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Reviews for Harry Potter: Made For Each Other

By : IBegToDreamAndDiffer
  • From Calmzone1 on March 30, 2016
    wonderful progression on the feelings of everyone. I hope you have the chance to finish one day
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  • From ANON - e.pressnell on February 20, 2014
    wow i love this fanfic !!!
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  • From ANON - Takamiko22 on July 20, 2013
    Oh my goodness this story is amazing. I am so excited about the next chapters.
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  • From devilsmomma on December 24, 2012
    Love the story so far. I always love a good Harry/Lucius story. Please let me know when you update at onecent1960@hotmail.com
    Thanks
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  • From ANON - taran on December 12, 2012
    I love this story soooooooo much. I hope that you'll update more soon

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  • From ANON - Alisa on July 08, 2012
    Please update soon! This is a very good story. I'm surprised anyone would review it with complaints about OOC behavior when, Lucius' original character wouldn't have loved Harry anyway--like, the whole premise is generally OOC, so that's kind of stupid to expect Lucius to be the same. Also, I find your writing style nicely refined. Even though I can tell you continue to work on your craft, your skill is already evident. I do wish you would put effort into making sure you use the correct form of "than" vs "then" as that is a particular error that I see often. While there are other spelling errors, I understand you're not typing this in a format that would alert you, so I don't feel that it takes away from the story that much. If you need a beta, you need only ask. I'm very pleased with this fic and I can't wait for an update. :]
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  • From Anonymous_Fan on June 25, 2012
    Hi i just wanted to let you know I am so happy that this story has made its way here from FF.Net. I remember finding it a little while there and it is my absolute favourite Harry/Lucius pairing story that I have read so far (and I have read quite alot >.
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  • From bloodshound on June 22, 2012
    *hands out ear plus. Okay brace yourselves. *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! They're just so, sooooo, sooooooooooooo gushingly CUUUUUUUUUUTEEEE!
    okay, done with the fangirl ish squeals now. It's just, they're adorable together, no really they are.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on June 21, 2012
    I so can't wait for the next chapter. Their first date was so cute! Great story.
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  • From bloodshound on June 12, 2012
    yay, new chappie. luc distraction technique... fail. :P
    Dear lil Gin Gin really needs to get a clue and har needs to control his rage... though i imagiine that'll come with practice.
    Heh, nice one har. Way to tame that veela.
    I spotted a typo or two vial (lab use glassware) for vile (horrible, nasty in the extreme, eeeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvil) Watch that, neh?
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  • From bloodshound on June 05, 2012
    gah,quit updateing so fast... i can't keep up in my reviews. :P
    anyway... i was going to make a comment on the typos but then i read you're doing this on word pad. Good grief. I don't think I'd have patience, no joke. Is there no where you could download word from?
    so far I'm enjoying this a great deal. Har and Luc are rather cute together.
    I'll review as i can. ^^
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  • From Usagi on June 04, 2012
    So an interesting story so far, though a few problems. You use 'single' quotations for dialouge rather than "double" which is incorrect and gives the impression that the character is thinking rather than speaking. Also this sentence:
    'No,' Lucius said in a hoarse voice. 'No, please, you don't deserve me.'
    I think you mixed it up. You most likely meant "No, please, I don't deserve you." as what you put implies that Lucius thinks he's too good for Harry instead of the other way around.
    'He managed to pull Lucius into his arms, the man far to thin and weak' is incorrect. The 'to' should be 'too'.
    I also find Harry's explination of the events that lead him there, too indepth and a bit...corny. It seems like he should keep it more simple and to the point rather than giving unneeded details.
    Other than that, pretty good so far.
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  • From Misae on June 04, 2012
    Hi.
    Just wanted to drop by and say that I really like your story.
    You have a good story-line and a really nice update-rate... ^^
    Only one little thing is bugging me: The thing about owls (all raptors actually) is that the female is always a little bigger than the male (hence the reason it is rather expense to figure out whether you got a male or female, if you only have the one bird or don't want to wait until it lays eggs before you name it), that's why the male is called a tercel in ornithology.
    Keep up the good work,
    M
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  • From PeriLover on June 02, 2012
    So far, so good. I've bookmarked this story so I can keep up with it!
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  • From djaddict on June 01, 2012
    I really love this so far!

    More pretty please?
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