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Reviews for The Spoils of War

By : tambrathegreat
  • From morningstorm70 on August 21, 2016

    Please update i see it's been awhile i would like to know where the story goes


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  • From Dhalim on November 18, 2011
    Do you mean sadist instead of masochist? Since Snape was getting off on the idea of giving Harry spankings, it would be the former
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  • From ANON - lady_of_clunn on October 24, 2011
    Very exciting! I love when Snape takes care of Harry and now that Harry has turned the tables, I can't wait to see what will happen!

    Brilliant work!
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  • From QueenB on September 28, 2011
    Ch. 2 I'm glad to see that Harry hasn't lost his will to live or his defiance. I also experienced a perverse sense of vindication at how he was able to make Severus Snape flee and all without seeing a word. It takes a good deal to rattle the likes of Snape and I'm wondering how he'll handle being so...unnerved.
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  • From ANON - Cruel_Hero on September 23, 2011
    Hmmn, interesting. Please continue...
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  • From ANON - Lady Zombie on September 22, 2011
    Excellent descriptions! I could easily see the little bothy and the surrounding landscape as well as Dolohov's decapitation. It's interesting that you mentioned how it took several seconds for him to die. Most people assume a quick beheading to be instant death, when in theory, a person may still be conscious until such time as their cerebral spinal fluid and blood drains out of the head completely. Oh well, couldn't have happened to a nicer guy!

    I like how Snape is struggling with the gaps in his memory. It draws the audience in.

    It's sad that he's so starved for affection that he wishes Harry would touch him, even if it's in his sleep.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - nefari on September 02, 2011
    I like this first chapter was I look forward to reading g more.
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  • From ANON - SickPuppy on August 28, 2011
    I'm so glad Jilliane told me (repeatedly) to read this. The start is gripping almost from the very first word, and the images you create of the desolate future are chilling. A superb start - more please!

    SP
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  • From Holly on August 26, 2011
    This is a really good start and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Jilliane on August 26, 2011


    Chapter 1

    Yes, I gave you the challenge, to write a Snarry, and I knew it wouldn't be all hearts and flowers, which is a good thing. I get to red mouse/beta read your chapters first, so, at the risk of sounding sycophantic, I still say nobody writes grim, post apocalypse angst and tragedy like you do, which is also a good thing, and nobody writes as evocatively as you do, which is the best thing. You can always be counted on to be original; I've read of a blind Harry, a crippled Harry, lots of insane Harry's, but I do believe this is the first time I've read of a mute Harry, a definite up on the angst factor, and I do love the angst. And I do hope this challenge does wrest you from the grip of writer's block because I'm dying to read more, and soon.
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  • From TransientTemptation on August 24, 2011
    Very nice, It's definitely got my attention.
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  • From ANON - Lunicorn on August 24, 2011
    Fascinating. By all means, please continue.
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  • From magentah on August 24, 2011
    Oh no! Voiceless Harry is so sad to me, but I'm hooked already anyway. :) Excited to see where this is going.
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