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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Breeding Darkness

By : Danyealle
  • From ANON - adoracorazon on March 10, 2012
    Ive been waiting for this story to be adopted! :)
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  • From ANON - purrfus on March 10, 2012
    I was re-reading the story at ffn, and saw the adoption notice. Decided to come take a look see.

    So far, its interesting to read, and I plan on returning to see where you take this.

    Thanks for giving the story a home.
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  • From ANON - Grinedel on March 10, 2012
    Fuck you Dumbledore you goat whore!
    Thank you for carrying on with this story! It's brilliant!
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  • From Leania07 on March 10, 2012
    Oh schemes galore! I enjoyed this chapter, and seems to flow along nicely, no noticeable differences between the 'old' and the 'new' parts of the story. Nicely done, and I await the next chapter.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - yngoldfogee on March 08, 2012
    I love this story and was disappointed to see the original author couldn't continue it so you can imagine how delighted I was to learn it had been picked up by others - thank you! I know it's only your first chapter but I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to your future updates.
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  • From tattooedrory on February 22, 2012
    Love the story your chapter was good but you focused alot on the ring when harrp already took care of it. Other then that keep it
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  • From ANON - Rosencrantz on February 21, 2012
    Me again ... Just realized that they don't tag chapters for the reviews like other sites ... so that last review was actually for Page 2 Chapter 1.

    Ciao.
    ~Rosencrantz~
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  • From ANON - Rosencrantz on February 21, 2012
    I was so unbelievable thrilled when you adopted Aya's story. I can't wait to see where you end up taking it. And now that I've said my good things I have to point of the silly annoying thing before it drives me mental ... I may be just a little OCD, sorry :( ... But anyway, you've done it a couple times so my brain says that I'm supposed mention that you wanted the word devour, not devourer ... One obviously would be the verb and the other the noun and I'm done being picky now I promise.

    Till next time ...
    ~Rosencrantz~
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  • From ANON - Michaelle on February 17, 2012
    I love what you are doing and I am loving this story...Please please please e-mail me updates if you can, I would really love to see the outcome of this story.
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  • From ANON - Aelirenn on February 14, 2012
    Kudos to you for taking on this project. It's nice to see someone announce they are going to continue the story and then actually follow through. :) It looks like a good start so far. The only thing that jumped out at me as needing "fixed" is in the latter half of the chapter, Severus keeps referring to Evans in his thoughts, like Evans is his last name. His fake name is Evan Harris, so it seems to me that Severus would have been thinking of him as "Harris" instead. I might have misread that though, so please don't be offended if I misunderstood. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Felawred on February 13, 2012
    You've made a good start on your own, can't wait to see how it goes. Poor Severus lol Ah who am I kidding I loved that part lol.

    Is there a way to add an author alert at all?
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  • From Hollzhatter on February 12, 2012
    I am so glad you have picked this story up! I loved it very much when it was on FFnet. I understand that the writing styles, and opions opr point of veiws of the characters and such will be different than the original authors, but so far I am impressed and relieved that a talented author has picked up this interesting story. So far you have done extremely well, and I am looking forward to finding out where you will take this story. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Raven on February 12, 2012
    i have just finished reading all of this darling story. i look forward to where you go with this. one thing that has botered me is that we never knew what Tom bought from the sex shop. While it could have been just more lube i allways thought that this could have been made into one smashing good scene. Wile i might become sad that your chapters are not as longs as the previous authors i am most happy that you will continue with this story i have grown to love and adore. as always looking forward to more.
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  • From Leania07 on February 08, 2012
    Interesting so far. Its taken me a few days, because I had to read the first one, and so far the writing style is close enough to not notice a major switch between chapters 25 and 26. I will say I had a good laugh at poor Sev's reaction to seeing Vold and 'Evan' kiss. I still can't stop chuckling (added with the fact my mind creates images from what I read like I'm watching a movie, its even more priceless). I am anxious to see 1.) who Hermionie is related to, 2.) the reaction when the D'Eaters find out that 'Evan Harris' is Harry Potter, 3.) Draco's reaction to Harry's relationship, and 4.) this conversation between Barty and Harry. I anxiously await the next chapter ^.^

    Leania
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  • From ANON - ivy raven on February 08, 2012
    Hey! I`m really glad someone has finally taken up this story! And while you have been quite clear about not being Aya I feel compeled to point out some things you could change to be consistant with her work. First of all, Voldemort doesn`t ramble, nor does he always go into great detail when explaining his plans, nor does he think aloud. He hates not being the number one in anything yet during his and Harry`s talk he said "you`re right", "that`s a good idea" and so on, at least half a dozen times. And when Harry says
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