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Reviews for The Forbidden Ship

By : Nerys
  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2014
    I could see chapter 9 being a longer story.
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  • From ANON - cosettex on June 02, 2012
    " As she walked up the deserted stairs, she slowly began to realise isolating herself might not have been a good idea, for that pervasive darkness she'd sensed before seemed to grow and solidify around her, cocooning her in." - horror, i literally felt the chill.
    Great job with conveying the mood and Hermione's emotions... soy sauce huh? interesting. Wonder if there's a larger metaphor at stake... or maybe I'm just hungry : /
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  • From ANON - cosettex on June 02, 2012
    damn 'red' was poignant! loves it :D off to read more...
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  • From Till on April 12, 2012
    Know^
    Sorry. Stupid phone.
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  • From Till on April 12, 2012
    Nerys, I've always been a fan of yours. I've read all your stuff and favorited you on fanfiction.net. I actually wanted to email you this but sadly you've hidden it from crazy stalkers like myself. In these drabbles, the one where Voldemort kidnaps Hermione after Harry killed Bellatrix.. I saw so much potential. I had a request if you could make that into a story and if not, may I use it later (you with all the credit) if I ever write a fanfiction. Which more likely than not I never will. It is something about that scene... I love you as a writer and I knife you're busy with The Prisoner and the story with the Serpent In Red, but I would love it.
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  • From sarahdaye9 on March 29, 2012
    Holy Hell, I love these stories!
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  • From AlasseaM on March 26, 2012
    This makes me think how cool it would've been if Jo had made a series from Voldemort's POV... *sigh*

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  • From ANON - Miya, who apperantly isn't logged in. on March 23, 2012
    At Yoga Mat

    That was probably the most gruesome smut I've read. But it was smut so YAY! Liked it a lot :) Got me thinking about Dexter, actually! Bloody brilliant, if you pardon the pun ;) Especially with the Dark Mark being inside her. *Miya thinking of several ways it could have got inside her*, that was just neat.
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  • From Shan84 on March 22, 2012
    Ooooh it's Shannie's first official review with her AFF account...

    I loved all the chapters! wonderful, wonderful!

    Okay, so we're here to comment on smut because it's AFF. I loved the Yoga Mat one shot. Brilliant. You managed to give me a lot of information despite the fact that it was technically a one-shot. For example, why Hermione was there, Voldemort's possible motives for seducing her. It was dark too and Voldemort was, as one can expect with a Nerys fic, well in character.

    The smut was well written, with the right amounts of build up, tension and then the act itself *drools*. I love an evil Dark Lord...

    Oh and can I just say I adored your "Exam" one shot as well! the snark between Tom and Hermione was so well done. It had me giggling the whole way through.
    Thanks for cheering up a very sleep deprived person with these XD

    xo Shan
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  • From AlasseaM on March 22, 2012
    Oooh *drool* That was so, so, so good! :D SMUT!!!!!!!!!!!
    I don't know what I expected but this is definitely better that whatever it was (that didn't make sense, did it?).
    Let me just marry him, dammit!
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  • From ANON - Mekom on March 17, 2012
    Oooh. I especially liked this drabble. I can't wait till your next post.
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