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Reviews for At First Glance

By : mysticxox
  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2013
    ron should have kill him, he deserve to die, and hermoine a cheating bitch,
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  • From ANON - SL on December 29, 2012
    It's an enjoyable tale!
    I'm a bit shocked Hermione went as dark as murder.
    But given that, will there be a sequel so that we know how dark do Hermione / Lucius / Cassandra end up?

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  • From TheMaidenoftheLake on October 10, 2012
    Finally, Ron idiot got what he deserved. But their children and what will happen to them, do not tell me stay with that asshole!
    I'm only in chapter 6, and that I am with two days off, I will hurry to read it and tell you more.
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  • From TheMaidenoftheLake on September 30, 2012
    Sorry to be so annoying, but I've just started to read your crazy, cunning, fic, and I'm angry.
    Because you already finished and I can not suggest anything.
    I would have loved to stay burrow near a coast to have it disappear like a tsunami and kill all the Weasleys, poor things, as long as procreative, and with a false spirit of family. It's what they use only their "high" I.Q.
    No blame on anything to Hermione, but never should have married the asshole of Ron, anyone is better than him. Lucius, had to be rid of Narcissa to marry Hermione before she did with Ron. Is your fic and you can imagine what you want but I think wanting to consider the alliance of marriage that exists in these stories and does not allow you to be unfaithful without having sex with another you burn a little each time, so your husband or wife realize that you're unfaithful.You say that you review all the comments. I say this not to make you angry, but to be more consistent, yours writes, and have a privileged fantastic imagination.
    For college I'm doing a study of couples in the canons of fiction should never be. And I have the head, made ​​a bomb, full of sex and other little things I never would have thought.
    I would like to suggest a fic? I can do it? where?
    I
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  • From DB1 on September 27, 2012
    Wow great story!!! Hopefully one day you will decide to write a sequel! Really enjoyed this story!

    DB
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  • From demonsangel on September 26, 2012
    *sniffs* So sweet. Sad it's over. It was a great story though! Love the name for the baby.
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  • From demonsangel on September 26, 2012
    Interesting chapter. I don't blame Hermione for retaliating and oddly enough, I find it fairly justified. If one simply curcio was enough to make the woman behave, she would have never let Harry live as I have no doubt Voldemort cursed her as well. I think she would have just kept trying.
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  • From kadajclone on September 26, 2012
    hmmm....well honestly not sure where to go with this.....it felt kind of rushed and it may have been better to have taken the break from writing then come back to finish it up. And again i get it, the bond, mucho grande powerful love stuff, but holy batarangs in the skull...torture and murder then cover up. I have said it before and i will say it again this is a very good story but this chapter really left a feeling of moral myopia/dissonance/karma houdini in its wake. I am a very honest reviewer and believe me when I say you have a lot of talent but this chapter really felt like a slapped together at the last minute kind of thing and makes the bond seem more like a much more insidious thing than what it was originally presented as and brings whoever is bonded darker natures out and lack of empathy or restraint for others outside of it. And I understand that someone like me coming on to ADULTfanfiction.net and talking about morals and whatnot is out of the norm and kind of frowned upon and other people who review may say somthing like

    "nice hermione smoked that bitch"

    or

    "lol narcissa should have left hermione's man alone, now look what what happened to her"

    or

    "aww glad it turned out good for them at the end"

    but again thats just how i roll and i hope that your not offended by any of this as i intend on reading this story to however far you take it.
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on September 24, 2012
    Oh no, i bet Narcissa is livid when she finds out about the baby. I hope that Hermione kicks her butt! lol
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  • From kadajclone on September 19, 2012
    hmm can't say i didn't see this coming but it will be interesting to see the reactions of everyone else, especially Hermione's kids. Will there be any concern that she will love the child she has with Lucius over the one's she's had with Ron due to the bond ?
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  • From DB1 on September 19, 2012
    @20 lol lucky hermione and a pretty piece of jewelery with magic powers to keep her safe!!!

    DB
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  • From LadyOfTheNight on September 19, 2012
    Oh my! I can't wait to see what happens once Narcissa tries to take her revenge!

    I am on the edge of my seat here!

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  • From kadajclone on September 17, 2012
    very nice although i am interested on how Ron will react to Hugo and Rose spending time with Scorpius without his knowledge, since it wasn't really Harry's call to let Hugo be around Scorpius. A little bit more conflict with Rose would have been nice since it would have gone in hand with Narcissus plotting but i suppose this is as peaceful a resolution as could be reached. very well done.
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  • From ANON - LittleLotte on September 13, 2012
    thanks for the update! I am glad Lucius found her!
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  • From DB1 on September 12, 2012
    @17 great chapter update soon

    DB
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