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Reviews for The Rise of the Drackens

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From Jessica86 on June 01, 2011
    I love this story. It's brilliant. And I must say that you gave me quite the surprise when revealing who the dominant was...I was almost sure that it would be someone more well known. I mean, Blasie is just a minoe character in the books...
    Anyway, I do hope that ypu'll continue on this soon. casue I really can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf03 on June 01, 2011
    Getting better and better... but please add the disclaimer at the top of each chapter so this story does get hidden away from public viewing. Okay, I accept that Severus may not end up one of Harry's mates initially but at least make him a dracken... pretty please with sugar on top.
    For those reviewers indicating flaws that are non-canon in nature, it's your storyline and what direction and how you chose to portray the characters is your decision. We might suggest or desire for certain things to be in place but ultimately it's up to your story weaving skills to pull us all in as we surrender to the enjoyment of a good read. Go with your muse and sorry that your other story currently is suffering while your imagination gives birth to this newest inspiration.

    Please, Please remember to add the disclaimer in any manner you chose so this story doesn't disappear. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - fudge on June 01, 2011
    so happy, a new ch! Great one, I'm really loving this
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  • From ANON - Heartstar on June 01, 2011
    Can I read the original I would love to see both please let me know
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  • From ANON - heartstar on June 01, 2011
    I love this I hope to see more soon! LOL I would love to see how draco fits into this...
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  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2011
    Well damn, i was enjoying that one too. :P
    But sometimes you just need to take the inspiration and run with it, so please, run, be free and create further awesomeness.
    Well, that answered my Q about his friends... though surely the twins wouldn't have abandoned him. (did they live in this?) I'd think they'd be stoked and Charlie would probably be delighted and fascinated. lol
    Does Harry have any allies in Gryffindor?
    I'm with Harry in his worries over his sub nature. He wouldn't take well to his instincts making him all submissive and he'd loath being sub to someone who was cruel.
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  • From AlbusxSeverusxox on June 01, 2011
    I demand more. Right this second! Because I can't wait for another pleasingly long chapter with a bunch of horny dominants scrabbling about, vying for Harry's attention! >=3
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  • From ANON - CHARbones on June 01, 2011
    :O Thank you for the loong chapters. They are quite lovely :D
    I'm glad that dumbledore (so far) appears to want what's best for harry. It's just kind of silly in my opinion when authors feel they should bash him or make him a self serving evil bigot.
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  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2011
    woah, Blaise huh? I would've picked Snape for sure! At any rate, Blaise is going to have a royal bun fight to hold onto Harry.
    So, what will Harry's friends make of this? And I don't know if Harry would be willing to be shared with other males. He hates being special as it is!

    You're right, not much is known about Blaise family. I think they should staay nuetral but be supportive of their son. Being Slytherin I can't see them going for anything other than top quality if they could get it and dispite his shabby treatment by his rellies, Harry is quality plus. Besides, I get the feeling he and Harry are going to have enough issures to deal with.
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  • From ANON - PandaGaara on June 01, 2011
    Aww poor Harry I wonder when he's gonna tell Blaise about his thoughts and feelings. I just have a feeling he's gonna explode. And Draco is so gonna get a shock when he gets his head out of his ass. I can't wait for that to happen. Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - She Who Must Be Obeyed on May 31, 2011
    SOOOO glad that you have adopted this. LOVE Life and Trials so looking forward to how you develop this. :) Oh and btw, love slash and mpreg so please write away!!!!
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  • From Danyealle on May 31, 2011

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you disclaim the fandom itself by NAME, not just the characters. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specificfandom, which thus INCLUDES characters, settings, and etc.


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  • From ObsesiveReader on May 31, 2011
    Blaise's dad should like Harry's spunk while his mother should have problems with his obvious defiance.
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  • From alma on May 30, 2011
    Awesome, for a minute there I thought it was severus after Harry in the forest. As for Blaise's parents, have them love Harry, and malfoys love him too.
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  • From ANON - MaleahLynn on May 30, 2011
    Great Chapter!!! Was surprised when it was Blaise in the Forest. Wasn't quite who I had expected. For your question, I think his parents would be neutral. I like how the Malfoy's were doing whatever they could to get their family through, but I hate that they had to play to the dark side and be so cruel. I think Draco as a lighter/grey character proves much more fun. He can be a more dynamic character if it can be shown that he really just puts on the tough guy mask to protect his family, when really he hates the whole war and thinks its just utter insanity.
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