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By : ssdawn
  • From ANON - nari-chan on March 25, 2015
    i wonder what our stalker will do next? hmm what kind of message will he send now? why is he trying to break them apart? does he want one of them for them selves?
    i love them as a couple and i cant wait to read what happened to them.
    im happy to know that you will not give up this story im kind of addicted to it lol do i need my fix
    please update again soon
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  • From ANON - starr on March 24, 2015
    you have me guessing as to who this person is!!! Draco ? Nott?another Slyerrin well you'll say it soon. harry all mad cause hermione won't tell him what is up with her !!!!!! so good Thanks and see you soon !!!!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on March 20, 2015
    i didn't want this story to end! im addicted to this story and need more i love it!!! please add more soon i cant wait to read what will happen next!!!!!!!
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  • From JaxPendragon on March 19, 2015
    I am liking the way this story is beginning. I like to think that if
    f JKR had continued the series instead of doing an epilogue, she would write Ron as a complete git.
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  • From ANON - starr on March 17, 2015
    HAVE YOU ABONDED THIS PLEASE DON'T SAY IT NEED UPDATES SO GOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From FieryPhoenix on February 20, 2015
    More!! Keep writing please! Enjoying the build-up to what I'm sure will be a passionate coming together finally.
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  • From ANON - staar on December 27, 2014
    OMG so good !!!!!! MORE !!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mari on February 12, 2014
    More! Need more!
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  • From StephanieO on February 11, 2014
    I love the moniker "The Great Bat and his Princess"!! So fitting for Snape & Hermione! ;) Can't even begin to fathom how they are going to make it through the year without being discovered alone together, however. I have a feeling McGonagall will dismiss him first and ask questions later if she even glimpses anything that is remotely inappropriate (as she rightly should).
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2014
    You have a good base to write a great fanfic. But your story line is all over the place. One min his flirting the next insulting. One minute she's flirting then she's crying. It kinda takes a toll on the story. Get a beta and this will help to make your story so much more awesome. Keep up the good work! This is great for your first fanfic.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 10, 2014
    Duh da duuuuuunnnnnn. Loved that ending. lol Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 15, 2014
    The normally stoic Severus Snape panicking... Loved it! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 03, 2014
    That poor man has such FIM syndrome... Foot in Mouth. lol I hope she learns quickly to navigate the raging waters that are his emotions. And, I want Draco and his cronies punished!!! Thank you, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Kazzi on January 02, 2014
    Hullo my dear,

    A quick critique and praise session. I love the style in which you've written this. The point of view changes, but you don't feel the need to label it, ( thank you for that). I have a minor pet peeve with a dual point of view being labeled, I prefer to think I'm smart enough to figure it out. I enjoy the fact that you keep your readers guessing, never quite sure which twist will appear next. You've kept your characters "in character" to a point, but you've allowed enough leeway that they can explore new facets of their personalities as they develop in your writing. I love that you're putting detail in, not enough to bore, but in this area I think you could safely expand a bit more without causing boredom. A few more descriptions. You've had some lovely ones so far, just maybe add a bit as you go. That's my two cents for all the value it has! Well done my dear. That is all I can say. I have enjoy your plot much more than many others I've read, and a couple I've written. (Shame on me!)


    Best of luck,
    Kazzi
    the witch with fangs

    P.N. Post again soon
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  • From IrishChic20 on December 31, 2013
    Just wanted to encourage you to keep writing this. I've only just found it but I can see you first posted in 2012. I'm hoping your muse co-operates for 2014 because I can't wait to read more! Gail x
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