wonder=ed what would happen if somone would be rejected but I hope harry can fix it. More please thank you !
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  • From ANON - DarknessOfNight on July 13, 2011
    Waw, I love this story. I should be sleeping now, but I just couldn't stop reading. Though, I'm missing the smut in the latest chapters. (^.^)

    I'm voting for Nasta. I absolutely loved his comment on Harry dancing naked. And I think his calm and silent nature would benefit the group the most.

    I'm eagerly awaiting next chapter.
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  • From LILMISS on July 13, 2011
    I really like all your OMC's. I don't know how many mates you plan to give Harry, but I could see him with any of them (or all of them). If you plan on only giving him one more mate my vote would still have to be Nasta, because I think he would bring more of a balance to the relationship. I could also see him with Arsenio for that reason as well. I like Maximilius, I just get the impression that he is really close to what Blaise could be as he gets older. He might provide stability, but I have a hard time picturing him as an anchor. Anyway thanks for continuing the story I will be happy with any of the pairings you choose.
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